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Review #1, by devon380One Second Can Be A Lifetime: Choices

12th January 2011:
OMG! This is very suspenseful! I love the way it connects with the other story, The Longest Walk of Her Life.

Please continue this. I want to know how they all react to Draco casting the Aveda Kedavra.

Will they have a happy ending?

Author's Response: Now, you must know that an author can't reveal the ending in review you'll have to wait while the story goes through the queue. :(

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Review #2, by devon380Regretfully Yours: Inner Turmoil

8th January 2011:
waah!! Poor Draco...this chapter made me cry for Draco.. T_T
At first I thought that the title referred to Hermione, but then it turns out it refers to Draco..


Author's Response: Thanks. I am glad you enjoyed (in the cry for draco kind of way). :)

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Review #3, by devon380Graduation: Graduation

1st January 2011:
This is so sad.

I appreciate the way you write this oneshot in a way that a reader does not have to necessarily read the other story (Crimes of Passion)... But in a way it can also lead a reader to read Crimes of Passion.

To tell you the truth, I didn't like Crimes of Passion to end. I loved the way you explored Draco and Hermione's relationship.

And yeah, I believe Hugo is Draco's son in this fic.

I pity Draco and Hermione's predicament in Graduation.

Especially the last part where Draco is about to shake hands with Hugo...and I quote:

"Hugo had reached out his hand again. Draco gazed at it for a moment. He took it gingerly, pressing palm against palm, lifting fingers up and down, working a mechanism of politeness, all the while trying to work out whether this was the clue of clues. He was desperately aware that this could be his son, and desperately aware that they would never shake hands again."


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Review #4, by devon380Choices and Chances: Disaster by Design

1st January 2011:
*Ahh! Pansy you're so BAD!*

Please continue this entertaining story.

I love how you have developed Draco and Hermione's relationship, especially the part where Hermione finally knows who Wolfy Wizard is.

I also liked the "owling part" because it reminds me of the movie, You've Got Mail.


More power to you.

Author's Response: Well it keeps the mystery alive for the both of them, for her not knowing exactly who she is talking to, to be always wondering and imagining...

Love Pepper

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Review #5, by devon380Alliances and Love Affairs: Change of Heart

29th December 2010:
This has got to be one of my regrets for not checking out harrypotterfanfiction sooner (I've been away for 6 months...). I just recently viewed this story in my favorites for any updates and I find out that this has been abandoned.


I'm really sad after finding out that you won't be able to finish writing this story.

Anyway, I liked how you portrayed Draco as a wizard seeking redemption as an Auror. I also like how in this chapter, Kent and Hermione are slowly not hitting it off while Draco and Hermione's relationship has slowly progressed (as was written in the previous chapters when Hermione decided to follow Harry's advice and have a "relationship" with Draco).

Anyway, if you don't mind, may I ask how you would have developed and ended the story? Just for me to have some closure...

Or maybe you'll continue the story?
*super hopeful*
*crosses fingers and hopes for more draco and hermione from chasingautumn*


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Review #6, by devon380renaissance: The First Questionnaire

26th June 2010:
I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you can post more soon...

by the way, I like the title...and their project... ;)
Are you still gonna use the Ryan character?I'm just curious...

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I'm so glad that you enjoyed it :D ::kisses::
I've been meaning to write i swear!! but for some odd reason, even in the summer, im busy. -_- but i will find time. I think i may need to pause and make a skeleton of the whole story because there are so many different paths this could go.

Oh and I'm glad you liked the title and project- i like YOU ;)

And yes, i am going to use Ryan, he will appear later in the story. ::hint hint:: Although I don't know how big of importance he will play.

Thanks so much for this review


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Review #7, by devon380Secret: Secrets

21st June 2010:
I like the way you incorporate the story with the song... The song was in my head the whole time I was reading this...

Author's Response: thanks, im glad you liked it =] it means that im getting better at those lol =]

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Review #8, by devon380Draco, Please Don't: Stop

21st June 2010:
Was draco trying to kill himself? Your story was bittersweet though...I'm glad it ended well...
I take it the fourth word was "stop" ?
as in "draco please don't stop"

hehehe... ;)

Author's Response: yes to everything lol =]

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Review #9, by devon380The Wolf in Me.: Prologue: Darkness of the Night.

21st June 2010:
hmm, I thought the first chapter would be longer...but it's cool...
I just started to get interested because Hermione got scratched by "werewolf-Lupin" is all...
please post soon... ;)

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Review #10, by devon380Alliances and Love Affairs: Alice Place

21st June 2010:
more please... It's a good thing you updated because I lost my printout of your story and I forgot the title so I couldn't search for it. But then I happened to glance at the latest updated stories the other day and I noticed the title and the summary and it was so familiar so I checked it out. So thank you for updating...
please write more..

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much for this review! it's means alot to me :) I went straight to writing after I read it and hopefully I'll be done with the next chapter today or tomorrow.

