I'm already excited for the next chapter! update soon :)Author's Response: It should be out as soon as it gets to the front of the queue, yayy! Report Review
wow, great chapter! i love james :) oh, and you havnt been watching 'angus thongs and perfect snogging' by any chance??? lolAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I love writing him, so I'm glad you like him, too :) I've seen it, but not recently. You must have gotten the reference! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
why wont it come to pass?? why!! :( this story better not have a sad ending - though I know they can't be together forever.
anyway great chapter again, really well written especially the last bit :)Author's Response: maybe it'll have a happy one? haha. no word yet on that!
thank you! Report Review
great chapter - not what i was expecting yet but actually it felt like the right moment. very sweet :) update soon!Author's Response: thanks! i think it was the right moment for them. or at least, it was what they needed. also, because i've been skipping days, more time has passed then we really realize. Report Review
great chapter - they're so cute together! cant wait to see what happens next :)Author's Response: thanks! we'll just have to wait and see! Report Review
oh my god :0 how could nothing have happened? hopefully it will after the meeting. still loving this, keep up the good work! :)Author's Response: BUILDING TENSION. I hate it, I wish they'd just kiss already, haha. Thankyouuu! Report Review
ooh hurry up with the next part!!! great chapter as usual, feels like i'm reading a real book :)Author's Response: Wow, thank you! Really! I'll get going on it now... Report Review
mahhh! - they're so cute :) great chapter again, update soon!Author's Response: thank you! i will! Report Review
oh hannah :( - he likes you really :) great chapter again, keep it up!Author's Response: BUT IF HE LIKES HER THEN WHY DIDN'T HE JUST KISS HER? I WISH HE'D JUST KISSED HER.
... I get far too into my own stories.
Thanks! Report Review
wow. that was so cute! i loved the last line especially - keep up the good work :)Author's Response: thank you! i'll try! Report Review
i love this story! the relationship between the two of them is very believable, an building up so gradually :) sirius is perfect - so in character, an i love eliza too :) update soon!Author's Response: thanks! yeah, one of my main goals of this story was to write something with a good, firm sirius. so i'm really glad you like his characterization. thanks so much!! Report Review
Ah! so cute :) i loved hannahs reactions during the conversation with susan, the thing with her and nevilles come on really gradually, but i think you're developing it really well :) update soon!Author's Response: I'M ON IT.
Aha, I mean thank you - thank you very much! Report Review
Aw, great chapter! i love how you can see neville growing into the person he is at the end of the last book - yet he's still nervous and sweet :) and the way hannah kind of knows she has feelings for him now. best chapter yet :DAuthor's Response: Ooh, hehe, thank you! Report Review
Ah, really sweet - both are very in character, and you cant not love luna :)Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love Luna, too, she's one of my favorites.
And thanks for the review. (:
-Jasmine Report Review
Aw, great chapter...again :) update soon! Report Review
the cormac and lavender pairing wierdlly really makes sense - i can imagine them as a couple. i love this story - sad but sweet - and really good :)Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the pairing because I rather like it too. I think they make a really interesting couple.
Thanks so much for reviewing! I really enjoying writing this and so I'm glad you liked it as well :) Report Review
i love this story! all the characters are great,but i hope we hear more from lisa :)Author's Response: Thankyou! I'm big on characterisation more than anything, and I'm glad yoy are enjoying it! Lisa is really going to be the focus, if any of the girls are, of the overall story -it's her development that ties them all together in the end more than Daph's drama and Padma's bossiness.
Thanks for taking the time to review! Report Review
wow, that was really clever. i love how you reveal barty's character through little moments, like with the kid and the porcupine, and the scene with Umbridge was great. 10/10 :)Author's Response: Thank you so much for the nice review. Yeah, it's definitely a character piece more than anything.
Glad you liked Umbridge getting her comeuppance a little bit. Report Review
aw - sweet and original :)Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
-Sarah Report Review
wow, that was REALLY good. really well written an well characterised. update soon!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really focused on Characterisation, so I'm glad you liked it. It was my first story, (hpff, and that I've written in a while), so i'm definitely going to make changes, but I dunno if I'll add any more. You can check out my other stories if you like though! P.s, I really like your Sirius/Lily story:) Report Review
poor hannah :( that chapter was soo well written though, and the little moments with neville were lovely.Author's Response: Oh, I'm so sorry, I only just saw this review! Thank you very, very much! Report Review
haha - great so far, i love james robbing the chocolate frogs :) and its good the way the slytherins do have a bit of a nasty side but are likeable, its not like it doesnt make sense that they are in slytherin in the first place. update soon!Author's Response: hahaha i love james too! its actually really hard not to like james in pretty much any story. and yeah, i kept going back and forth with having most of them in slytherin or not but then i decided that it works out better with them in slytherin. my one friend was quite upset that i put Al into syltherin but theres definitely some reasons for that, that will come up later in the story. haha but anyways...thanks so much for reviewing! and ill try to get the next chapter up for validation sometime this week :)) Report Review
great chapter :) you do dialogue really well, but i think you need to re-read over stuff because sometimes you miss letters out of words or misspell things. update soon! Report Review
good so far - i like the idea that james starts to move on just as lily finally realises she likes him :) Report Review
great chapter - update soon! and Bill is so cute, i love him :)Author's Response: Thank you! I will try! I love writing him and their awkward conversations
Thank you for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
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