{reviewid: 2636907, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
1st January 2012:
great story keep the updates coming, very interested to see Harry in class with his dad
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. The first class should be very interesting.
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{reviewid: 2436780, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
18th November 2010:
Right away i though you were talking about the code not their relationship so i wasn't surprised. Great chapter and i wonder how the team will react to the change.
Author's Response: I'm glad you knew right away :) You weren't surprised at all, haha. Thanks and it should definitely be a roller coaster when the teamies find out!
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{reviewid: 2431543, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
4th November 2010:
you really are snapes girl arent you ;)
Author's Response: Always. Sev rules! :D
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{reviewid: 2429658, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
30th October 2010:
I have been married for over two years and every now and then me and my wife argue like that. It is just part of marriage. Great story, keep it coming. Two thumbs up.
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{reviewid: 2427315, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
24th October 2010:
epilogue is already that close. great story and nice chapter
Author's Response: I know! It's kind of crazy.
Well, I am so glad you reviewed. Thanks!
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{reviewid: 2423350, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
13th October 2010:
wow. that was a very passionate dance. i would have left them alone on the dance floor to. i usually don't read one-shots but i am glad i did on this occasion. great job.
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{reviewid: 2423052, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
12th October 2010:
Great story. One of the first I have read placing Cho in a bad light but it worked for your story. I feel bad for Neville after all he was under the influence of the Imperious Curse. I'm off topic just wanted to say good story and keep writing.
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{reviewid: 2422541, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
11th October 2010:
i think you could get this story going for at least another 28 chapters without getting 'tiring with the continuity'
Author's Response: haha I'm glad thats what you said. :P thanks for the review. G
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{reviewid: 2422111, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
10th October 2010:
I just wanted to say that your stories were some of te best on the site. In the beginning I was just looking for a good Harry/Luna story but I found so much more. Thank you for writing them.
-Beer Ninja
Author's Response: Thank you, and may I add that you have the best name ever.
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{reviewid: 2421062, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
7th October 2010:
I have to say I wsih you continued the story. Just saying ;-)
Author's Response: I'm really glad that you enjoyed the story so much that you wanted more of it, but I'm going to leave this story where it is for now.
Thanks for taking the time to review
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{reviewid: 2421044, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
7th October 2010:
I like the way you did the fight, it shows that this story isn't about the war but what comes after
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{reviewid: 2421042, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
7th October 2010:
what in the world, was not expecting that
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{reviewid: 2419482, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
3rd October 2010:
A little short so far. Hopefully you can change that. Great story keep it coming.
Author's Response: yeah, it came out a little shorter then planned but it was a good place to cut it. thanks for reviewing and glad you enjoyed it!
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{reviewid: 2419459, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
3rd October 2010:
I just read your two entire story in 3 days and I found it awsome. Was curious if you were following cannon. Thanks for the story.
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like the story enough to read it all so fast. And we're going to follow cannon as much as we can for now. Who knows what will happen later on. :)
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{reviewid: 2418302, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
30th September 2010:
I honestly don't like that you killed Isobella off but who would. Its a great story just a little to sad if you know what i mean. I will keep a eye out for ch. 17 though
Author's Response: Yeah I didn't realise how popular Isobella was, a lot of my readers have expressed their dislike at Isobella's death, but unfortunatly it was the way the story went.
Thanks for the review. Chapter 17 will be up as soon as possible.
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{reviewid: 2417572, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
28th September 2010:
Favorite quote? I would have to say the last line 'Good thing I won, anyway, since I never took anything out of my bank account, I just stole the seventy-five from Albus.' Makes you wonder if he will give it back, ill bet no.
Favotrie part would be Falcon Kitty, everyone loves a cute kitten. Also the whole snogging buddies obviously isn't working neither is interested in anyone but each other.
Author's Response: Probably not. He'll probably use it to fund something like Falcon Cat's food or something. Hmm. There's a thought.
I'm glad you like Falcon Cat! The whole thing was really spontaneous and now I have a whole plot. I love that James just writes himself. Thank you! (love your penname)
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{reviewid: 2415933, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
24th September 2010:
i really do like your A/N (Yes, I know that I use technology that’s ten years more advanced than it should be, but it’s my story so I can. I hope you enjoy it anyway.) yes you can
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{reviewid: 2413954, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
18th September 2010:
I have read quite alot of James II/OC romances where they arent in love in the beginning but i have to say this is the best yet. update soon
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
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{reviewid: 2410044, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
8th September 2010:
You have done a great job getting the two stories together. I hope you keep updating on here. After all i spent a half hour searching for a Percy/Harry crossover story, don't want to have to search again.
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{reviewid: 2404910, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
28th August 2010:
I thought the part with Fred Sr. was great. And Teddy seems like he will make a great addition to the story at least for a little while.
Author's Response: So glad you approve of Fred sr!! And I'm glad you have a hopeful outlook for Teddy! :P G
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{reviewid: 2401478, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
22nd August 2010:
Great story, there is alot of twists and turns. Rose does make a good mom and as my mom would say every child will end up in the er at least once and noone makes the same mistake twice, well noone with more than 2 brain cells
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{reviewid: 2400659, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
21st August 2010:
I'm reading your A/N and the only thing i don't get is why your unhappy with the chapters i like them, its kind of getting back into the story and showing how everything changed. I think its great so far and i have 21 more just to catch up.
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{reviewid: 2400622, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
21st August 2010:
I recently found out my wife is pregnate and if her giving birth is anything like that it will be a long day for me
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{reviewid: 2396515, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
16th August 2010:
good story, there seems to be a lot of breaking the code but none in the way i really thought
Author's Response: I'm not sure what you mean exactly. Are you talking about in terms of James and Avery? Thanks for the review, I hope to hear from you in the future!
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{reviewid: 2394548, reviewer: 'Beer%20Ninja'}
14th August 2010:
Very nice story, wonder how stac will get away from her family.
Author's Response: Me too...
Ta!
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