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Review #11, by devon380Potter, Please Tell Her Something: Part 1: Tears of an Angel

21st June 2010:
Woah...Harry had to tell Hermione all that Draco said?I hope he didn't forget anything

please post part 2 soon... I like the chapter pic and the banner by the way...

Author's Response: Yep! Harry was in charge! And i'm working on part 2! Thanks so much!

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Review #12, by devon380Overcoming Darkness: Stupefy!

21st June 2010:
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. It was like a rollercoaster ride...Each chapter left me asking for more. I like the fact that you slowly built up the tension/attraction/relationship between draco and hermione... and then it all went tumbling down because of something seen at the wrong time by Draco...(miscommunication at its best..!)
hehehe...*wink wink*
I can't wait for the next chapter... please post soon... thanks...

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, I'm glad you're liking it so far. I did work to build up their relationship appropriately, and I'm glad you found it believable =)

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Review #13, by devon380Worth More: Worth More

19th June 2010:
please post a continuation...pretty please?
I especially like the last part of the story...where malfoy bares his soul to hermione...
please write a continuation, i have to confess that i got hooked on your story..

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Review #14, by devon380Family Curses: Chapter 4: intelligence is something bigger than any human.

19th June 2010:
I love the part where Draco meets Teddy...and Teddy repeatedly asking what's "christening" ?

please post soon...

Author's Response: You review the wrong fic! Sorry :) ...

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Review #15, by devon380Simply Irresistible: Pretty Woman

19th June 2010:
please post soon...

i like your was fun to read..


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Review #16, by devon380The Baby Project: Bon Chance for a Malfoy

17th June 2010:
Woah!!! Major cliffy going on... I can't wait for the next chapter.
This chapter was very tense...from the start I was hanging from the edge of my seat.
I can't believe the ending! Please post soon...

p.s. I love the part where Hermione figures out why Draco keeps on saying "I could care less either way"

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Review #17, by devon380To Give The Devil His Due: Chapter One

17th June 2010:
what's next..?
i'm intrigued by your story.. please post soon...

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Review #18, by devon380When Was The Last Time You?: When Was The Last Time You Owned Up?

17th June 2010:
Ahhh!! The blonde saviour... none other than the Precious Pureblood himself... ;-P
more please...
by the way, I like the way you write, the way you describe what's going on in Hermione's mind and the chapter descriptions.
Can I ask though? why does every chapter begin with "when was the last time you?"...I'm just curious...
please post soon...thanks.

Author's Response: Hi,
The answer to your question is: I used to be on a Harry Potter forum for fanfiction lovers and they used to have random challenges where you could just use them for inspiration. For this particular one I was given 100 words to use in the story somewhere, most people used them all in one-shots, however, I thought why not turn it into a one-hundred chaptered novel. Hence the reason that When Was The Last Time You *insert word here* came about. I've got 74 of the chapters done already and each of them corresponds with the words after the "When was the last time you" as the main theme of the chapter. I'm glad you like it and thanks for reviewing! :)

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Review #19, by devon380Choices and Chances: A new candidate

17th June 2010:
Bwahaha...what WILL happen when they finally know who the other person wearing the mask was?
More please...
I think it would be really entertaining when they finally know the truth. Plus I do agree with your premise...that Draco and Hermione would be attracted with each other if they didn't know the person/see the face behind the mask...because they do have certain prejudices with regards to each other...
They're like Pride and Prejudice in magical overtones. Hehehe...
Please post soon..

Author's Response: Thats kinda the feel I'm aiming for. But Hermione and Draco could be a great couple if they could get past themselves and I want the story to have a flavour of Austen but be my own. How am I doing on that front? I'd love to hear more from you.


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Review #20, by devon380Never Hurt Hermione Granger... Result: Draco Malfoy: Advice From Malfoy, the Truth and a Bright Plan

17th June 2010:
Why DOES Malfoy care about Hermione's feelings? Anyway, I am really intrigued by the story plus I wanna find out what Hermione has in store for Ron. *evil laugh*
More please...hehehe...
also, I like the part in chapter 3 where Draco looks at her in an odd way and he gives her advice on Ron...So odd yet endearing!
Please post soon..thanks..

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it!
Yeah, I actually didn't have that in there at first. I went back and added it later. It worked out well.(:

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Review #21, by devon380I Hate to See You Cry: Chapter 9

17th June 2010:
I like your story, please continue writing. I actually downloaded the printerfriendly copy so I could read it all in one setting. Chapter 3 was really tense...with Draco coming back to Hermione and hearing her secret...woah!
I like how you write, by the way. Stream of consciousness style? I dunno know..but I enjoy reading your fanfic. But sometimes I tear up... (T_T) *sob* especially the moments where Hermione tortures herself.

I hope to read more from you soon.
More power.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am almost done with the next chap so look out for it!

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