holy crap, so I just read all of this in one sitting, and it's like 2:00 in the morning so this might be a bit incoherent, but wow I really love this story, like it's so freaking good and interesting and original and I don't really know what else to say, I'm really fascinated by you characterization and the way that you've managed to bring all of the characters from the tale of the three brothers to life and make them seem human and holy poo do I love Dominique and Ignotus together, but surprisingly I don't hate her and Callum together. I really really like how well you've managed to portray wizarding life in the 1200's although I am definitely interested in knowing more about what's going on in dom's family in the 2000's. I'm also really fascinated with your portrayal of death, and even though I know that Ignotus is supposed to live a long life and then finally go to face death when he is old and ready for it I can't help but feel a little bit afraid for him.
I apologize if this has been a bit of a confusing rant, but I felt like you deserved a review :)
this story is truly phenomenal and I really can't wait to read more, keep up the excellent work
10/10

Author's Response: Oh my goodness thank you!! I can't tell you how pleased I am to hear you say all of this! It had been awhile since I had gotten a lot of feedback on the majority of the story, so really! Thank you so much!!

I am SO glad to hear that you enjoyed it enough to read it all in one sitting! :D Seriously! YAY! I'm so glad.

Thank you SO SO SO much for your awesome review. You really made my day.

I really hope to see you back for the future chapters, and I hope I can continue to please. Thanks so much for your input!

Chapter 16 should be up by the end of the week! :) Some of that 2022 stuff will be in there also. ;)

Again, THANK YOU! :D

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re-reading this, and it's just as good as I remember :D

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I love this story! it's sooo entertaining and I really can't wait for the next chapter! Cammie is so interesting and cool!

I'd rather you didn't do a pov switch, it's nice to only see into the mind of one character, if that makes sense, I really like cammie's narration.

Author's Response: Thank you!!
I'm glad you like Cammie, I roughly based her on myself but she's turned out nothing like me XD
The point of view change is driving me crazy, as I'm not sure if I want to do it or not. I think I'm going to do it a different way it's normally done in. So that actually the story continue's in Cammie's point of view. (Sorry if you don't understand me, I'm trying to tell you without giving you any clue as to what it might be XD)
Thank you so much for reviewing!! xx

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wot! you have no idea how excited I was to see that you have a new chapter up! a few days ago a friend and I were talking about our favorite stories, and we started talking about strl, we both agreed that it was awesome and that our only problem with it was that there wasn't more! and then a few days later, bam! new chapter!! it made my day for sure!!!

I hope you update again soon! good work!

Author's Response: Aw! You guys are way too sweet! :) I'll be sure to update as soon as I can!

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I really really liked this! it's different from the average james/oc story!
it did seem like Cammie accepted the fact that she had woken up in a random guy's flat a bit too quickly, since she says it herself that she isn't really much of a drinker/partier.
normally louis weasley is spelled the french way (louis) instead of lewis, but that was the only issue I had :)

I really can't wait to read more! I liked Al and Freddie's reactions!
update soon!! XD

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!! Al and Freddie were the most fun to write.
Oh OK. If I rewrite it I'll make sure I take that in, thanks for telling me.
Oh dear... I'll have to change that. I did on the next chapter when my friend pointed out on that I must of forgotten to change it on this one. Thanks for telling me XD
I'll try and update as soon as possible. The next chapters not going to be a bit shorter than this one and more of a filler chapter to get them to the Burrow, but I hope you'll still enjoy it.
Thanx for the review!!
Crescent Moon xx

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hey there! so it looks like this story has a lot of potential! I really love quidditch and oliver/oc stories, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Hey so I just stumbled upon this story today, and I love it! I really love all of the interplay between the characters and how their group of friends works, I really don't think that you need to speed up the plot a ton, I feel like by rushing the action a lot of authors struggle to come up with other things to happen in the story, like if you had pheonix admit that she liked james right now, then you would have to come up with something else to happen (and I refuse to read another story with a teenage pregnancy as a central plot because the author couldn't come up with anything better!!), I feel like you're moving a little slowly, but this pace allows us to see whats going on with all of the characters, I don't know if I'm the best person to try and help you out with pacing because I'm really bad at pacing whenever I try and write

I can't wait to see what you write next!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely long review! And I'm glad you don't think the plot is going too slowly. Don't worry, there will be no teenage pregnancy in this story (:

I hate stories like that too. But thanks for taking the time to read this, and to review. Chapter 11 should be up really soon!

