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Review #1, by Miss MarlaGBreaking the Quidditch Code: Back into Ravenclaws

17th January 2012:
.OMG. THAT ENDING. THAT ENDING. HOLY CRAP.

Author's Response: YES.

Now THAT was the reaction I was going for :)

Thank you!!


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Review #2, by Miss MarlaGGuardian: I

7th May 2011:
So love, this was FAN-TASTIC.

I have always admired your gorgeous way of describing things so effortlessly, without missing a single beat. I love how you describe her angst, her feelings, her fears, and how its written in present tense it makes it more marvelous. I'm in AWE, annie. seriously. And I loved this. TOO MUCH *heart*

you are fantastic, and you know that.

Author's Response: YAY, thank you so much! I really love your reviews and I'm glad you though the present tense worked out well. :) Thanks for the awesome review,
Annie


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Review #3, by Miss MarlaGBreaking the Quidditch Code: Auction

30th April 2011:
Review #3!

1. BINK IS HOT. I LOVE BINK. HE'S MINE. WE ARE GETTING MARRIED, BTW.

2. the auction was a great idea :) i just love how creative you are!

3. the lollipop i didn't quite get, unless you meant that she's so. NIA that she seemed to be working a lollipop. or something. still, it was quite funny :D

4. EMMERSON WON AVERY. NO. NO WAY. HE CAN'T. SHE'S JAMES.. astronomy tower. *whistling*

5. a first year won paloma. wow. btw, Paloma Dove? awesome. that was just GREAT :D

6. Rosie won Bink. MY BINK. Epic ;)

7. NIA WON JAMES. ;)

AND I LOVED THIS, MISTRESS. I LOVED IT WHEN I FIRST READ IT, AND I LOVED IT MORE THE SECOND TIME :D

Author's Response: I like how they're all numbered. Makes me happy. Well, this is response #3.

1. I will let him know. By the end of the story, he might have a problem with that though ;) But no spoilers.

2. I'm so glad you liked the auction! I got that idea from when I was in college and they did a sports player auction to raise money. I wanted to buy a hockey player.

3. The lollipop thing was James's imagination. He imagined her sucking on a lollipop, which is super suggestive. Then when he looked back it wasn't there because he was just imagining it. It was his own twisted, hormonal fantasy haha.

4. Astronomy Tower...indeed :)

5. HAHA! I'm so glad you like her. And her name. That's how I roll. Poor Pally though.

6. Rosey is so fierce. She'll take everyone down a peg. Including Bink, haha!

7. Oh, my. This can only end in disaster!

YAY!! Seriously, that means so much to me! I love to write it and it's a huge perk that it is being so well received!

Thank you for your amazing review!


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Review #4, by Miss MarlaGLollipop: Lollipop

26th April 2011:
this was to sweet. i really really really loved it, TOO MUCH, and everything is just, GAH! i LOVED the ending -strawberyy *heart* and like this type of relationship for them two, confusing and yet they NEED each other. I LOVED THIS SO MUCH 10/10 :D

-miss

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Review #5, by Miss MarlaGetc. etc. (and life goes on): Manic Panic Mondays

26th April 2011:
THIS IS SO INTERESTING.

i like the whole rush of the gossip column and how they wipe it all out later and I absolutely LOVE Clemence. This is so fun and a great plot bunny! you should continue. i want to read more!

Author's Response: Hahah THANKS! It's not a terribly original concept, but I do adore the psychoanalysis and intellectualism I get to abuse ;D

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Review #6, by Miss MarlaGLosing My V Card: Oscar, Here I Come! Grrr.

18th April 2011:
hehe! this was so funny. I liked Bianca and Cece inmediatly, she's so funny. And FYI, I noticed about the Easy A thing inmediatly. Such an awesome movie! :D

i wonder who Cece will end up losing it to.

but, 9/10!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :) And hi-five, I am an Easy A fan too!
And that was a really good question, who Cece will lose it to. I'll try to incorporate that somewhere in to the ending, and thanks for the idea! XOXO.


