Reading Reviews From Member: mrsteddylupin
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Review #1, by mrsteddylupinOnce Upon A Time: Once Upon a Time...

17th June 2011:
I loved this story! Your passion was so evident in the text- I couldn't stop reading. I particularly liked June's monologue- it sounded really convincing; I was right there with her. Great story!

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Review #2, by mrsteddylupinThe Secret Keeper's Mistake: The Secret Keeper's Mistake

19th January 2011:
Oh. My. Gosh. That was haunting- you captured the tortured soul perfectly. So, I really like your writing style, and I was wondering if you could possibly read my story? It's called Siriusly Forbidden- I would love your feedback. Thank you so much, and a job really well done! :)

Author's Response: Thanks heaps! Like I said I loved your story and will totally recommend it to friends, to everyone really. :)

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Review #3, by mrsteddylupinThe Secret Keeper's Mistake: The Ultimate Betrayal

19th January 2011:
So, initially I was reluctant to read this, only because I'm writing a Lily/Sirius fic as well and I didn't want to be swayed from my story, but that was an INCREDIBLE chapter!! I really liked how you wasted no time in setting up this beautiful love triangle. you captured Sirius perfectly: the moodiness, but the total devotion (or at least, I thought it was perfect!) Keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sorry for the delayed reply, I've been using my phone internet and it wouldn't let me reply.

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Review #4, by mrsteddylupinSpinning me 'round: two

20th November 2010:
this was really funny! drunk james makes me laugh! you're an incredible writer :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, I thought James would be quite the amusing drunkard. I had a lot of fun writing that chapter, as you can tell;) Thanks for the review!

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Review #5, by mrsteddylupinThe World According to Triple Chocolate Ice-Cream : Live From New York, It's Saturday Night

12th November 2010:
loved it my heart shattered into millions of pieces. it was written beautifully, i loved how Hermione ran off and Ron ran after her. like deathly hallows vise versa

Author's Response: Oh, wow, I never even made that connection! You're absolutely brilliant! You are BRILLIANT! I think I may have to add that to the next chapter :D Glad I shattered your heart- that's pretty cool! ~writergirl8

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Review #6, by mrsteddylupinSpinning me 'round: one

18th September 2010:
you had me hooked on the first sentence!!! i really like this so far :)

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much! I didn't think the first chapter was even very good. I'm so glad you liked it, and thank you for the review!

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Review #7, by mrsteddylupinElectric Twist: Brotherly Love

19th July 2010:
i love this story, please write more! you make all the characters relatable, and its super easy to understand! its hard to stop reading this story! :)

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