Reading Reviews From Member: Efrat
  
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Review #1, by EfratOnward, to Greater Things: Chapter 1 Preparation

15th May 2013:
The story seems good. can't wait to read about the wedding.
update soon

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Review #2, by EfratOnward, to Greater Things: Chapter 1 Preparation

14th May 2013:
wow third story! 21 chapters so far! can't believe it! I also can't believe that Harry's been through rehab, that Sirius sued them for custody (glad that the baby is making them better)

I love that Harry didn't forget his muggle side (Toy story rocks!) and that he plays Quidich!
love Harry and Teddy's relationship. It's really sweet

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Review #3, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 57 Epilogue

30th April 2013:
I can't believe the story is over. It's been a long time! You should be proud of it! It's so well written!

I can't believe you've killed Tonks! how could you do it? poor Remus and Teddy.
I'm sad for Harry about everything that happend to him: the drinking problem, his fight with Sirius and his obvious strugעel to make a life for himself after the war. At least he has Ginny.

I hope Remus is ok! and Sirius! I hope he and Harry can work things out.

looking forward for the next on!

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Review #4, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 56 Kings Cross Station

21st April 2013:
The update this morning was a wonderful surprise. Concentrating during my chemistry lab was hard as I kept thinking about the chapter that I had to red. And what a chapter it was.

I have to say that having James and Lily on the platform with Harry made so much more sense than Dumbledore. I remember that I was disappointed about it while reading DH.
That part was really sad. I almost started crying on the train. I could really feel Harry's pain.

I can't wait for the epilogue, and the sequel. I hope the sequel will tell about Harry and Ginny's life together and about every thing that happens after Voldemort's death. I really love your story and way of writing and the changes youv'e made to the story and the character. I would be really sad to say good bye. Especially after reading about them for 6 (!!!) years.

Please, update soon.

oh, and where is Sirius? I hope his not dead!

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Review #5, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 55 The Battle of Hogwarts Part II

6th April 2013:
great chapter! I was so glad to find out that you updated!

the evacuation part was really intense. my heart was pounding hard the entire time! I was really worried that they won't make it!

the part in which Harry is leaving to go to Voldemort was really heart breaking- not only are Ron and Hermione watching him go, but Ginny is calling his name and Sirius Is there also! all watching him die!

I really need an update. and a fast one. please

oh, and about the changing of the words: don't worry about it. It was on April 1st and harrypotterfanfiction. com have a tradition of pranks and stuff. It was funny: every time Hermione name was written, there was insted "Herm...Hermi... Why don't you have an easier name?" and stuff like that. The sex scenes were really weird.

PS: an update on April 11th will be a wonderful birthday present for me. (but if not, I'll consider this chapter an early one :))

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Review #6, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 54 The Battle of Hogwarts Part I

19th March 2013:
great chapter! Oh my god what happend to Harry?!

for a minute I thought that you killed Ron. I don't know what I would have done had that happen. Don't scare me like that again!

the part with voldemort kissing snape was so strange and freaky. it me feel uncomfortable and I wasnt even there!

like always, can't wait for the next one.

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Review #7, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 53 The Prelude

7th March 2013:
oh my GOD! you did not stop there! WOW what a chapter! my heart is still racing! can't wait for the next one!
MY GOD!

PS
congratulations on getting 500 reviews :)

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Review #8, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 52 Before the Storm

7th March 2013:
It's so weird, yet great- I've just finished a new chapter of yours but I have another one to read right after! every time you update I'm waiting for the next chapter and now I have it!

Great chapter. Harry's dream was interesting. I wonder if Snape have something to do with them.
Can't wait to read the next one :P

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Review #9, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 51 Snape's Tale

20th February 2013:
Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! Great way to celebrate the end of exams
I liked reading the part with Snape's memories. I was curious about Harry's saving from Malfoy manor. Also, I think Harry's reaction to every thing was spot on .
Can't wait to read what's coming.

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Review #10, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 50 The Plan

6th February 2013:
I've always wondered how Harry would react to him being a Horcruxes if he had any time to process it. I have to say that your description of his reaction was quit good. I think this is how he really would have reacted (perhaps not the drinking part though).
Can't wait to read about the Hogwarts trip. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon. This story makes this month of exams so much better.

