Really great start!!! I loved how you wrote it!! Report Review
This is a really good story!! I love the characters and how you wrote them! Next Chapter??? 10/10Author's Response: I really appreciate it! Next chapter will be up soon hopefully but I have some exams so not as soon as I could hope! Report Review
God, I LOVE how well you write Harry!! But THIS IS THE LAST UPDATED CHAPTER AND NOW I'M UPSET! :( Update, update, update PLEASE!!! It is such a wonderful story! 200/100 Report Review
Yay! Another wonderfuly writen chapter! I love the charcter developments, Daisy seemes like a cool charcter so far, as always keep writing!!! 100/100 Report Review
I love the way you write this! I love how you introduce the characters and describe the settings, it's impressive. The plot is really picking up and I love where you're taking it, keep writing! 100/100 Report Review
Wonderful begining!! You wrote it so well I can Tell this is going to be a wonderful story!! 100/100 Report Review
OH MY GOD! YAY!!! The next chapter!!! And it's just as brilliant as the other four!! Keep updating!! 100/100Author's Response: hehe thanks! ^_^ I am working on the next chapter now! :3 My laptop is being a pain though so it make take a couple weeks to get it working so i can write again but i am working on it again thank you so much for your reviews they helped get me writing again. Report Review
Very good start! Can't wait to see the rest of it!! Report Review
That was a very good start to what looks like the beginning of a very good story!! Update soon please!Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I Report Review
And THAT is where you cut it off?!?! Update SOON! 100/100Author's Response: Hehehe *evil laugh* Oh those pesky word counts. I like to keep things mildly even. ^.^ Thank you! Update is in line. :) --Jenna Report Review
This story just keeps getting better! 100/100Author's Response: Thank you ^.^ --Jenna Report Review
This was a really, really, really Wonderful chapter! I LOVED it!! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you. ^.^ --Jenna Report Review
My God! What the hell? Not what I was expecting, but very good! Please tell me she's not pregnant! That would complicate things so much!10/10 Report Review
Wow. Great story and great concept, I like it. I saw a few grammar errors, but nothing all that bad. Good story over all. 10/10 Is there going to be another chapter? Report Review
Holy Crap! I loved it!Author's Response: Thank you. ^.^ --Jenna Report Review
Holy hell! WHAT?? Malfoy is- but- NO! I mean I suspected- and Hermione- holy-... when Malfoy wakes up he's going to be pissed. Well great chapter, but did you REALLY have to leave it hanging like that?? REALLY? Update soon please!! 11/10Author's Response: This review totally made my day. I'm serious. Thank you so much! Yeah, I do manage to take you guys by surprise once in a while, huh? ;D I know, it's a horrible cliffy *hides* but I'll post the next chapter soon! thank youuu! x -flufff Report Review
OH! A BABY? Nice, I can't wait to see how that ties into everything, and can't WAIT to see what Malfoy is up to, 10/10!Author's Response: Yep, pretty random but I think the story needed it. Thanks again! x -flufff Report Review
Good chapter, even if it was a filler. They may not be the most action packed, but are still very necessary. Once again you've earned a 10/10 and I'm off to the next chapter!Author's Response: Thanks for understanding ;D and thanks for reading, too, it means a lot! x -flufff Report Review
Very good chapter once again! I love how you wrote the characters, you got them down perfectly! 10/10Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm so happy! -flufff Report Review
Once again that was a great chapter!! Loved it! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you! :) --Jenna Report Review
Are you going to write more of this story? I've read it over a few times (Loving it more every time) and you haven't updated it in a while and I know I would LOVE to see a new chapter! I have to say, I have never read a story like yours, (to be quite honest I thought about not reading it when I saw Vernon/Regulus not because of the slash but because come on, VERNON and REGULUS?? They come from other worlds, how in the hell would that work??) but once I started reading I couldn't stop. Everything from the characters, to your writing style was bloody fantastic and you just made this story work and come alive and YOU HAVEN'T EVEN GOTTEN ALL THAT FAR IN THE STORY AND YOU'VE ALREADY MADE IT WONDERFUL! So next chapter PLEASE??? 100/100Author's Response: ... I haven't been on here, in ages, truth is i fell away from the site in all honesty. I have had a million new ideas for this story though, so I might be secertly working on the next few chapters I can try and get one up but im not sure! :3 We will see ^_^ Thank you so much, it really does mean a lot to me. Vernulus will always be my baby, I birthed the ship and will forever love them, and forever swear they are cannon! ;) It really does mean a lot to me to come on and still see reviews for my stories, every time I check randomly I get the urge to write more, heck my insomnia has been kicking in really bad recently, maybe I will sneak a chapter in here soon, I have threw chapter 7 wrote, i just need to edit them, and correct spelling and grammer and you might get to see what happens with the llovely couple. I cannot tell you enough how much this means to me, thank you, thank you, thank you. Report Review
That was very well written, I loved it and am glad to see you posted another chapter! Keep writing!! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you ^.^ --Jenna Report Review
Again, very good job! Made me want to keep reading! 10/10!Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you do keep reading ;D -flufff Report Review
Very nice start :) It was a great hook, and immediately drew me in. I love how you did the Death Eater/Dark Lord scene, it was very well written. 10/10! I'm going to move on to the next chapter now because I want to find out what Draco was reading!Author's Response: Ah, thank you, you're so nice! I'm so happy to hear about the Dark Lord scene, I was a bit unsure about it. Thanks for continuing to read it, I really appreciate it. :D -flufff Report Review
HUZZAH! NEW CHAPTER! WHOOP WHOOP!! I love it even if it is a bit short and doesn't contain much, loved how you ended it by the way, that was brilliant!!! 10/10Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) I just needed a filler/passage-of-time sort of chappie, you know? Glad you liked it! Report Review
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