Those damn thestrals! I really like your writing, and your character James Epson as well. Your descriptions of him really made me understand him well. The only thing I'd like to see is a heightened sense of insight into his mind - what's he thinking, with all this pain held inside since the death of his mother? I can't wait to find out the *reason* his poor mother was murdered....I'll keep reading!Author's Response: Why thank you. I'm currently working on chapter six, and the plots are getting deeper and much more fun to write. Please do keep reading, and tell your friends to as well! Report Review
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