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Review #1, by HP_LuvrDear Cupid: Potions and Fake Girlfriends

11th July 2010:
Oh goodness, I have a feeling this will not end well. Lex sort of reminds me of Luna, except not as out there. I love your writing style. It's fluid and not very many grammar or spelling mistakes. I hope you update soon, this is turning into a really good story :) Keep writing!!

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Review #2, by HP_LuvrTime to Pretend: No Sympathy, Plenty of Sarcasm

15th June 2010:
Ok, so I just found this story and so far i really enjoy it! At first I didn't really like how Claire's POV was at the beginning of each chapter, but now after reading more, I think its necessary. Ace seems to be getting kind of moody, which im not sure I like, but I think it's just because of her friends.
Your writing style is kinda choppy from one chapter to the next, but the chapters themselves are brilliant.
Overall, keep updating pretty please!! :)

Author's Response: yeah, i really think Claire's POV adds a lot to the story...and don't worry! Ace is about to have a very rude awakening! my writing style is something i need to work on, but hopefully i am learning! thanks for the review!!!

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