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Review #1, by TheNextRowlingRiya Potter - Harry's sister?: The Marauders' Map

28th June 2010:
You need to change the things like "I will join you tomorrow". Change them to "I'll join you tomorrow." Put contractions because it makes them sound like real teenagers. Doing the thing you do, It's like making them sound as if they were adults or they were born in 1960 England. But it's a nice story, nevertheless.

Author's Response: Thanx 4 reading n reviewing!! I'll surely follow ur suggestions. I m glad u njoyed it:D

Keep reading... :)


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Review #2, by TheNextRowlingOf Square Pegs and Round Holes: What Now?

22nd June 2010:
Poor writing?! It most definitely isn't! It's awfully horrible!. KIDDING! It's a good read if one might say, I like it. No, I love it. It's tremendous writing, It's monumental.

Author's Response: LOL. Thanks for the review!

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