Reading Reviews From Member: dobbyismyhero22
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Review #1, by dobbyismyhero22The After Before: Chapter Six

14th February 2018:
It's amazing how quickly I fell in love with this story. Your writing is SO good and your characters just feel so real and fun to read. I love following Nellie's story and I can't wait to see how her relationship with James progresses. Looking forward to more! Keep up the great work :)

Author's Response: Ah thank you so much! The next chapter is now up and I hope you enjoy it!

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Review #2, by dobbyismyhero22Hormones: Prepared

8th August 2015:
Oh my god THAT ENDING! It was so beautifully written and just everything I was hoping for. I loved it so much and I love this story so much. I'm so sad it's coming to end soon. I don't know what I'm going to do without my Fred/Ryan fix.

Amazing job as always! xx

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Review #3, by dobbyismyhero22The Keeper's Daughter: Excruciating

2nd August 2015:
AHH!! You should see the smile on my face right now... I look absolutely crazy but I can't help it. I love Albus and Gee so much. I didn't know I could love characters as much as I love them. This whole story is just amazing and it's quickly becoming my favorite on the site. Thank you so much for remaining so active on HPFF because I always look forward to your stories xx

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Review #4, by dobbyismyhero22Hormones: Opening Day

19th May 2015:
My love for this story is so unreal. I can't believe Ryan is in labor!! Ahh, I can't wait for the next one!

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Review #5, by dobbyismyhero22The Keeper's Daughter: Red Wine

7th May 2015:
I love Albus an unbelievable amount. Also, I can't get over how much I completely adore this story xx

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Review #6, by dobbyismyhero22The Keeper's Daughter: Comforts of Home

17th March 2015:
I had such a stupid smile on my face the entire time I was reading this. I just love Gee so much. After everything that's happened, she still has such a positive attitude and it's really just great to read. I'm looking forward to the baking chapter! xx

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Review #7, by dobbyismyhero22Complicated: In Which Breakfast is Traumatic

21st December 2014:
Ahh I hated Scorpius yelling at her but I could definitely see where he was coming from. I love how Rose and Louis kind of saved her at the end there. That was so nice of them. Can't wait till the next chapter! xx

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'll try to get the next chapter up asap when the queue opens again :)

Emma xx

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Review #8, by dobbyismyhero22Hormones: Better Off

15th December 2014:
Another great chapter! I knew Ryan would blow up at Fred but I'm glad they ended okay at the end. I'm excited for the next one! Good luck with your move xx

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Review #9, by dobbyismyhero22The Keeper's Daughter: Dance Class

8th November 2014:
I adore Gee and Al an unreasonable amount. They are so cute together it hurts. I love the way you write Gee and Matteo's relationship though because I just feel like it's really real, which, you know, sucks for Gee cause Matteo is annoying but I feel like there are definitely boyfriends out there just like him. I also really love Leo. He's awesome. This story in general is awesome. I love Hormones and DTTT too but I actually think this one is my favorite. And that's saying a lot considering I really love the other two.

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Review #10, by dobbyismyhero22Hormones: The Court Case

28th October 2014:
My love for Ryan Davies is making me question my sexuality.

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Review #11, by dobbyismyhero22The Keeper's Daughter: The Plan

13th September 2014:
I loved this chapter and all of the characters you created. Leo is probably my favorite because like, duh. I'm loving Albus to pieces though too. I was dying a little when she woke up and he was at her bed. The whole chapter was great and I'm looking forward to the next one!

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Review #12, by dobbyismyhero22Fluorescent Adolescent : little sisters

12th April 2014:
OH MY GOD. first of all, hiii. SO i loved it. you're like HELLA talented and i really liked reading this. I couldn't stop once I started. AND THE END OF THIS CHAPTER KILLED ME A LITTLE I LOVE JAMES SO MUCH OMG. I like her friends a lot too. especially mickey. and oscar. and aspen actually too. i like everyone tbh. I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE


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Review #13, by dobbyismyhero22Blue Monday: All the World's a Stage

13th January 2014:
Ahhh so I really liked it. Arielle is my favorite character so far mostly because she reminds me of myself and I have a feeling that I'm going to love Sully and Miles and well pretty much everyone. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Arielle is a gem!!! And I love Sully and Miles so I'm hoping everyone else will too!!!

Thank youuu!

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Review #14, by dobbyismyhero22Hormones: Black Mold

10th November 2013:
I'm really glad you updated. You're one of the only ones on this site that still updates regularly and you have no idea how much I love that. I really liked Ryan's backstory and it makes sense with who she is as a character. I wanted to punch Roxanne for what she did, but it was definitely entertaining. I love Angelina's response to it. I loved her talk with Fred in the morning. They have such a cute family. Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one!

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Review #15, by dobbyismyhero22Bedposts and Broomsticks: Revelations

22nd August 2013:
You seriously have no idea how happy I am that you updated! I went back a few days ago and reread the whole thing and I was like "this is such a bad idea cause she's probably not going to update again" and then lo and behold, you go and update so thank you for that.

It was brilliant as always. I love the part with Scorpius at the end as well as Lily's talk with Roxanne. My favorite though was Lily's talk with Luke and when she felt awkward that he was going too far. It just seemed very realistic cause she's so young.

Anyways, great job and I look forward to the new chapters! Xx

Author's Response: Hello! I am so sorry it took so long to respond! I'm so glad you liked the chapter!! Thank you so much for the super lovely review! Next chapter is currently in the queue! xx

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Review #16, by dobbyismyhero22Confuzzled: Wotters, The Sorting Hat, and More Wotters

29th July 2013:
I really liked this chapter!