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Review #7, by Miss MarlaGMy Little Sailboat: My Little Sailboat

17th April 2011:
this.

was.

beautiful.

to the tenth degree.

I love the little sailboat thing, and everything that came between. All the beautiful intricacy of the description and the writing, and then the shock of it being severus. And the beautiful quote. to lily.

Have I ever told you i love your writing?

well, I DO. *heart*

Author's Response: *squish* Thank you so much dear! I really appreciate that and the whole review! :)
Annie


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Review #8, by Miss MarlaGSocial Skills: Social Skills

17th April 2011:
lol! this was seriously funny. I like the voice in which you portray him and how he was going to marry Daphne :) and then him swearing. loudly. And his social skills ;)

after all, Marcus's got swag ;)

Author's Response: Lol Marcus's got swag! I laughed at that lol. Thank you for your review :D

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Review #9, by Miss MarlaGDifferent Deviants : Breakin' It Down

17th April 2011:
first of all, i love that she talks to herself. and her spin-turned-sexy little dance. I fell on the floor and got weird laugh for that :D i love their assignment, and even though its a little weird for me to not see NG cannon children, they are all cool enough. I love WilFred ;) and Rose is nervous around Scorpius ;) Ah. Love.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!! You get a cookie!! *hands cookie*

XD I love Rose, I absolutely do. From the moment I read the epilogue I knew this was how Rose was going to turn out. Kinda weird, a little eccentric, and so in love with Scorpius!

Yes! Success with the assignment! I was trying to figure out a clever way to introduce all the characters without just having all 15 of them in one chapter.

I wanted to do something a little different with the family tree. So I played around a bit, kept some characters, tossed others, and invented a few new ones (I LOVE Wilfred too!!). And technically, I have one less cousin on my family tree (I make up for it in OCs though XD).

Rose and Scorpius ;) More to come on that next chapter!

Thanks again for the review!!


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Review #10, by Miss MarlaGBreaking the Quidditch Code: Woman Problems

17th April 2011:
fave quote? We didn’t even have a Quidditch bathroom.

I should petition Sinatra for that. She hated sports. She’d never let me have it.

I’d bet she’d let the Charms club have their own sodding bathroom.

I would too, though. I felt bad for the gits, being in the Charms club and all that.

hehe, love that! so fun. i also very much Hate Emmerson for wanting Avery when he's just a meanie, abusing his Head Boy power *again, jumping off astronomy tower --whistling--*
I love Bink too. And Lily. And Meta, she's by far my fave. And Neville '''so awesome.

Review #2 ;)
so, LOVE.

Author's Response: Poor Charms club full of nerdies. Even though James could totally do well in Charms club. Maybe he could even make a few new friends. What if he walked in on Charms club? Wouldn't that be funny? Hmmm.

So glad you're liking it! Thanks!


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Review #11, by Miss MarlaGBreaking the Quidditch Code: To the Hospital Wing (already)

17th April 2011:
So yay! Review #1 out of 32! I absolutely ADORE this. I love the way she and Avery mate :so fun: and i ADORE Nia and how fun and weirdly James-obsessed she is. She seriously has problems, and its so so so fun :D I also love Meta, and I love all of your chapter titles. so awesome. really. *heart*

Author's Response: WHOOHOOO! I'm so excited! Reviews really keep me going and keep me inspired to write. I love knowing what each person thinks of a chapter. It gives me tons of new ideas! Nia having problems is totally an understatement. She's ridic. And amazing at the same time. And I'm glad you like my chapter titles! I love coming up with them. Thank you!

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Review #12, by Miss MarlaGThe Human Factor : The One Where The Plan Is Put Into Action

13th April 2011:
so awesome! really. so so awesome. Lily being a Damien stalker is pretty genius, and the Emilie Zabini thing is intriguing indeed as I don't really get what happened. And that sneak peek?? ep! I wonder who it was!!!

