Heartwrenching. Absolutely gorgeous. I was oohing and ahing the entire way through. The last part especially melted my heart. =) Report Review
Brilliant premise! I look forward to seeing what else you have in store for these two. =)Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Report Review
Wooo!!! :D There was an update! :D I loved this chapter. (I can't wait 'til you get your 'net back.)Author's Response: Thank you!!! me either! Report Review
lol... Jamesy was scared of a hair dryer... :D Love the update!Author's Response: haha yes . . . he was. And we all thought he was in Gryffindor, right? Heh heh, thanks for reviewinngg! Report Review
This reminds me of the musical "Wicked", and the song "No One Mourns the Wicked". I'd actually been playing with an idea similar to this in my head, but you did a great job with it here.
~Ala Report Review
Lol... woot! :D Great fun, this read. Keep on it, and great job!Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Your review literally brought a smile to my facee. :) Report Review
This is great fun... :D
Hope to see your next update soon!
~AlaAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
Hi. Alaska here, with her newly-minted account leaving proper reviews this time, because she want to. :)
In response to your question, yes, Hermione's my favorite character - well, her and Luna, which is why I loved your Luna chapter so much. I personally can't stand Ron in the books most of the time; he gets on my nerves with the whole taking-mother-and-her-cooking-for-granted / I'm-jealous-of-Harry thing throughout the series... Harry's fine; I used to wonder how he handled it all, because if I was in his situation, I'd probably be pissed off all the time.
Anyway, back to the review...
My favorite moments -
- "Pick whatever's cheaper." Oh, my God, Ron on the engagement ring... I almost died laughing.
- Dress Robes for Crookshanks... eugh... lol...
- The last two lines (orientation prefered books... rational thinking) were hilarious!
Great job! I hope you update soon!
~ Ala.Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review (though I scratched out what you said about Ron. How could you think such things?! :D)
(Sorry it's taken me such a ridiculously long time to respond. :( )
I love Hermione too, mainly because she's the proper symbol of intelligent, fiesty girl-power, but who also likes to dress up and look pretty when the occassion calls for it. :) And Luna is just originality personified. I find both of them very inspiring in their own way. :)
Heehee it always make me smile when people quote their favourite bits! Almost like I'm a famous writer or somthing. I can dream!!
Thank you again for your review!!
Good job so far. It still feels fairly expositional, but I assume it'll get better once the plot gets played out a little further.Author's Response: You're assumptions are correct and I'm glad you're sticking to this story. It makes me happy! Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
Very interesting and quite believable. A few grammar/spelling things, but all in all, very good, and very funny. :D
Author's Response: Thank you!! Report Review
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