It was great! I love Natasha...her mom on the other hand, not so much. I feel like I wouldn't be able to survive with a mother like that. I'd end up killing her in sheer annoyance within the first week. (:
It was fantastic though. I can't wait for more! Please tell me that you are updating soon? (:Author's Response: Ah thank you so much :)
Natasha's mom is a bit on the annoying side. Way too controlling in my opinion, but doesn't that give the story a nice plot?
I'm glad you liked it and I have the next chapter already written so I'm going to post the next chapter of my other story and than this one :)
Thank you again!
-Rebecca Report Review
This is so freaking beautiful. Gah, I loved it!Author's Response: Thank you (: Report Review
Loved it! but i was so mad when sirius didn't kiss her! you got me all excited for no reason! :(Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I know, I'm evil. But I hope you'll forgive me. Thanks again! Report Review
YAY!! You updated!! I loved this chapter and I love Malfoy too! I seriously don't understand how your stories don't have more reviews and more favorites because they are honestly brilliant! Can't wait for more! :DAuthor's Response: More up soon (:
And thank you for all your reviews, they make me smile everytime!
Oh, and I quiet like Malfoy as well ^^ Report Review
AHHH! HOLY CRAP THEY ARE GETTING MARRIED!! I started flipping when I read this chapter! shfdaisbcasakjbfakbd. I literally got so excited that I did a weird spaz thing and hit my head on the back of my headboard. I love this story so much and it will always hold a special place in my heart for being the first story that I discovered on this site (:Author's Response: Haha, PHEW! I am so relieved that you like it! I know some people may think it's not realistic/too happy or something, but I just HAD to do it! Haha, lol! Aww, really? I'm honored, and sad it's ending now! Only one chapter to go, I think. Thank you so so much for reading and reviewing. :) xx Report Review
LOVED IT! I absolutely loved James and how funny and nice he is. The way him and Avis interacted was great, and Pucey was awesome too. I can't wait for more :DAuthor's Response: wooot! thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
I'm super glad that you liked it! I really hope you don't think it's moving too slowly, I just want to have a plot and not just endless fluff like some stories!
I really love professor Pucey, he's a bit of a twist on the stereotypical slytherin professor who is just a little bit biased. James is pretty much my dream man and I'm glad you like him!
I hope you keep reading! Report Review
so i thought that i'd already reviewed this chapter...but i guess not because it's letting me do this now. hmm. anyways, you already know what i think about this chappie...I LOVED IT. woot woot.
did you know that joe moses has his own one man show thing in nyc? i was like WHOA. one man show? that's pretty freaking awesome. i want to gooo. see me some joe moses, ya know?
i think i'm going to watch mulan because i really have a craving for watching mulan. i want me some ping...wait what's the main guys name? the hot one? chang? it's not ping? who's ping? i'm so confused right now.
did you move yet btw? you're moving near eleni right? that's awesome. make sure you get some redbull in your new house. you can never have too much redbull 80
you know what you also can't have enough of? LOGAN LERMAN. popopopopologanlerman. also conbrochill is something that you can't have enough of so he would have sufficed as an answer also.
i'm really just kind of rambling at this point trying to procrastinate from writing enemies with benefits. which brings me to ask: WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE MISSY?! i miss jordan! also, are you going to write a new story? i feel like i read somewhere on here that you are...please do! i want some stuff to read!
:DAuthor's Response: haha, you are such a spaz. seriously.
alright, here we go.
yes, I heard about the one man show:) his name is shang? total hottie. yes, I moved already. yes, its near eleni's house. yes, I've already had some redbull in the new house...no joke. YOU CAN NEVER HAVE ENOUGH CON BRO! and I'm not going to update for a while, if ever. yes, I started a new story. I'm quite proud of it so far...its a james/oc. james is such a babe. haha just kidding...but no, he really is.
and you better update enemies with benefits soon! I'm lovin' that story:)
p.s. I think I'm gonna try and have another hp bday party which of course you would be invited to...but I'm not sure yet. ill fb the deets. Report Review
I DESPISE MR FLYNN. WHAT A BUTTHEAD.Author's Response: I COULD NOT AGREE ANYMORE.