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just so you know the end was doubled up... but other than that it was really great!

Author's Response: Yeah, I know about that end bit. It's all fixed up now (:

Thank's for pointing it out, though.

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this story seems really interesting! I've always wanted to read a tom/minerva story!!!
I can't wait to read more and see what happens!

Author's Response: haha thanks :P i've always been fascinated by tom/min, and the vague idea for this has been floating around in my head for a while, so I decided to write it.
It's incredibly fun to write, actually. Glad you liked it and thanks for yet another review :P

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ah! I loved this chapter and this story!! all of the challenges and stuff are just sooo cool! I really can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you!
The challenges (much like the pranks in Little Miss Potter), are rather hard to think of. That's the main thing that's slowing me down when writing the chapters, actually.
This (unlike LMP, :P) wasn't lost in my great computer crash, so it should be updated soon.
Thanks for the review!!!

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hey there!! I just started reading this story and let me tell you, I love it!! I don't understand why it has so few reads!!! there are a few spelling and grammar errors here and there, but I really do like the plot!
I'm not a huge fan of Casidy... she annoys me... But I really like they way you've portrayed lily! she's awesome!! I think that Derrick is hot!! I wanna see more lily/derrick interaction! I feel like there is some sexual tension there that would be nice to add to the plot!
I really like all of the things that you've been doing so far with the games, I find that really entertaining, and the pranks that you've come up with are really good! I always have a hard time coming up with creative pranks... I guess I'm no weasley!
I really hope that you continue writing and updating because this story is full of potential!!

Author's Response: thank you so much for the review!!
i am aware of the grammar/spelling errors, one day i'll go back and edit, or find a beta...one day.
Cassidy is supposed to be annoying. It's her character :P I don't like her either.but it's a future plot point.
Not saying any more :D
Hahaha you have no idea how long it took me to come up with those pranks!! eventually it was 'lets see how much they can get away with', and that's what I wrote.
As for updating, i don't have any more written as of yet (whoops).but i did have the whole thing planned, until me old computer got eaten by a virus. literally. it whiped every document i had.
So.I'll get there soon. I just thought instead of making a vague 'I'll update soon..." comment, I'd come out and say it'll probably be a while.
Yeah.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-Giola

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Banana!!!
ummm you said I should say the first word that popped into my head... sorry if it wasn't quite related!
I really like where this is headed and now i'm off to go read all the other chapters that are up!

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woot!!! update! it's been like a week since one of my favorites had a decent update! and I would say that this qualifies as an awesome update!! thanks so much for updating!
I really like the relationship between tosh and dessie, I'm a sucker for cute brother sister relationships! Update again soon! that was a great chapter!

Author's Response: I love cute brother sister relationships. I actually hope people like Tosh in this story cause nobody likes Apollo in love goddesses :(

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ah! I really really like this story so far. I tend to say that a lot, but this story is super awesome!! I really want to read more!! I love al!! he's just soo. yummy! I have a weakness for adorable fictional characters.
update either of your stories soon!

Author's Response: Al is quite delicious ;) Ahaha, me too! The cute ones make me melt!

Thanks so much! I'll update ASAP!

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ah! that was awesome!! truly epic!!! I really can not wait to read more of this!! and plus I just love scorpius!! he's so pretty!! please update with more soon!