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Review #11, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 49 Imbalance

30th January 2013:
I was really nervous at first. I really thought Sirius died. It never occurred to me that you might kill Fred. That was a big relief (because Sirius is alive) and a big shock (I had to get up of the chair after reading that Fred died to calm down).
I'm glad Sirius and Harry made up and that Harry could understand what Sirius went though all the times Harry was hurt.
Can't believe Draco killed Fred. I feel like there is something that we don't know hrer. It just doesn't seems to fit him...

Can't wait to read about Harry's reaction to every thing Snape'll tell him. I wonder if he'll tell him that he's a Horoxrux.

Can't wait for the next one.

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Review #12, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 48 Downtime

12th January 2013:
Why? why would you end a chapter like this?!
great chapter. I'm worried about Harry and Sirius. I hope they'll be ok.

can't wait for the next one

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Review #13, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 46 The Order Convenes

29th December 2012:
Great chapter! I was beginning to get worried when there were no updates. I hope every thing is all right with you.

The part with the Diadem at Malfoy Manor, well that SUCKS! poor Harry though I can't wait to read about the invetion to Malfoy Manor. Should be fun

can't wait for the next one.
Have a great new year!

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Review #14, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 44 Catch Up

11th December 2012:
oh God. something bad happend to Sirius. right? I hope his Ok, I felt really sorry for Harry. poor guy really wanted to see Siriurs.

as always the chapter was briliant. can't wait for more.

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Review #15, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 43 Reunite

2nd December 2012:
yey an update! I'm so happy! I couldn't stop thinking about this story for the past 2 weeks. couldn't wait for the updete.

I'm so happy that there will be a sequel. just the other day I sudenly thought to myself how sad I'll be when this story ends. I'm really glad to know there is still some time :)

I'm a little sad there was no Sirius in this chapter, or Teddy, but I'm ok, there will be an update next week :)

100/100

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Review #16, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 42 The Redemption of Snape

18th November 2012:
wow I just checked the website out of habit and suddenly saw you've updated! that was a very nice surprise!

I'm really glad Draco saw what his father was doing. It'll show him that Harry treated him like a human.
I'm really curious to know how the rescue went along.

Can't wait for an update. Hope It'll come as quickly as this one.
have a great week!

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Review #17, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 41 Uncertain Trust

10th November 2012:
this chapter is so good, I had to read it again!
thanks for the pick on Sirius! it was great to see him again :)
the last part with Snape was really good!
poor Harry. he is not having a very good time :/

update soon! can't wait!

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Review #18, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 40 The Malfoy Inquisition

25th October 2012:
400th review! woohoo!
wow that chapter. can't wait to see what happens to Harry, Ron and Hermione next.

keep it up! that chapter totaly made the first week of school so much better :)

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Review #19, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 39 Vault Seven Hundred and Fifteen

12th October 2012:
oh no you didn't! can't beleive you stoped there! my god!
great chapter. the part with ron was really funny.
cna't wait for more!

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Review #20, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 38 The Finer Details

16th September 2012:
great chapter! can't wait for more and to see what happens in the bank!

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Review #21, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 37 The Forbidden Forest

1st September 2012:
Not slow at all! It was great! really sweet to. Loved the small reunions.
I'm REALLY happy this chapter came so fast! the week didn't even end! keep it up like this! It's a wonderful way to start a new week :)

Can't wait for more!

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Review #22, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 36 Risky Business

28th August 2012:
great! really well written! it was great to read about Ginny and learn what happened to her.
can't wait for the next chapter (yay for next week!)

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Review #23, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 35 Malfoy's Negotiation

6th August 2012:
that was a great way to selebrate the end of my tests! great chapter!
poor Harry, what is happening to him?! and the Durslys! what the heck!
as I said, great chapter, can't wait for more.

ps.
I LOVE it that they are stealing Electricity from the Neighbor! HA!

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Review #24, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 34 Malfoy's Explanation

2nd July 2012:
that dream spooked me! poor Harry for dreaming it.
can't wait for more

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Review #25, by EfratChasing The Inevitable: Chapter 33 Kreacher's Report

30th May 2012:
good chapter. I like it how you put in some funny parts in it.
can't wait for more!

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