I AM DYING LAUGHING.
THANK YOU. Report Review
I love this story! I wish there was more good teddy/victoire stories out there like this one! (: Report Review
I like it so far! June is... intense, but I love her character. Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you (:
Yeah, June is...June. There's honestly nothing to describe her other than that.
Thanks for your review (: Report Review
I really really like the idea of this story! It's really original and I can't wait to see how it turns out! And as much as I hate when people say this: UPDATE SOON! (well, as soon as the queue reopens anyway (: ) 10/10Author's Response: Ah yayy you like it!! :)
I really do like the plot of this story so far which is probably why I'm super excited about it and have been writing it nonstop.
I'll definitely update as soon as possible. Probably as soon as the queue reopens if I have internet access!
Thank you for reviewingg, it's really really awesome that you do :D
-Rebecca Report Review
This chapter was fantastic! I can't wait for more (: I'm going to go check out your new story right now!!Author's Response: Ah yay :) You liked it! That makes me super super happy!
More will come a bit slower than this last update, but it will definitely come and the next chapter should have a bunch more action!
Thanks for checking out my new story, it means a lot!!
-Rebecca Report Review
Ah! I loved it! Can't wait for more! (:Author's Response: Glad you like it! I'm halfway through chapter three, the update should be up soon (: Report Review
This is one of those chapters that you just feel so incredibly bad for the main character, and you just feel uncomfortable reading it because they are making such a fool out of themselves and it was one of the funniest things that I've ever read. Report Review
This was really good, but seriously depressing!! I WANT A HAPPY ENDING!! :DAuthor's Response: yay! thanks! maybe if i'm bothered to write a little bit more. thanks for the review! Report Review
Ah, so good! I hate Mary! She such a...you know what (;Author's Response: Well, people were starting to like her too much in the last chapter, so I had to show more of her bad side, now didn't I? Thanks so much for the review. I hope you stay tuned for future updates... and I hope those will come as soon as I'm planning. Report Review
Ah, I love James and Avery so freaking much. They're adorable (:Author's Response: Aren't they just?? I love them. Javery for the win!! Thanks so much :) Report Review
BAHH. I honestly have no clue how you do it because I swear your one shots make me cry every single time. How do you pull off making your stories incredibly fluffy but not cheesy at all at the same time? Report Review
GAH! I loved it so freaking much, especially when she punched Fred and when they kept saying stupid over and over again (:Author's Response: Ahh THANK YOU :)
The Fred punching was a spur of the moment thing that happened in my writing. I just felt all this anger and suddenly wanted him to get punched in the face.
The stupid joke I had fun writing, because me and my friends have things like that where we repeat what the other is saying to death just for the hell of it!
Thanks for reviewing!
-Rebecca Report Review
AHH! So I'm with my two friends and the whole time I'm reading this I was screaming and squealing about how utterly adorable and amazing this chapter was. I got threatened to be hit...several times. 10/10 Report Review
Ah, I was cracking up through the entire chapter. I can't wait for the next one! Report Review
Katrina! WHOA! I did not see that one coming! I hope Emily gets her back (: Report Review
I loved it, I loved it, I loved it! You have such a talent! I can't wait for more! (:Author's Response: Thanks soo much for reading and responding!! I'm really glad that you liked it!! It always takes me a while to work up the courage to post a new story, but I'm glad that you liked it! I'm trying to write more right now, but I've got a wee bit of writers block... I'll try and get more written quickly! Report Review
Dang! I already love Avis! I love the way that you wrote her so determined and ambitious. I originally didn't like that she was a Slytherin, but she IS ambitious so I think it's the perfect fit. ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!Author's Response: I'm soo glad you like Avis!! I love her! She's a bit like myself if I had athletic ability and a bit of a perfectionist streak! I can't imagine her being in any house other than Slytherin! I feel like a lot of times Slytherins get a bad rep for being you know... evil... but in reality if you ignore the whole "voldemort" and "deatheaters" bit, all we know about Slytherin is that they are cunning and ambitious! thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! Report Review
Love, love, love this story times 100,000,000! Report Review
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