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Review #1, by bayoubabe985The 'Accidental' De-throning of Rebecca Thomas.: Moments

13th September 2012:
Cute story, but I'd suggest getting rid of the gap between sentences.

Author's Response: Rules at hpff require me to have double returns between paragraphs so even though they look a bit silly i can't... :P Thanks for the feedback though!

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Review #2, by bayoubabe985Against the Odds: Ready or Not

12th September 2012:
Word of advice: Get rid of the ridiculously large spaces between paragraphs. It's really very distracting and doesn't allow the story to flow.

Author's Response: Sorry. I don't do it on purpose. When I submit my chapter there are normal sized spaces, but by the time it is published they are frickin' huge. I think I've found out how it fix it though, so hopefully they'll go back to normal soon.

~yerawizard27
Rachel


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Review #3, by bayoubabe985Silver Linings: Albus: When Insightful Friends Drink

2nd September 2012:
Loved it. Keep 'em coming.

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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