If you listen closely, you can hear the sound of my heart breaking as Elaquay says yes to Derrick. Gutted. enjoying the story though xDAuthor's Response: Yeah, I reluctantly made her say yes to Derrick. Firstly because she's a teenage girl and Derrick is an attractive sweetheart whose interested in her. She loves the feeling of being romantically admired...since she isnt getting any of that for James (at least not yet), and Derrick is an addition to the story that heightens the drama. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story :D. I'll update as soon as i can! Report Review
This is not going to end well...Author's Response: Absolutely not ;) Report Review
Wow, this is powerful, emotional and gut-wrenching, reducing me closer to tears with every sentence. This is really good and it's one of those stories where you're waiting for the resolution, for the happy ending and then you realise that there isn't one, there'll never be one, because in real life, there wouldn't be a happy ending. Brilliant 10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. This story was really hard to write, and sometimes happy endings don't happen. Not every story ends with love or good grades, ya know? Report Review
Absolutely fantastic, loved it xDAuthor's Response: thankyou! I'm glad you did :) Report Review
Loving it so far, please please please keep writing :P HPAuthor's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is in the works :) Report Review
I was going to wait until I'd read all the chapters before reviewing but "I'm going to have to tell famous Harry Potter that I've killed his eldest son" Brilliant xD Report Review
Ouch, poor Dom :'( I wonder where they head next and indeed, is there any way back for her and Lorcan?Author's Response: Who knows? We'll find out eventually. You know I tend to drag out such things. Report Review
No Amelie! No! I'll never understand some people's tendancy to try and lie their way out of trouble, let alone turn down James Potter :/Author's Response: IKR! Amelie and James are both idiots! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Oh such a short story :( HPAuthor's Response: What can I say? Short stories are meant to be short. But there's still plenty to come, too! Thanks for reviewing :) Report Review
Let's just hope Henrietta gets hit by a bus between this chapter and chapter 3 ;) HPAuthor's Response: Something like that, yeah. Thanks so much for your lovely comments and for reading and reviewing! Hope you keep reading! Report Review
Two words: Love. It. More please :) HP Report Review
Ouch, some seriously harsh stuff there but Clearwater definitely deserved it, good to see Penelope getting involved in pranking, sure as hell reveals her Slytherin side. Hopefully we'll see more of James and Lorcan soon enough :) HPAuthor's Response: Clearwater definitely does! And it'll only get better :) Report Review
The awkward moment when I beg you to write a sequel and then realise one's already up... sorry about that :) Anyway, an excellent first chapter and I hope this is as good or (if it's even possible) better than Raining. :) HPAuthor's Response: Haha, no worries! Glad you spotted it! Thank you so much for your kind words! Report Review
IAEHJFGOJOEHJB sorry, that was my brain exploding :') Having just read this story from beginning to end i loved every second of it and although i felt heart-broken when James screwed it up, i kind of like the ending (what can i say, i'm a romantic). I do love your general wit and writing style, moments in this story had me in fits and tears of laughter. Please please say you'll write a sequel and we can see James and Amelie again :P HPAuthor's Response: KABOOOM! Brains all over the walls over my story? You are a fan-girl. Thanks, I guess. As long as you clean it up. THERE IS A SEQUEL BUT YOU'VE ALREADY DISCOVERED IT. THIS REVIEW RESPONSE IS LIKE TIME-TRAVEL! THANKS THANKS THANKS FOR YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS, REALLY. YOU'RE THE BEST. Report Review
Woo, love it :) Not usually a fan of Scorpius stories but this one seems to be changing my mind ;) HPAuthor's Response: Awh, thank you! I'm glad to hear that. Report Review
Hi :) I absolutely love this. I've never found a Teddy/Lily before and it seems like such a good story. But with a cliffhanger like that, how can you limit it to a One-Shot? Please make this into a longer story, do it justice ;) HPAuthor's Response: Aww thank you. :) I've never seen any either, but then again, I don't exactly look for them. :P Oh but that's the fun part, letting the readers guess at all that could happen. Thank you for reviewing!! --Jenna Report Review
I love this story and i can't wait to see what happens next. but at the same time, i think it would've been a lot more intimate if they hadn't told everyone about it :/ Still, brilliant :) HP Report Review
Great first chapter, looking forward to reading more :) HPAuthor's Response: Thanks! Keep reviewing! Report Review
Another hilarious chapter, loved the letter from Harry, it seems Ginny may go nuts when she stops crying. It takes two to tango xD Love it. HPAuthor's Response: Hahaha, Ginny will explode. I think we all can't wait for THAT moment. Report Review
Loving it xD please update soon :) HPAuthor's Response: I'll try my hardest! Report Review
Dom, continues to make even the worst of situations a million times better with her wit and criticisms XD Not only is she one of my favourite all time characters but Lorcan and Penelope seem to enjoy driving her up the wall xD it's not a fun time to be Dom haha Hopefully it will work out soon :) HPAuthor's Response: Thank you very much :) Report Review
Hmm, i'd like to see the christmas chapter then have them head back to hogwarts XD That is their first time isn't it? :) I love this story so much so keep posting :D HPAuthor's Response: yes it is :) thank you! hmm, i'm leaning towards the christmas chapter too but im not sure it will be the fluff and cuteness people expect :/ xo Report Review
I physically had to shut my mouth after reading this chapter ;) HPAuthor's Response: Aha, yeah, it was... cliff-hanger-ish! Thank you for the review! Report Review
Love love love :) HPAuthor's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
I thought Wood was way out of line in this chapter (see I've reverted to calling him Wood, he no longer deserves the title Holden :D) and although what he said may have true to a degree, he certainly was harsh to Dom. Who, as usual, cracks me up with every single thought :D Pregnant Penelope is a right laugh, though i'm wondering when she'll tell James. Can't wait to see what you have planned for Jones :) Keep writing, loving every chapter :D HPAuthor's Response: Wood was SO out of line! It was ridiculous. But you know there's always gonna be a reason :) Report Review
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