Reading Reviews From Member: nitenel
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Review #1, by nitenel30 Days of You and Me: Journal

12th April 2013:
I'm 90% sure Danielle is a really good friend and they joke about dating or something. I have so many friends like that... We shall see!

Author's Response: About 90% sure, huh? That's pretty confident. You'll have to wait and see ;) I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

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Review #2, by nitenelThe Chinese Potter Connection.: The Letter.

24th November 2012:
This looks like an interesting story. I'll be sure to keep an eye out for this one!

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Review #3, by nitenelEnemies with Benefits : Too Close

25th June 2012:
You updated on my birthday :)

What a great bday gift! Thanks! *8-)

And that emoticon is Harry "freaking" Potter

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Review #4, by nitenelMedeia: One

21st June 2012:
I'm interested in where this is going!

I found it quite interesting that she loves Lucius... That's a pretty uncommon feature in fanfics!

Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I don't like the idea that Lucius and Narcissa were an arranged marriage - I think there's plenty of evidence in the canon that they did love each other. Thanks for reading and reviewing this one!

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Review #5, by nitenelBadgers, Blushing and Gods of Lurve: These Lips are Virgin Lips

18th June 2012:
I re read this entire story last night. From 7:00 PM to 12:00 AM. It was just as good the second time.

Interesting enough though, I hated Emily and Eric more this time around and didn't want them to become friends again.

And now I ask you to please do a sequel. Or at least write something else. As I said in another revew, you are a fantastic writer and it would be a shame to waste your talents.

Please strongly consider it.

your fan,

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Review #6, by nitenelMidnight Over Broadway: Heel

1st June 2012:
This chapter was great!

I loved the parts with the Lupin kids and Ramses. It's making me dread having kids when I'm older though!


Author's Response: Apparently I like to write parenting and kids as a cautionary tale haha... No really it's fine! It's not so bad! When you're a parent, it's funny to read this stuff. At least when your kids are past that age, anyway. Thanks so much for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it!

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Review #7, by nitenelSomething Weird's Going On At Hogwarts: Two

28th May 2012:

Keep updating!

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Review #8, by nitenelNext Midnight: Weasley-Malfoy

11th May 2012:
Yay! I love this series! Keep up the superbly awesome work!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D

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Review #9, by nitenelThe Forbidden Love of Sirius Black: Awkwardness, Trouble and Detention to be.

25th April 2012:
Better late than never...

I liked the last two paragraphs. It made me smile

Update within the next month por favor! :)

Author's Response: Haha thanks! :) I'll try :D Glad you liked it.

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Review #10, by nitenelBreaking the Quidditch Code: The Good-Luck Ducks

19th March 2012:
I read all 47 chapters in two days. I think that's a record for me. One thing that I've been wondering about... What do you picture Nia looking like? I may have missed a chap image for her... I picture her as Inara from the tv show Firefly. Thoughts?

Seriously, this story is great. I now anxiously await the next chapter!

10/10 easily

Author's Response: OH MY GOSH.

Now that is serious dedication right there.

ACtually, the chapter image for chapter 8 is Nia :) But I REALLY think Inara works too! Really well, actually.

Thank you so much! I really hope you like the rest AND the sequel!

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Review #11, by nitenelGinny's Riddle: Denial

19th March 2012:
Excellent chapter!

Keep up the good work!

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Review #12, by nitenelThe Way I Am: Headlines, Swear Jars, and Food Fights

5th March 2012:
This is great. It's so similar but so different from your others.

Another 10/10.

Now update. I command you. Imperio.


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Review #13, by nitenelLove Goddesses, Overprotective Brothers, and James Potter: Sun Vomit, Balloon Animals, and Eggplant Head

5th March 2012:
You should update this story like now.

I am not even kidding. Update this story now.

Or I'll cry... Actually probably not...

But I will be sad!

In conclusion, please update. :)

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Review #14, by nitenelStill Delicate: Epilogue

18th February 2012:
Sigh... It's over...

Fantastic job! Can we assume that Laura and James are married/together? I like their chemistry.

I can't wait for more stuff by you! Would you ever consider writing a short story about Aidan at all? I think that would be pretty neat.

Keep on writing!


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Review #15, by nitenelVanishing Act: Chapter 28: Epilogue

1st February 2012:
Sigh... What an ending... Even though it was fairly cliched I liked it. It's a good to wrap up this story. I didnt really expect Scorpius and Lucy to get together, but I can see it happening.

For the last time on this story: 10/10

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Review #16, by nitenelThe Anatomy of a Bromance: (OF BROTHERS AND SISTERS)

20th January 2012:

That was fantastic... This really proves how talented of a writer you are! You can switch between humor and seriousness like that *snaps fingers*

Never stop writing!


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Review #17, by nitenelMoonlight: The Leave Taking and the Lemur

16th January 2012:
I guess that means Dumbledore's death is coming soon...

Author's Response: yes, you would be very correct on that score. :)
so sad! :(
thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Review #18, by nitenelBigger on the Inside: Lumos Maxima

3rd December 2011:
This is a fantastic story! Please update soon! You really have the doctor down.

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Review #19, by nitenelLeaving Scars: Delight Me With Your Name

11th November 2011:
This was very very very good!

My favorite character is Ted so far. Results will be up in a matter of minutes!

Author's Response: thank you very much. i love ted too

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Review #20, by nitenelUrsa Major: Nineteen Sixty-Eight: Christmas with Lucius

11th November 2011:
I like this so far! One thing I particularly enjoyed was the progression of time.

Results will be up this afternoon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I had hoped to be further along with the story, but I ran into NANO.

I appreciated the chance to do this, because it gave me a chance to do a bit of backstory, corresponding to my other ongoing project.

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Review #21, by nitenelGhosts in the Attic: The Photo Album

11th November 2011:
A good chapter! Results will be up later this afternoon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! :) Can't wait to see the results.

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Review #22, by nitenelDragons Awakening: Breaking

9th November 2011:
I was not expecting that... Oh well...

Poor Weasleys...

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Review #23, by nitenelFinding Bella: C is for Clearing

7th November 2011:
What a fascinating story. I love this. It's really drawing me in. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! There should be an update soon-ish (aka, once NaNo is over).

Thanks for the lovely reviews!
Aph xx

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Review #24, by nitenelFinding Bella: M is for Missing

7th November 2011:
Oooh that nightmare was one of the creepiest dreams I've read on this site. Kudos. I also really liked the scenes with Harry. I could really feel the awkwardness and sadness in the air.

Author's Response: I actually hate the nightmare, lol. It's my least favourite bit of the whole story. I dunno why...
Yeah, Harry's really awkward, hehe.

Aph xx

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Review #25, by nitenelFinding Bella: Prologue or A is for Alone

7th November 2011:
Hey this is Nitenel from the Black Sisters challenge on the forums!

I really enjoyed this first chapter. I like how you portrayed Cygnus and Druella as normal and nice people and not evil and insane as they are often portrayed as. It really sheds some light onto their characters.

Author's Response: Hey, there!
I've read a lot of stories where they're absolutely horrible and wanted to do something a bit different (I really loathe the idea that every pureblood has a horrible upbringing, it really annoys me) and they sort of turned out like that O.o Not quite was I was expecting, but I like them anyway :D

Aph xx

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