Wow! I thought this was really good :) you're imagery was absolutely incredible; i honestly felt like i was there. great job!

Author's Response: Oh thanks so much! That's exactly what every writer wants to hear. :D Thank you for taking the time to review, it made my day.

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I loved this story! Your passion was so evident in the text- I couldn't stop reading. I particularly liked June's monologue- it sounded really convincing; I was right there with her. Great story!

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Oh. My. Gosh. That was haunting- you captured the tortured soul perfectly. So, I really like your writing style, and I was wondering if you could possibly read my story? It's called Siriusly Forbidden- I would love your feedback. Thank you so much, and a job really well done! :)

Author's Response: Thanks heaps! Like I said I loved your story and will totally recommend it to friends, to everyone really. :)

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So, initially I was reluctant to read this, only because I'm writing a Lily/Sirius fic as well and I didn't want to be swayed from my story, but that was an INCREDIBLE chapter!! I really liked how you wasted no time in setting up this beautiful love triangle. you captured Sirius perfectly: the moodiness, but the total devotion (or at least, I thought it was perfect!) Keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sorry for the delayed reply, I've been using my phone internet and it wouldn't let me reply.

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this was really funny! drunk james makes me laugh! you're an incredible writer :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, I thought James would be quite the amusing drunkard. I had a lot of fun writing that chapter, as you can tell;) Thanks for the review!

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loved it my heart shattered into millions of pieces. it was written beautifully, i loved how Hermione ran off and Ron ran after her. like deathly hallows vise versa

Author's Response: Oh, wow, I never even made that connection! You're absolutely brilliant! You are BRILLIANT! I think I may have to add that to the next chapter :D Glad I shattered your heart- that's pretty cool! ~writergirl8

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you had me hooked on the first sentence!!! i really like this so far :)

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much! I didn't think the first chapter was even very good. I'm so glad you liked it, and thank you for the review!

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i love this story, please write more! you make all the characters relatable, and its super easy to understand! its hard to stop reading this story! :)

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