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Review #1, by bestliesDraco in Leather Pants: Fandom: Sometimes it's Scary.

9th February 2012:
This was hilarious! I actually like some Dramione, but I totally see the points you were making. If it's not written well, the ship can be a bit... much. This was fabulous, though. I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #2, by bestliesShadows: Shadows

7th June 2010:
First off, I love your word choice. It's absolutely lovely. The way you describe things is amazing. Although we know from the info who the characters are, it'd be nice to have some variation with the text instead of just "he" and "she". Names are good things! haha. But if you didn't want to use names, things such as "the boy" work as well.

Anyway, this really was lovely writing. It was a gorgeous concept and you made it all come together so well. I love their emotions, their feelings. It was great.

My only problem was it was kind of boring. Although it was great, there wasn't much that happened. I wish there had been more, but at the same time, what you had was great.

Sorry this is kind of a lame review, but you did really well with this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!

That's just about the greatest compliment you could have ever give me, since word choice is something I am personally trying to challenge myself with.

I have a huge habit of rarely using names. For some reason names, to me, anyway, break up the flow. But I definitely see where you're coming from. It wouldn't hurt to spice things up a bit. I think I'll take a read through and see where I might add some variation.

You're definitely right. This story is based on description rather than action, emotion rather than dialogue. That was actually one of my worries. Luckily, you got through it and don't dislike it, so yay! I don't really know how to make it more exciting without changing it entirely.

Not a lame review at all! I appreciate any reviews I get, since I don't get many, but this was very helpful, honest, and thorough, so thanks for taking the time to read and review!


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