It's a cute little story. I love it. I'm glad I finally got the chance to read it.Author's Response: There's gonna be a little epilogue, but I'm glad you've enjoyed the story. Thanks!
~Meg Report Review
Oh oh oh. Cliffy. But a good one! Ginny's back at Hogwarts! Is it permenant? Report Review
Love it love it LOVE IT! Report Review
Hmmm, nice letter. And in a ps form. LOL Report Review
Interesting. Ok, no, it is AWESOME! just check for grammer errors.
Antic should be antiqueAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'll fix that problem as soon as i can! Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
Lol! Ok, yeah, this chapter was funny. And exteremly good. Just check for a few grammer errors Report Review
Oh! Yes! I love it!! ♥♥♥ Report Review
OoOoO! I like it. Can wait to read on Report Review
Hello, Judi_Malfoy here with your review.
Ok, so it was a short chapter, but it was the first chapter so that can slide.
Secondly, this is just me wondering...but why did you space it so much.
Thirdly, read over and you'll find some grammar errors. Nothing really big, but you'll see them.
And finally, my actual review:
Ok, so it was good. It was a bit fast paced though and some parts left me confused. But I am hooked. I'll be waiting for chapter two.Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I am looking for a beta so i know there are errors and i plan to fix them as soon as possible. I'll get chapter to updated hopefully soon. As to spacing i was not aware thank you for pointing it out, i'll revise that. Report Review
I liked it. I really did. It was informative and touching. Snape is living in regret and remorse for what he did to Lily,
This is very well written. Though if you go back and read it over, you might find just a few errors.Author's Response: Thank you for the review.
I'll have to edit it yet again I suppose :)
-Lily Report Review
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