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Review #1, by LilyRose_xThe Flowering of Love: Is it wrong? Or is it love?
4th April 2010:
I think that maybe (and I don't necessarily mean this is bad... Although I fail to see how I could make it look positive, but I am working on that and am sorry if it causes offense) that maybe, Lily is a little over-sensitive and it makes her a bit of a hipocrite (sp?) telling James to leave her alone when she started the conversation. However, that's just what I think of the first chapter and I like the story :) xx

Author's Response: oh no offense at all! i love all the advice i can get. i agree shes hypocritical, but i think i kind of did it on purpose. like at first she was justified in hating him, but now shes just being unreasonable about everything in regards to him. and then in the story she can learn how unreasonable she is...and how wonderful james is...and then they can start snogging! haha j/k (not really). thanks for the great review! (and PLEASE if you wouldn't mind with my other chapters. something went wrong, and i just can't figure out whats off). Thanks so much!

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