Janice, this is so awesome. Omg. I literally love Freddie. The way you wrote him - he is just hilarious and Ryan seems like such a hot-head that you can't help but like :P Amazing job!!
xx HaleyAuthor's Response: Ohgosh! Thank you so much! I really appreciate it! I have such a clear vision of Freddie, so I hope everyone likes him. And yes, Ryan is the definition of a spitfire. Could definitely get rocky. Thank you SO much! Hope you like the rest :) Report Review
Woah... Go Jane!! I'm so proud of her!Author's Response: You and me both! I had a "you go girl!" moment! haha. Thanks! Report Review
I love how you wrote Ginny and Harry. I could see them PERFECTLY! You are magnificient :)
Anyways, I feel for James ): And then seeing Avery and things just not going how he had hoped and it all being awkward and short and blah. love is poopy, James!!
Rose..she is my favorite right now.
Bink is so funny with his jokes! I want him ;)
HALEY STAR WAS MENTIONED!!! man, I'd love to go on a date with James. Although I'd drool the entire time /: Oh well ;P
update soon! :D
xx HaleyAuthor's Response: I'm so happy you liked Ginny and Harry! I was nervous about writing them when I first started this story, but I really love how they turned out!
I love Rose :)
And Bink :)
AND HALEY STAR. Just saying. Be careful what you wish for.
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OH NOOO ): i saw this coming, but i cant believe it!! Poor James )': Javery better survive!!
xx HaleyAuthor's Response: I hope they will. They are both strong-willed and awesome. So cross your fingers!
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This story can make my day ( and i'm certain many others days ). It always brings a smile to my face. Even if James is going through a lot of problems!
I love the little convo James and Avery had before try-outs. UP UNTIL SHE SAID THEY NEEDED TO TALK ABOUT THEM. Omg, i really didnt like the sound of that.
HOW DARE FREDDIE HAVE MAKE-UP YOU-KNOW-WHAT WITH ABIGIAL. ugh, Fred.I still love him Update asap!!
xx HaleyAuthor's Response: Poor James. I feel for him. Sometimes. Other times he just brings it upon himself.
Oh, Fred. One day. One day he'll see. Hopefully!
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“If you’re breaking up with Avery I am going to punch you right in the mouth, James.”
Lily is the bomb. No other words can explain her since she is just incredible.
I feel so bad for Avery, but you write it all so realistic! That is why I love your writing and BTQC and H&S. I feel like it's so real most of the time!
Anyways, awesome job :)Author's Response: I absolutely love Lily. She not only cracks me up, but she's a serious bamf. She doesn't take crap from anyone. Thank you so much! Report Review
i love uber depressing chapters :)
Anyways, this was amazing. I loved how Oliver ran over as soon as he got that little letter from Jane! Hes a nice man, that man is ;)
Ahhh, Valerie picked Jane!! This makes me happy for Jane :)
xox HaleyAuthor's Response: They're just so damn SAD. But so amazing. I'm torn. Hide & Seek is much more melodramatic than Keep Away, but I think it works. Don't you?
thank you so much! You're going to like the next few I think. Report Review
I really really liked this chapter :) I like how right from the beginning, you show us how Jane is feeling left out being with her friends who are all couples and Oliver is so busy he cant be there for her. And then at the end she tells him about it.
If they break up, i will be SO upset ): theyre meant for each other!!
I want my own ginger too ;) (even though i am one!)
10/10Author's Response: Hey there!
Yeah, I totally know what you mean. Jane is really haunted by it. Watching her friends closely. Can you imagine how it will be at Hogwarts? Twice as bad. I'm glad she got it off her chest.
i want a ginger. I want Fred. ;)
Or James. Even though he's not ginger. Let's be real.
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SO glad Geokat is getting on the same page again! I miss them ):
Anywho, great chapter (as always) :D
I can't wait for the next!!
10/10 ;)Author's Response: I missed them so much :) Thank you so much for the review! Report Review
lovin the idea for James' punishment ;) haha such a great idea! ;D
Anyways, I feel so sad how you can tell Freddie and Bink are kind of lost without Jamsie /: They better be fine again!!
Avery is such a doll, I can't help but adore her! :)
Great chapter!!! I can't wait to read the next wth harry! :)
xoxo HaleyAuthor's Response: I wonder who could have thought that up :) thanks again!! I really like the way it turned out!
I think James is just so overwhelmed he doesn't quite know what to do with himself. Avery, however, has her head on straight. Good girl!
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I really can't wait for them to be at Hogwarts and for things to REALLY start happening!!
omg, Al Potter! I love him :)
:DAuthor's Response: Albus is love. And everyone needs to realize that. Including Natalya. :D Report Review
I really love this story! Great job:)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
I abs. Love this! I love how Rose is so different in this story than from all the stories i've read about her!! great job on that:D
I really can't wait to see where this goes, and I hope you update this real real soon!
