Gahh I wish there was another chapter! i'm very impatient :) Anyway, your story is well structured, and is moving at a great pace so far! I can't wait until your next post! I can see enormous potential in your writing :) Good luck love.Author's Response: Aww, well that's really nice to hear. The next chapter will be up shortly. It's being edited right now, actually.
Thank you so much for the reviews... they really helped (with the story and with giving me some inspiration).
-flufff Report Review
I liked this chapter even more than the last one! You're a very witty writer I'm starting to see.
One note however (and this is out of love), If you go through an editing process anytime soon, I would add some more of Harry's suspicions about Draco a little earlier. I think I remember one, but it wasn't as prominent. If you do that, when he directly accuses Draco it'll be a bit more believable.
Good job as always love!Author's Response: You're right about that, there actually is only the one time where Harry suspects Draco - in front of Hermione... but I probably will edit the earlier chapters once I post some more. Thanks again! You're awesome!
-flufff Report Review
I liked this chapter a lot, very enjoyable and easy to read. I like Malfoy seems awfully chipper around Hermione sometimes... wonder what that means?
Your Ron is perfect to me by the way. Not out of this world different at all! Great job :)Author's Response: Yes, he does, doesn't he? ;D Hmm... I'll try not to reveal anything yet! And I'm so happy to hear you like my Ron. He's hopeless, though.
-flufff Report Review
I'm really interested by this first chapter! Well done :) I liked the bit about Ron hitting Harry. It seemed like a natural reaction for him.
I'm excited to read more!Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad that part seemed realistic.
-flufff Report Review
I loved this story! I don't usually read Harry/Hermione fanfiction (this is only my second or third) and yours really is great. I loved how you described the final scene and thier coming together. I'll for sure read the sequel!Author's Response: So sorry i'm responding so late, I had no idea I had gotten a review. Any way, I'm glad you're reading Harry/Hermione fics and are enjoying mine. that makes me feel so great you have no idea! I'm hoping the sequel gets you hooked further ;) thanks so much for reviewing. It really means alot to me Report Review
Looks pretty interesting so far! I like how you described everyone's lives and Hermione and Harry;s friendship.Author's Response: thank you =) Report Review
I think Hermione's helping out is right along with her character. Great job so far!!!Author's Response: Great? GREAT??? WHOPE :) Report Review
Do continue please! I'm excited for more!!!Author's Response: Practically, I did. HAHA. Now there are six chappies. Report Review
A very good start. I like the way that you've described all thr characters so far, and how you've led into the oncoming plot. The description of Georges grief was very real, and good to read. I look forward to more :)Author's Response: I just let myself go with the flow when I wrote this, and I guess it came naturally to me... all that grief at losing at losing a close confidante... and someone who is essentially a soulmate. THANKS SO MUCH FOR REVIEWING!!! Report Review
Continue continue CONTINUE! Absolutely brillitant and original :) Most original Dramione I've found in a while. Good job love!Author's Response: Oh my gosh thank you!! Thanks so much, that's made my day! ^__^ I shall continue!! =D lol, thanks muchly!!! Report Review
Good chapter! I'm actually liking Blaise more and more =) Can't wait for the next one!Author's Response: aw everyone is :] Report Review
Hey, I saw that you are in need of a beta, and I'd be willing to help you out. You can email me any chapters you want edited, and I'll do my best :) My email is:
Hope to hear from you
~autumnAuthor's Response: thanks that will be great i email u soon with the next chapter and thank again 4 helping xoxxo Report Review
This is so beautiful! I love your writing style, and the song you picked for this is amazing! It's sad they can't be together though :( great work!Author's Response: thank you! you are so sweet =) I originally heard the song on So You Think You Can Dance, and I was blown away by the song so i had to download it. I was reading Deathly Hallows at the time so it all fused together and created this.It was my way of therapy after learning Harry and Hermione would not be together in canon. very sad =( Report Review
EW! Blaise is such a creep! ugh, Slytherins...
Anyway, this is a really great story! I like the plot line and the way you're writing the characters is great. I can't wait to see what happens next!Author's Response: :D thank you so much! Report Review
I absolutely love this! It's movng at a great pace, and I think the plot is brilliant. Your stlye is captivating and your character portral is spot on. (I adore your Draco)
I WILL keep reading, so update soon!Author's Response: ^_^ Thank you so, so much for your lovely review! You're so kind! *hands karma cookie*
I hope my future writing will meet your expectations; I'm working on the Chapter Four draft as we speak (or, rather, as I type! ^_^).
I'm so happy you enjoy reading Draco, and thanks for sticking with this novella (which, after all, is still in its early chapters!).
THANK YOU! :) *smiles* Cheers!
Hallows Report Review
Gah! update soon please! I really like the plot line for this and your writing style is very entertaining. This will turn out great I'm sure!Author's Response: Thank you, getting reviews is such a confidence boost and I will be having more time on my hands now that college is out the way! Report Review
You've done a great job so far! I really like the way you described everyone's grief; it made perfect sense. I like the character of Harry the most =) I do wish the chapters were a bit longer though.
Good luck, and I'll keep reading!Author's Response: Thank you so much : ) Report Review
Wow! That was really good! Nice description. I'll be looking for an update from you!
(PS: Yay for living Fred!!!)Author's Response: thank you so much! you just made my day! :)
hehehe yeah I cant let Fred die, its just too depressing! Report Review
Terms of Service
categories & genres
short story collection