This is so brilliant! You surely need to write more! I love your writing style and the fact you made this up is just absolutley fitting! Jk Rowling would be proud I'm telling ya!Author's Response: Oh that means so much! And from your username it seems you are a Cho fan? Which makes the fact that you liked this all the more meaningful! Thanks for reading, and especially for reviewing! Report Review
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Oh I just love them! They are so meant to be!Author's Response: TY so much! Report Review
I liked the fact how Ginny thinks back of Cho, because of course Ginny always had a crush on Harry and Cho had beaten her to it. Though I think you overdid it just a little bit of how she thinks of Cho in the present. I mean it sounds a little cruel. Ginny has won everything. Harry,a quidditch carierre, marriage, a baby. Everything Cho doesn't have Ginny has right now and I don't think Ginny is such a cruel person to think at that point 'Haha, this feels good'.
I mean Cho lost her boyfriend, her engagement is shattered, she can't get over her past and then Ginny is liking that fact. So I don't think Ginny would be that immature and cold.
But I love the fact how you end! The 'Hi Dean' is totally hilarious! Report Review
This was lovely to read! I indeed think Cedric sort of asked Cho to the prom that way! An amazing story, you should thin kabout adding more chapters to it!Author's Response: Hey!
Thank you so much :)
Haha I like it as a one shot, and I'm terrible at novels, but who knows?
I'll see what I can do ;)
Thank you! Report Review
This was amazing to read! Great job! Oh how I just wish that Cedric never died! *Jumps up and down irritated*
Hey you know I was thinking, J.K. Rowling said Cho in the end married a muggle, what if this man in your story is that muggle? Maybe you can write a stroy about that. Just an idea =) Anyway this story is great!Author's Response: I agree, I thought that out of the deaths in Harry Potter, his was the one that definitely shocked me the most. I guess it was JKR's way of showing how innocent people for no reason. Still, it was shocking and very sad!
The man in this story is that muggle. At least in my eyes. You'll notice that Cho switches off a light switch in the final sentence of this. When I read that she had married a muggle, I could easily see her adapting to muggle ways, while still retaining parts of her magic. She fought in the battle, but I think that was more for avenging Cedric. Once Voldemort was defeated, I think that she would take a small step back from the magical world.
As for writing her story, I don't have any plans to, but who knows what will happen in the future?
Thank you for your kind words!
Joop :] Report Review
I love it so far! So sweet how he saved her!
But I'm not sure if I will like it anymore when the date goes wrong, unless they will still end up together happily of course!Author's Response: Oh, it will end up all good! Report Review
Oh this is amazing!
Is this like Bella and Edward that she is having hallucinations?
Oh I'm so curious please write a new chapter soon!Author's Response: I have already written the next chapter, but it has been waiting to e validated. Report Review
I love it! I certainly will be reading more! I'm curious what Cho's part will be in this story! Report Review
Oh my gosh I so adored it! It almost made me cry!
I really think this is how it went sort of. I really beleive Cho and Cedric had a relationship so much closer then the books give away. Well done! Report Review
First I thought, wow this chapter is to long I can't bring myself to read that! But than I saw your please note down the story and I thought: She is right just read! And I'm so glad I did because I love it! I hope you will be writing more chapters! Don't let the lack of reviews scare you away! I just post my first story on this site so I'm not quite sure how it works here but I notice on other fanfics I have, the more chapters you place the more it gets read! So please keep posting and your banner is goregous!
Love xChoAuthor's Response: Gahh I know! I fear the crazy length is scaring people away >< Thanks so much for giving it a chance though! Haha. I'll definitely have at least one more chapter up of this story soon, but I can't make any guarantees about how much I'll be able to update this :/ I just sort of posted it because I had it on my computer and I figured why not, hahaha. Good luck with your story! This site is a bit daunting, I must say, but it's also really fun too! Thanks so much for reviewing!! Report Review
I'm a big fan of Cedric and Cho and I'm very curious to Cedric's point of view of the story. However though this chapter is almost to short to really find something of it but your writing style is amazing so I hope you will be writing more so I can give a better judgement!
Love xChoAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! :) Report Review
This is how it should have gone!! :|
Of course the Harry Potter series would have been a bit less excited but who cares! :D As long Cho and Cedric are happy together!
I love this story!!Author's Response: Ah, thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked it!
Yes, the series would've been less exciting if this would've happened, but at least they'd be happy together :)
Thanks again for reading and reviewing! Report Review
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