Author's Response: Hello! I'm so glad you thought that, it means a lot to me. Thanks, I'm glad you like Lily being Damien's stalker. Don't worry, what happened was never actually explained, you'll find out in a future chapter what broke them. You'll just have to wait until the next chapter, which I have already started :) Thanks so much for the review, it means a lot to me. x

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Review #13, by Miss MarlaGBreaking the Quidditch Code: Language of Gentlemen

12th April 2011:
ep! you dedicated this to me!!! :D :D :D :D :D and don't worry, im going to give you those 32 reviews im so owing you!!!

I love Harry and the fact that he's a cool dad (although the chapter image of him is weird :p). Im glad he understood and tried to help, and that James, Bink, and Freddie are friends again! Thank god, i couldn't take any more of their girlie drama (Bink)

Aves is so smart. I really like her and she should marry James *look into that*

*we can also feed Emerson to the giant squid.

*And have meta jump off a bridge

*and have Lily declared youngest minister of magic ever in history (cuz she's so awesome)


so, i thank you for updating!1

Author's Response: I'll be waiting for my 32 reviews of awesomeness ;) haha. You deserve the dedication! Thanks again for just loving the story!

You don't dig Robert Downey Jr. as Harry? I went through a lot of possibilities before I settled on him. I knew he'd be hit or miss though, haha.

Haha, Bink is such a diva. Well, all three of them are. That's why they're such good friends, haha!

I will be looking into the marrying situation.

Thanks so much for the review! I hope you like the rest of the story! I'll be looking forward to your reviews! (all 32 haha)


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Review #14, by Miss MarlaGThe Time of Cupids: Cupid at Work and Nazi Quidditch Captains

10th April 2011:
This. is. awesome. enough said.

10/10

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Review #15, by Miss MarlaGThe First, from Spring to Summer: May First

6th April 2011:
lol! I'M SO glad Scorp decided to do something about it! I love all their pranks, so ingenius! But poor him :( Freddo's in Mungo's! :o no way. And He KISSED her! eeep! and she rejected him :( :( :( why must you be so mean to him?? make him happy. now.

in all, 10/10!!!

Author's Response: :D Thank you! I was hoping people would like the pranks :D
Yeah I know :( Hopefully he'll be back soon though ;)
HE DID!! AND SHE DID!!! D: I felt sad writing that bit but I think it was right :)
Hehehe by the end of the story he might be happy for once ;)
THANK YOU :D XX


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Review #16, by Miss MarlaGPretty Boy: Juice-y

1st April 2011:
i like it! i have never really read anything about Louis with Louis, and I didn't know that was how you said his name... cool!

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Review #17, by Miss MarlaGHair Brained Schemes: The biggest hair brained schemes

30th March 2011:
aw! this was so sweet. i can feel for both angelina and george, although angelina felt a little too "popular girl". lol, that actually made me giggle. but the fact that she was crying made her more down to earth after, so i guess that's good. but i still liked this and i cant wait to see where it goes!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I guess I know what you mean by popular girl, but I think I was just trying to get across that she hangs out more with Alicia and the rest of the team, not that she was particularly popular. I can't wait to see where this goes either! lol I have a good idea of course, but still struggling with some of it.
Thanks for the review!


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Review #18, by Miss MarlaGArthur Weasley and the Pureblood: Ophelia LeBlanc, Pureblood

30th March 2011:
o! this is so interesting. Really great to see a pureblood take an interest in Arthur, especially when he is married AND a grandpa! :o :o :o :o but it was written greatly and the fact that she kept trying to kiss him and ginny walked in on them just made this even more :o :o :o but i loved it still!!! although he asked for a date? :O :O :O :O

Author's Response: Hehe I'm glad you liked it. I kept the ending open-ended like that for a reason, because it could be Arthur, a hallucination, or just someone who looks and acts just like him. I wasn't sure I got the story right, though, so for now it is a WIP. Thanks again for the review.

