Hmmm... This is quite good, except some of the dialogue was bit touchy for me (Its hard to explain, but overall it was very good.) Short but I like it. xDAuthor's Response: I was never much good with dialogue. lol. It's probably my biggest setback. I'm glad you like it and took time to read and review =] Report Review
This was a good story, except it was sort of short. Keep it up! Report Review
This is really sweet! I can't wait to read more of yours! Report Review
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