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Review #1, by ontenterhooks She's the Tempest: Chapter Twenty: Truth, the High Tide

20th July 2011:
AH!
Please, you have to update! Please, please, please? With a cherry on top?
As you can see, i'm not ontenterhooks

Author's Response: I know, I know. I will try! Definitely. Thanks :)

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Review #2, by ontenterhooks Lies: Chapter 26

18th August 2010:
OMG.0thank you for updating! I have observed something. Neither times did they use protection! Does that mean she's going to bo pregnant soon? I hyperventilated when I noticed

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Review #3, by ontenterhooks Annie: Three

6th May 2010:
I love you and your stories!
Therefore, I bestow upon you the speediest updating skills anyone could ever gift another.

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Review #4, by ontenterhooks Kiss and Tell: Sixth Year, Part Two

6th May 2010:
HEYY!
Let me just say that, I LOVE YOUR STORY.
I agree with one of the other comments; that no one really seems to follow what decade they're in. It drives me crazy.
Anyway, I wish you the speediest updating talents anyone could ever bestow upon another =)

Author's Response: Hey! I'm glad you love my story! And I'm also glad it warrants all caps. :) I understand how you feel about the decades. Goodness, I can understand slight discrepancies (I'm sure there's some in mine...), but some of them are just ridiculous.
Thank you for the speedy updating talents! haha I'll try to use them! :D


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Review #5, by ontenterhooks Lies: Chapter 25

6th May 2010:
hey!
so i've been obsessively stalking your story for the past couple of weeks holding my breath, hoping for an update and ITS FINALLY HERE!
okay, let me just say that i love, love, love your story. you did a great job with draco's character and his behavior towards hermione. its a really authentic situation, and i like the pace their relationship has taken.
i have to say though, i was kind of shocked with this chapter. i thought that when it came around to their 'consummation' hermione would show a little restraint and it would be draco who was all over her. in my head i pictured herimone to be telling her self that she really didn't want this, but eventually just let the spell take over and give in. and that's where i thought you would end the scene. also, i imagined that draco would have been all over her the second they apparated to Miami.
i'm sorry, but i was kind of disappointed with this chapter.
BUT I STILL LOVE YOUR STORY AND WILL CONTINUE STALKING IT =P

Author's Response: Hi! Well, I'm happy you've been stalking my fic. :D And I'm glad you've been enjoying it. I am sorry that you didn't like this chapter as much. I suppose I didn't add quite enough about how strong the spell was. In my mind, as the night got later and later it became almost irresistibly strong. Malfoy had already had difficulty resisting the spell and her and once they were alone and touching (the physical touch really catapulted things into motion) it was too much and all rational thought was out the window. I could have elaborated more and shown that. So I apologize for rushing through and not rereading it enough times to catch that. :) But, nevertheless, thank you for your opinion. I will certainly be cognizant of fully explaining my view in the future so, hopefully, it is crystal clear to the reader what is meant to be happening and the motives behind the characters actions.

So thank you! Thank you for reviewing, it's really appreciated! And I hope to see you after Chapter 26! :)


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