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Review #19, by Miss MarlaGSeven Weddings: A Bloke.

29th March 2011:
so cool. Delia is awesome and I could feel the story just flowing with her personality. Filbert. Lol :D in my stories he's called Otto :p

good job on another awesome chappie!

Author's Response: I name the Giant Squid something differently in everything I write. Rose is kind of out of her mind so. Filbert sounded appropriate.

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Review #20, by Miss MarlaGLet Her Live: Let Her Live

28th March 2011:
aww! so sweet. the perfect one-shot about finding about how sco-rose :D love those. especially since they are all a big family! i cant believe Al freaked :o original plot! but i like the ending its really nice and very much so sweet!

btw, sorry about your reviews. been so busy! :o

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Glad you liked it! Oh, and, yeah, I completely understand. It's okay. ;)

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Review #21, by Miss MarlaGMirror Me: Mirror Me

28th March 2011:
aw! so sweet and so sad. i can totally see Del in this and just its heartbreaking to know that she's just gone too. That Snape never saw her again -anyone again. That she kissed his neck :o that sirius and remus were together, definitely surprising!

i loved this. and it seems really possible!
10/10

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yeah, its sort of another reason for Snape to be the way he is.
Del was very loving to her friends(though I should say that she never went to the point of kissing anyone :)
It was never confirmed in canon but I hold hope :)
Thanks for the rating


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Review #22, by Miss MarlaGWho needs a story plot when your OC is this FOXY!!: Ummm...... Meh!

28th March 2011:
ARGH! I must tell you, I never laugh out loud. Never. not when watching funny videos, not when my older sister slipped down the stairs, and not when reading seriously hilarious fics. Except for this.

I definitely saw myself giggling and surprised myself too. IT WAS JUST TOO FUNNY! so funny that its going into my favorites. so funny that i almost choked on my yogurt. so funny that i was already reading this when i asked you for a review swap and gasped at the coincidence.
Capricornus Malfoy XD i was on the floor. That seriously made my day!
if all your bad stories are like this, I seriously cant say they are all that badd!

10/10
-miss

Author's Response: Your review actually made me LOL!! I think it is because I wrote it that I kind of don't find it funny anymore, so I am very happy that you do =D. This was a ball to write but my brain is turned to mush though and I still can't really say awesome =p *shudders*. Yes Capricornus Malfoy, it seems they ran out of Constellations when they got to her lol. Ha Ha *note to self write more bad stories=D*. Cheers for the review hun!

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Review #23, by Miss MarlaGMy Beautiful Sister: Ruby.

28th March 2011:
awww! this was so sweet and sad. i feel Nina's pain, the pain of someone she loved gone, and its just heartbreaking. The denial. The shock. The realizing. It hurts. It really hurts. And revengue.

this was a beautiful piece that I really loved :')

Poor Ruby :'(
-miss

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your review was lovely to read :)

I'm glad you liked it so much.

x Ely


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Review #24, by Miss MarlaG:

26th March 2011:
eeep!

1. thanks for dedicating this to me :D
2. at first i wasnt too sure about all the little sentences, but i ended up loving them! It was so fun. It just went on an on and on and then she forgot about them -did her homework, thought about her hair :D SO FUN.

and 3. i really really love this and i really really love you and you ought to remember that. FOREVER. *heart*

your best friend ;)

Author's Response: Aww :) thanks marla!! :$ i lovee yoouu best frieeend! And i'm totally (pretty much jumping on one foot) happy that you liked it!!!

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Review #25, by Miss MarlaGWelcome to the Chase: chapter.eighteen – Gone.

19th March 2011:
wow. that's really all i can say, i was so happy with the beggining "First review! hopefully?" and then this made so distressed and depressed and sad! Poor Ariadne, she was only eleven for goodness' sake! I hate Daphne. I hope she *.

sorry. had to do that.

AKA, i love blue. and burly. and al. and sleazy... in some crazy, psycho way *heart*

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