My favorite has to be Delia because she reminds me of myself.
Great job!Author's Response: Delia is great. She's such a mess, but she's so sweet and amazing. :) Report Review
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I love this! This was such an amazing chapter (: James has finally got it in his head! Javery action !
Aw, Bink talks in his sleep. That can be adorable, but also quite annoying :D
Please please please update soon! I really can't wait for the next chapter (;
xoxo Haley ;PAuthor's Response: James FINALLY sees the light! Finally. Yes, you're right about dear Bink. But for me ,since I don't live with the bugger, it's quite amusing. I promise to update as soon as possible! Thanks! Report Review
SKRJDFJNGFD I love Oliver. He's soo... hot. haha (:
This chapter was so awesome, as usual :P
I'm so happy Oliver got a raise!! Now he can buy Jane many pretty presents (; I want some pretty things. From Oliver. Throw in a word with him? ;D
My favorite dress was definently Alicia's. I have no idea whats going to happen next. You are deff a great writer and sometimes does unexpected things. But good things. (:
Haley xoxoAuthor's Response: Hot is an understatement for my favorite Keeper!
I'm so glad you liked the chapter! I knew I wanted Oliver to get a raise because he is such a talented player, plus he needs to be able to hold his own without his parents money. I knew he could do it!
Alicia's dress is my favorite too! Followed closely by Jane's :)
Thank you so much for the review! I'll update as soon as possible! Report Review
amazing! I really like this so far :D
Update soon? That would make me smile.
xoxoAuthor's Response: Happy to hear you like it, I'll update as soon as possible. :) Report Review
This is a very good start! It was good, especially with already having a background between James, Sirius, Esperanza and Hope and starting in the middle of it instead of the beginning during the summer.. (:
Amazing job! On to the next one for me(;Author's Response: Thanks, it means a lot to me that you like it! Report Review
love love love love love.
I love Rose and Ariadne's friendship (:
Keep up the amazing work!! Report Review
i loved this story!
SEQUEL ? (: that would ah-mazing ;D Report Review
Aw, I feel for Al! But then I feel for Paloma because Albus is so shy to make a move haha GO AL! MAKE A MOVE ALREADY, BUDDY!!! ... ok sorry (:
I think its so freaking adorable how James is having these weird and unlike thoughts about Avery that he never had before. I also love how James talks about Quidditch and his team mates. It's really like theyre a family. But not... haha. I'm so getting a jersey with Potter on the back. Cool beans.
Uh oh... Freddie and Abigail. I feel bad for Freddie, always being whisked away by her at all times. Shoo! Go away Abigail youre only making his mates (and me) worried about Freddie. He needs his 'his' time. Thank you (:
I loved this chapter a whole bunch, especially the little bit that you told me to keep my eyes open for (; Thank you a whole lot by the way!
Update soon! Thanks (:
by the way, I am so going as Victoria for Halloween. Do you think they have the costume at iparty?
xoxo HaleyAuthor's Response: Hey Hey!
Al really does. Or Paloma. Paloma should just do something because we know she is the gutsier of the two.
You've totally picked up on James's weird, new thoughts. He is starting to go toward that...liking her, instead of just being attracted to her, which was new to him around December. Loving his progression.
Ah, Freddie and Abigail. Things seem to be going down hill, don't they? And I'm glad you saw my little snippet! Keep your eyes open in chapter 28 too!
Thank you so much!
ps. Check in the back of iparty. They have to have a Victoria costume SOMEWHERE. If not, make one. I'm completely serious ;) Tell Reid to make you one. Report Review
amazing! I really do love this story! Update soon please (: Youre awesome (;Author's Response: I hate that i'm taking so long to update! Hope you still love it. :) Report Review
Lovely Chapter (: I love Avery/Sirius!Author's Response: thank you so much :)
~Lauren Report Review
Omg, I loved this chapter (: I like the whole Snog buddies and how its pretty much all they do when they're not talking about other people, haha.
I want to emerson-punch twitwards for looking through James' stufff!
aw, I love the whole friendship between James, Bink, and Freddie. Looks like Abigail is getting demanding... Doesnt look so good right now! hahaha, keep up the amazing work (: I am so excited for the next chapter (;Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And yeah, you're right about Emerson. Seriously, he needs to get knocked out one of these days. Like...yesterday. I'm loving how Emerson-punch has now become a phrase. Yes. World domination is almost complete.
And yeah, you're so right, abigail is getting a little demanding...I wonder what's going to happen! Thank you so much! Report Review
so in love with this and its only the first chapter!!
I cant wait to read more (: Effy is so great and different from Clash. Anyway... hope to see an update (; Report Review
Thanks for the updatee! (: I loved the whole awkwardness. ;p
Update soon please ! Report Review
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