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Review #1, by TruthofBeksStarting Monday: Jour Un

25th October 2010:
This is great start to a story!
I've never read any Fleur/Bill stories, but I love how you've portrayed them in this story.
It's great that they seem to have an immediate connection.
Keep up the wonderful writing :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it :) Yeah, Bill/Fleur are pretty rare, so I'm trying to do the two of them justice, and make this a good story! It really means a lot to hear that you like it so far! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave a review. It really does make my day :)

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Review #2, by TruthofBeksCatastrophe: Momentum

4th October 2010:
I really like this story.
Love your OC - she's really entertaining. Also, I don't think I've ever met/read about someone called Normandy - nice name.
Keep up the great writing! :)

Author's Response: NORMANDY IS MY FAVORITE NAME EVERR. Like, I wish it was mine. I'm gonna name my daughter it (assuming if I ever have a daughter). I'm glad you like her character! I'm not the best with OCs so it's kind of a relief :)

Thank you!!


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Review #3, by TruthofBeksThe Fluidity of a Stone: Brother of Mine

25th September 2010:
Great start! Can't wait to see how you develop this story. There are some really interesting ideas in this chapter - but I hope you stay away from the cliches that arise in Seer stories.
I think this story has a lot of potential, and as it's paired with great writing I'm looking forward to what comes next :)

Author's Response: Cliche i'm trying to avoid! There's some twists and turns all be throwing in and hopefully that will keep me as far as possible from being a cliche story!
Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate it! :)


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Review #4, by TruthofBeksThe Marauding Misadventures of a Murderous Beater: Of a Target Practice and a Pep Talk

2nd August 2010:
Wow, this a great story.
An interesting take on the marauder years.
Looking forward to more quidditch fun! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
I'm glad that you like it! I try to keep things origional, you know?


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Review #5, by TruthofBeksVantage Point : Chapter Eight: Dom

16th May 2010:
So, I just started reading this story, and I have to say it is amazing!
I love your idea of doing one eventful night from different POV's.
You manage to do it really well, and I love how with every new POV you just add small facts to the story.
And I think your characterisations are amazing. While Dom is a bit girly, it doesn't matter as you can make her however you want, and in this story I think it works really well with her being girly and paranoid.
I can't wait to read more! update soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm having fun giving each character personality and the whole things is just so much fun to write! This is what comes from me sitting around playing with my imagination when I should be doing other things...=D
I'm working on the next one now! Thanks for this amazing review!

Darcy


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