Finally! waited months ! :P loved the chapter! cant wait for the ryan/fred romance to develop further.

fav parts

“Where? Into the water? Sure.”

And Ryan had a baby in her. So she needed an elevator. At the very least escalator. Those Muggles were onto something.

Author's Response: So glad you're liking it! These chapters have been great to write. I love the Fred/Ryan scenes. They have so much tension.

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love it so far :) amazing! i love james and avery to bits but maybe introduce a new girl? just to add a little new romance? :) 10/10

Author's Response: I don't do love triangles. Then people will start making Team Other Girl shirts, haha. But to be honest, do you think James would have eyes for someone else? I mean, he may think they're pretty, but James isn't the kind of guy to really have interest in anyone else. Sure, it would add conflict, but James would never do it.

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I also kind of remember Bink proposing to his glass of vodka.

At least he named me the best man. Take that, Freddie.

Author's Response: That is one of my FAVORITE lines. I added that in during a reread, giggling the entire time. Thank you!

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Lion king style - Epic.

Author's Response: It's a thing now. Right? Right? Echo?

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George is the best! bar none.

So much love!

Author's Response: I'm a big, big fan :) Thank you so much!

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FAV PARTS, ABSO BRILLO:

Albus was going to kill me for knocking her up. Rose was going to hug me.


Shit! What if she was reading my thoughts?

Chicken tortilla.

Spicy mushroom wrap.

Was I hungry?

I needed to think about something other than her eyes or her face or her body.

I was NOT thinking about Ryan’s body.

She was a Quidditch player, though. So how could I not?

This was not boding well.

She was still staring at me.

Great. Now she knew.

Can’t you trade or something? Here’s an idea. Get Molly in trouble and then they’ll make someone else Head Girl so you can have her back. My ideas are the best. If you need evidence to plant I know a guy.

Seriously, what’s wrong? You’re concerning me now. Don’t make me tell your mum. I will. And then she’ll give me that ‘Freddie’s a teenager’ look and ignore it.

Tell James if it’s serious. Mostly because I can crack James so easy.

I love george!

Author's Response: George is an absolute riot. He is one of my favorite characters to write. Yet another reason I started Heroes, the George/Angelina story based on how they met in Hormones, actually. I hope you can check it out if you have time. It's going to be 5 chapters total I think. Thanks!

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I needed a pygmy puff.

adorableness,

BTQC's Jame's Victoria, fond memories

Author's Response: You and me both. I miss Victoria. More Victoria! I VOTE TORY.

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fav parts:


During Herbology third year she viciously attacked a plant for looking at her wrong. It then spit pus all over her. Then she hexed it into mush. Professor Longbottom damn near sobbed.

Mum was going to decapitate me.

Dad was going to have another sodding fit.

And Grandmum was going to disown me for life.


Freddie and Ryan + baby i love that!

Author's Response: Haha! Thank you! They are such a dynamic couple. Never a boring moment, actually.

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You hold his hands. I’ll do the smacking. Unless he’s underage, then the other way around and I’ll deny everything. - loved that part heheeh george

Author's Response: George absolutely cracks me up. Everyone should be able to tell from my stories who my favorite characters are. In order, even.

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aw :)

Ryan or Annie? both are cute :)

Author's Response: Both are definitely adorable. I hope you like the rest of the story!

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i love it so far :) rose as captain tho? interesting, but works :)

Author's Response: What do you mean? Do you not think Rose is captain material? I figured since she's next gen and not much/anything is written about her, that she could definitely have Ron's Quidditch streak, as well as the rest in her Weasley blood. I hope you enjoy the rest! Thanks for the review!

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She refused to give me an eye patch too. - cutness

WITH POWER - epic

letter - tears

Author's Response: Hahaha! That "With Power" part was probably one of my favorite parts. I think I had way too much coffee when I was writing it because I was laughing like a crazy person the whole time. Thanks so much for the review!

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Shes negative 7, get it right, best part :)

Author's Response: So, so ridiculous. Yet so funny.

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bink and rose are cute

Author's Response: I think so too :) They both have the same snark. Thanks for the review!

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FINALLY!!! :) waited so long, but was worth the wait :) "Have you managed to convince yourself that you don’t want me yet?" loved that part. The part of the twins were so sad and cute almost made me tear :) 10/10

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Awww albus, that was cute

Author's Response: I just want to snuggle him forever. Is that too much to ask?

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Amazing! I love rodolphus,cant find any decent rodolphus stories, AMAZING

Author's Response: Thanks! I love Rodolphus too - he seems to be somewhat neglected in fanfiction :(

Thanks for the review!
Aph xx

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I like and avery and everything but she messed up, i hope James gets to string her a long for a bit :) hehe but still love it. 10/10

Author's Response: She did mess up. Then again, so did James. They both messed up, which is my favorite part. Thank you so much!

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See, this is what happens when a mental family marries into a sinister one; they breed criminally insane children.

Best part.

AMAZING STORY!

Has been amazing following and reading you!

an aiden story maybe? loved the epilogue

AWESOME

LOVe

10+/10

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“Can I kiss you now then?” Scorpius asks.

“I...yes, I suppose so.”

OMG SO FREAKING CUTEEE! cute cute cute cute cute cute!! happiness! SO CUTE!

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didnt get till way later it was in freds pov :P

Author's Response: Aw, the PoVs change a lot per section, though there's generally not too huge of a difference in narrative voice. I usually just express the thoughts of the character in question, like the whole Ringleward part is Fred's thoughts.

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Hilarious, bit sad James isnt introduced personally. always my fav 2nd generation character

Author's Response: Thanks :D James makes a cameo later. He's in the hearts of the cast~

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LOved it!

Awww regulus!

please fill us about lucius and bella?

Author's Response: Thanks! Aww Reg I know, right? lol don't worry Lucius and Bella are not lost forever, I could never do that =p

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i didint like avery in this one. however another disguise, nice!

Author's Response: I'm sorry that you didnt like Avery in this chapter. Emotions are taking their toll on her. Thanks for the review!

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Awesome! but please tell me they get together! please.

no way I can satisfy everybody with the ending" that worries me

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