Aw... sweet! I love how you show Lucius and Narcissa in a different light. Great job!

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Wow. Just - wow. And that doesn't even come close to describing how brilliant and gripping this is! The ending was a bit peculiar, but in a good way, and the writing wasn't very pretentious at all - I cannot fathom why - and it was just so well-written! I'm surprised nobody else has reviewed this, it's so good! I've enjoyed reading this story. Kudos to you!

Author's Response: Again, thank you!

I'll admit the ending is perhaps the weakest part - the idea is that Voldemort is letting Draco know what will happen if he fails to carry out the tasks; that his parents will suffer.

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This is also really good! The writing is a lot less pretentious - most likely because you've put him back in his early years - so it was much easier to understand. This has been great so far! Onward!

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This is terrific! I think you captured Draco's inner thoughts, feelings and personality flawlessly. I'll admit it, the writing itself is a wee bit pretentious and I couldn't understand some of the language, but I suppose that's just the way Draco acts, isn't it? Anyway, I'm reading on!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, the writing is a bit OTT a times, but that was the fun of writing from Draco's point of view - you can get away with being overly pretentious and florid!

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That's terrific! I'm not usually one for James/Lily stories, but I decided this one would be a good read and it was! I especially love how you present the way James wins Lily's heart - it's so offbeat! I think I got lucky whilst searching for a good first story!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you very much for the compliment! *blushes* ;D

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