best. kiss. scene. ever!
Please update soon! I'm seriously hooked. Report Review
I love your story! I just read everything in one night and I really like where the story is going :) I like the Summer's personality is constant, a lot of authors change their characters' personality throughout the story and I really enjoy the consistency you have kept with all of your characters. Being the grammar freak that I am, I just wanted to point out you have a couple of spelling errors such as spelling ''definately'' instead of ''definitely'' reallyno not important, but going back and editing some of the chapters will make it even better! Also, cows only have one stomach - not two ;) Just thought I would let you know aha, they have one stomach with four digestive compartments, just a lil fun fact! Anyways, please do not abandon this story as it is amazeballs! xxAuthor's Response: aww, thank you! everything in one night? good grief, you must be either a very fast reader or very lovely to me and have spent like... the whole day reading. wowsa. dedication, my little pally wally. i feel like summer's personality has gotten more sarcastic and closed off throughout the story, but yes, i have tried to keep her pretty much the same so thank you for picking up on that :D oh, i know how awful the grammar and punctuation is for about the first fifteen chapters of this story. i will go back and edit them all properly now it's the summer, i promise. I HATE THAT WORD. i can never spel it. i never ever use it in school because i just cannot get the spelling into my head. blargh. seriously? it seems that fact website i went on lied to me... right. i'm annoyed now. but thank you for telling me :D and thank you for such a lovely review!
ellie :) xx Report Review
this was quite an interesting story, pretty well written :)
just wanted to point out that you've written Victorie when it's Victoire and Griffindor instead of Gryffindor :)Author's Response: Thank you so much, I realised this and will get around to fixing thay. Glad you liked it. Report Review
ah i love this chapter! you're dialogue is so natural and your interactions between the marauders makes me laugh. i also love the fact that you haven't eradicated peter from the story, when people do that i'm like "peter is a marauder too!"Author's Response: Thank you so much! Peter is definitely an important part in this series. Though this isn't really his part of the story, the sequel is his time to shine (in a manner of speaking). Thanks for reading :) Report Review
this had me cracking up laughing the whole time, I loved it! Report Review
oh my gosh, i love this chapter!
i'm seriously so excited for the next one to come out, i've been waiting for the sequel for so long and actually screamed when i saw that you had posted the first chapter.
love your writing, it's brilliant :) Report Review
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