this was so delicatly written and was so believable that it made me cry really hard. you captured sirius' mood and thoughts so well and your writing is excellent :)

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wow this is such a good story i really love it! it's well written and very funny :)
my favorite part was when they were all screaming their full names in block capitals, that made me laugh so much ;)
i can't wait to read more!

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wow a really great beggining, i'm loving it! the writing was really good and i look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

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i'm really enjoying this story! it's very well written and the characterisation is very good :) i look forward to reading more
p.s. good luck with nationals :)

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wow this was very powerfully written and sensitively dealt with. your writing style is excellent. i really enjoyed it and i think that you captured sirius' mood very well.
well done :)

Author's Response: Thank you =]
I'm really glad you liked and thank you for the lovely compliments. Made me smile!
Thanks for taking the time to read and review, I really appreciate it
spam_up_sam

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this is really good- it made me laugh a lot :)
it was an interesting first chapter and i can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I have part of a chapter already written on the computer (: x

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this is so sweet and it fits perfectly with the song :)
very well written, i really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: thank you!!

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OMG that's so sad! i can't decide whom i feel most sorry for: sirius or nellie?
this story is my absolute favorite!
i love it- it has the perfect amount of drama and humour :)
can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Hello :) I know, it was quite a sad ending, but better for the story, it can't be that easy ;)
I'm so glad you like this story, it means a lot to me.
Thanks! I try to make the balance just right.

Thanks for the review and I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters of the story :)
xxx

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this story is AMAZING! seroiusly- i love it, it makes me laugh all the time and Nellie is so well written and a believable character- even though she's a bit mad ;)
i can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: Really? You think so? That makes me super happy! I'm so glad it makes you laugh, that was my aim ;) And I'm so glad you like Nellie, I adore her too. And yes, she may just be a tiny bit mad ;) Thanks for the review and I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters.

xxx

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this chapter was sooo funny- i loved the line 'you just had to wear that tight dress and those devil heels!' that made me laugh so hard!
i can't wait to read what happens next :)

Author's Response: I literally just shouted out 'YAY!' when I saw this review. Yay for 70th review woop woop.
I loved that line, especially as it was from an outsider's point of view.
Thanks muchly for the reviews :)
Emily xx

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ahh this was so sweet- i really enjoyed it. the ending inparticular made me smile a lot- i look forward to reading the sequal :)

Author's Response: 'sweet' is definitely the approach i was going for with this story - so phew! i'm really glad you liked this story, it's perhaps my most popular one to date, so thank you for adding to that!

thanks for stopping by and reading two of my stories, the reviews are much appreciated! ^^

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this is very funny and really well written, it think that you have captured the mood of their marraige very well :)
p.s. i love 'my family' too!

Author's Response: awh, thanks, i'm really glad you liked it so far! i put special effort into this story because it means i get to be Astoria, and Astoria is married to Draco (i love him. no, i LOVE him.) their marriage is just so easy to write but complex to think about; it's fun to write, so i'm glad you think it's fun to read too!

OH LORD. 'My Family' is hilarious. Ben & Susan's marriage is a little similar to how i imagine Draco and Astoria.

you have great taste in TV. and in fanfics ;)

aha, just kidding, but thank you for leaving me such a lovely review! ^^

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the ending was so funny- i laughted so hard!
remus seems a lot bitchier in this one than usual- often he's quite docile. but i think that it makes it funnier :)
i can't wait to read more!

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i like how you have included some lyrics at the end of every chapter.
this story is very well written and very funny- i am really enjoying it!
well done :)

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this story is really good and i'm really enjoying it!
the description of the marauders in their first year is so cute- they are adorable!
i can't wait to read more :)

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yay i was so excited when this chapter came out- i love this story and the chapter was really funny :)
can't wait for more!

Author's Response: thank you dearest, you are too kind!!

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this made me and my sister laugh soo hard- it was hilarious!!!
i seriously can't wait for the next chapter to be updated!!

Author's Response: Yay for laughter!
I tend to read fanfictions with my sister but she never laughs as hard as me paha - I'm so happy that I made two people laugh woop!
I'm not sure when the next chapter will be updated, probably after my exams in about a month. I was meant to have given up my laptop but couldn't resist a quick look at my fanfictions ;)
Thanks for the review :D They really make me smile !
Emily xx

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wow!!! this story made me laugh so much- and its so original! george reminds me of me a little bit ;)
i'm really enjoying it and i can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: It does make me laugh quite a bit too ;)
George reminds me of myself too! I think that's a good thing aha ;)
I'm really glad you're enjoying it, I really love this story so I love to hear people are liking it
Thanks for the review :)
Emily x


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i really enjoyed this chapter. it was very well written and it was interesting to have it from Remus' point of view rather than just james'
i can't wait to hear more :)

Author's Response: Oh, you're in for a bumpy ride... every chapter will have a different point of view ;) hahaha. I'm glad you liked Remus Lupins POV! I think I did a good job, I'm quite proud of myself :D thanks for the great review!

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haha this chapter made me laugh so much :)
very good writing! well done :)

Author's Response: thank youu :)

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this is really funny and i am thoroughly enjoying it. i don't think it matters that the chapters are short becaue to me the writing flows better then :)
anyway, great story!

Author's Response: thanks! i'm glad to hear it! :)

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haha this was very funny and i can't wait to read the rest! my favorite line was "your mum's rubbish!" that was really funny :) great writing well done!

Author's Response: Haha thank you :)

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i really enjoyed this story- i read it all in one day lol
the ending was very sweet although it did leave a few threads hanging as in how sirius recovered from mia's rejection etc, but other than that it was a very well written story.
well done :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I just didn't care that much about Sirius to be honest :) Thank you for all your lovely reviews! I favourited you as an author, I really appreciate you taking the time to review :)

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forget what i said in my last chapter- this is my favorite chapter by FAR!!! it's so sweet, i absolutly love James he is adorable! and he and lily are the cutest couple!
this is such a great story :)

Author's Response: Aww thank you very much that's so nice too hear :)

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ahh this chapter is my favorite, it was so sweet and funny, i absolutely love it!

Author's Response: Thank you! It's one of my favourites, too.

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