This was a fabulous story!
Am really gonna miss it... Just promise to post your next story soon? Please?
10/10Author's Response: haha thank you! glad you liked it :) Working on the next one as we speak so it shouldn't be a long wait! Report Review
Am sorry, but I felt this chapter was prolonged-A bit boring as there were no one in this except Lily and James
I want the Marauders!!
Post the next chapter soonAuthor's Response: meh oh well, can't please everyone. next chapter will be up in a bit. Report Review
The plot is really good!
I like it anyways
As you have said that you are a History major, your history is good
I like the plot (did I mention that?)
And, your grammar is fabAuthor's Response: Thank you, Esha! I'm so glad you enjoyed the first chapter. ^_^
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I would love to read other stories written by you!
I never thought, Rose would end up with jack! But, the end was fab Report Review
This story is getting over then?
The thing about the locket was a real twist in the chapter
Great chapter!! Report Review
It's coming to an end?
Everything seemed rushed in this chapter
But, in all it was good!
Update soon!!Author's Response: haha I'm sorry! I dont want it to end either :( Report Review
This is a fabulous story!!
I like your story, plot, writing, grammar, english and everything about this! Please post the next chapter soon because, I AM WAITINGAuthor's Response: Thank you so, so, so much!
It really means a lot. [:
And, if you have any suggestions or anything, feel free to tell me. :] Report Review
I haven't read a new-fine story in ages!
And I am very glad that I found yours
Post the next chapter ASAP Report Review
Well, I am enjoying!
I prefer both the relationships as Jack is such a sweet guy but Rose has feelings for Scorpius and sequel sounds as a real good ideaAuthor's Response: Great! I'm glad you're still enjoying it! I, too like both relationships, but I do particularly enjoy writing Jack's character. Yeah, I'm definately toying with the idea of a sequel. Sorry chapter updates haven't been very fast, I've had exams and haven't been around for the past couple days, as well as concentrating on another fic. Thanks for sticking with the story and for reviewing again. Report Review
Now the interesting part of the story begins!
But, you have taken a real long time to post this chapter
Hope you don't take this long for the next chapter!!Author's Response: haha don't worry, I won't. Life was crazy, but I have the rest of it written so it won't be long for another chapter :) Report Review
I really liked the tickle thing!
Update soonAuthor's Response: I gotchuu and thanks that was my fav scene Report Review
That was a bloody fant-a-bulous chapter!! Report Review
This story is wonderful and I don't want to lose interest so keep posting the chapters Report Review
This is a really good story, just get a banner for this story, as a banner attracts more readers
Your writing is good, keep it up and post the next chapter SOON Report Review
That was a brilliant chapter!!
Keep posting chapter, I could do with reading some good fan-ficsAuthor's Response: Aww, thanks! I'm so glad you like it. It's great to have people say that they're enjoying it and want to read more, and it really spurs me on! I'll post as soon as I can! Thanks for taking time out to read and review my fic :) Report Review
It was a good chapter and I really liked it
Please post the next chapter soon
And as for the beta, I suggest you to go to the forums and try over thereAuthor's Response: yeahh ill try that! and thanks update coming soon! Report Review
You know what?
You have got a lovely story in your kitty and keep posting the chapters as soon as possible, because I am waiting!!Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm working on chapter five at the moment, so hopefully it will be up soon... Please keep reading, and thank you for the lovely review. Report Review
I loved it!!
Sapphire is my fav
Post the next chapter asapAuthor's Response: Thanks! and chapter three coming soon! Report Review
Do you have any clue how good is your story??
I will tell you, it is as good as, if you get it published there will be millions of buyers and I can't believe that you are still in school as I have read in one of your Author's note
UPDATE SOONAuthor's Response: haha thank you so much!!! i'm glad you like it :) I'll get more up soon, but balancing school & writing is difficult haha Report Review
I love your story!!
Update soon!Author's Response: Thanks a bunch for the review!
:) Report Review
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