Things you did right: all of your dialogue is brilliant and realistic as well as her little internal thoughts. You have that part down and it's extremely amusing to read.

Things you can improve on: I don't know how to describe this but you almost go too in depth with your descriptions? It's not bad exactly but it's just kind of seems unnecessary. For instance, you don't really need the physical descriptions of all of the characters looks like Louis and Molly and all of the cousins and relatives, especially if they aren't going to be big characters and describing them all at once is kind of overwhelming. That's about one of the only things I'd say you could improve on, but like I said, it isn't bad. I think I did the same thing with my first few stories.

I can't wait to read more of this story and the banner is awesome by the way.

Author's Response: Thank you for your honest feedback! I went back and looked at the chapter again, and you're totally right. I might go back later after the story is completed and do some tweaking/editing, but I'm going to leave it as is for now. Thanks again!

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Review #17, by dobbyismyhero22Hormones: The Hospital

26th July 2013:
SUCH a good chapter. It had me nearly tearing up at some parts because Fred is honestly such a sweetheart.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! Freddie really is a sweetheart. I was rereading the other day and he actually reminded me of the "Peeta-figure" of this story.

Thanks :)

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Review #18, by dobbyismyhero22Confuzzled: Owls, Ollivander's and Louboutins

24th July 2013:
I'm surprised that this is your first story on HPFF because it's written well. Normally first attempts are pretty crappy (trust me, I know), but I actually really enjoyed this. I think it's an interesting concept as well. Definitely different. Annabelle seems like she'll be a fun character to read about. I can't wait to see where you take this. Great first chapter! (:

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate this, because I was very nervous about posting this, and my first attempts are usually pretty bad. I'm hoping to get the next chapter up soon, so more Annabelle is on the way! :)

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Review #19, by dobbyismyhero22Beauty Queen: Epilogue: The Quidditch Cup

23rd July 2013:
I LOVED IT. Absolute perfect ending. If I ever finish one of my stories, I hope I do it this well. Everything just wrapped up so nicely. I love that Dom and Scorpius are finally together. I love that text from her mom. I love the little convo she had with James at the end. I LOVE IT ALL.

If you ever write anything else, please let me know because I'd love to read it. YOU'RE AMAZING. xx

Author's Response: Aw yay! I'm glad you liked it. And don't worry, if you finish your stories you'll definitely finish them way better than me, because you're just super awesome.

I'll let you know for sure if I write anything else! I'm probably just going to be taking a break from this fandom for a while, but who knows if inspiration will strike.

YOU'RE EVEN AMAZINGER! Thanks so much for sticking with this story :)

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Review #20, by dobbyismyhero22Beauty Queen: The Awakening

15th July 2013:
OH MY GOD! I can't believe it's over. I'm actually really sad right now but really happy because it was so freaking cute. I honestly adore James and I loved the way everything turned out with her mom. You wrapped it all up very nicely!

And I wanted to let you know, in case you didn't already know, that I have a new story out! I know I shouldn't have started a new one but I couldn't resist. So far, I'm doing a good job with updating...I have the third chapter in the queue right now. It would mean so much to me if you check it out. You were always one of my favorite readers.

Thanks for being an awesome writer. I look forward to whatever you write in the future! xx

Author's Response: It's not over yet! There's still an epilogue! Although yes the whole plot part of the story's over. which is quite sad. But it hasn't hit me yet so at the moment I'm just happy to have made it this far into my story. I'm super glad you liked how everything wrapped up though :)

And omg you have a new story out?! Of course I'm going to read it! I miss your writing so much!

Thank you so much for reviewing like, seriously you're the awesome one not me.

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Review #21, by dobbyismyhero22Camp Quid: Times Have Changed

11th July 2013:
AHH! So I'm like pretty much in love with James. Carrie and him are so cute I can't take it. I loved this chapter, especially the part where she's trying to embarrass that kid (can't remember his name at the moment). But yeah, I loved it. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Heey so I'm working on getting another chapter done, but you know what that can be like! thanks for reviewing!!

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Review #22, by dobbyismyhero22Beauty Queen: I'm Sorry

15th June 2013:
I forgot how much I missed reading this story! I'm actually pretty glad that you had Nata leave just cause it would've been too predictable if she'd stayed. I can't wait for the next chapter! xx

Author's Response: Ohmygosh hello! I missed you reading this story! I thought you'd left hpff for good!

I think you may be the only one that's happy Tash leaves, so I'm happy someone liked the unpredictability of it.

Next chapter's in the queue so it should be out soon :) Thanks for reviewing

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Review #23, by dobbyismyhero22Camp Quid: The First Summer

15th May 2013:
Yay! I'm so happy you're writing again! I can't wait to read more of it. I have a feeling it's going to be really good!

Author's Response: thanks for checking it out for me :) I just put the next chapter in the queue, hopefully you like it!!

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Review #24, by dobbyismyhero22The Lionhearted Boy: (but that was when i ruled the world)

1st March 2013:
WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?! this story was absolutely beautiful and I'm completely content with the fact that you may never update your other stories again if you continue posting one shots like these... Incredible

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Review #25, by dobbyismyhero22The Scientist: nobody said it was easy.

24th June 2012:
Oh my god, I can't even. I don't know why it took me
so long to read this but I'm so glad I finally did. This
is by far your best one shot so far...Absolutely

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