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of course I still love you!
this chapter was... well it was a good chapter like writing and plot wise, but I hated it just because I don't like to see apollo being a jerk! and alll the other awesome gryffs. but I think all that stuff will probably be fixed soon!. right? if it isn't fixed soon I might get angry... and you don't wannna see me angry!

Author's Response: Haha I love you to! And sorry I haven't responded to your response on the forums! I've been super busy and I'll write back as soon as possible!

And see, I thought I was making Apollo nice when I had him help Aphrodite but you guys don't seem to think so. :( But yeah, everyone else is being a poop head AND OF COURSE THAT'LL CHANGE!! (:

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ooh, that was so beautiful and well written, it was nice to read something from teddy's point of view, it seems like people often forget that teddy had lost his parents.
thanks for the great story!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :D
And Yeah, I thought so. Thats why I wrote it. And I must admit I adore Tonks/Remus ♥

Thanks for the lovely review.
Laurie x

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WAh! they're kissing! omg!!! mega squee!!! I hope she doesn't break the quidditch code! wait... no that's not true! If it means snogging oliver wood, she should just screw the quidditch code!!

thanks for the update!! and soo quick!
-elena

Author's Response: Ah! I'm glad you liked it! I've been trying to quickly update more now! And, yes, Oliver and Gabby are snogging. In a broom closet. Gabby might just take your advice;) Glad you liked it! Thanks so much! You're a really awesome reviewer, and I'm glad you like my story!

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Wot!!! Update!! I was super duper psyched to see that this was updated!! I want me a teddy lupin! He's so cute!! he's a jerk yeah, but he's a super hot jerk! And underneath the jerk outer layer theres a nice guy! but if victoire can't figure that out than i'd be willing to take him!!!

update soon!!!

Author's Response: Why thank you! :D Ted's quite the character, eh? He is going to have to work to win her over though ;)

I just sent in a new story called Hopeless! After that's out, I'll be sure to update! :D

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Aaaah!! I just love adele! she's super awesome! I also love al, I mean honestly If I was forced to marry someone who just happened to be al, you wouldn't be hearing any complaints from me!
great chapter! update soon!
-Elena

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Woot! New story!! and I love it!! It seems like its gonna be awesome! one might go so far as to say totally awesome! I love the fact that Dessie, bit fred... geddit? she's like biter in love goddesses. I might be ranting a teensy bit... I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hehe it's almost like Dessie and Aphrodite are sistas! *Get in really, and uncomfortably close* I just realized that you probs don't understand that inside joke. My friends are weird. You know what? Just don't worry about it. I'm just going to stop talking now..

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wah! what an awesome chapter!! I love alex! she's soo kick butt and awesome!!! I also love how sweet eric is!
I was so happy to see that this was updated! thanks!!
-elena

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OH poop! leave off right when the good stuff is about to happen! darn! Looks like i'll just have to wait for the next chapter... hmm... maybe I should develop some form of ability to wait calmly... or just complain about having to wait...

I really liked wally! he seems like a real cool cat! and yeah I did just call him a real cool cat!

update soon!

Author's Response: You can't comprehend how much this means to me. I'm not a fan of this chapter, but It was the best it was ever going to be so I just decided to post it. Haha. The next chapter will be up much faster than the last one! I can assure you of that.

I'm so glad you liked Wally. Haha, cool cat is some good lingo.

thanks so much for the review and I'll try to update soon.

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hey!
I'm super glad that rose has finally come to her senses! she likes malfoy!
Urgh, I hope ron gets over his stupid dislike of scorpius!!
great chapter! thanks for updating!
-elena

the spacing was a bit weird, but maybe it was just my computer.

Author's Response: Probably not. I had some spacing issues with this chapter. I will try and fix those later tonight. Thanks for pointing it out :) Glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reviewing.

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woot! update! I was super psyched to see that this was updated! and I'm really glad that maybe we can go back to a slightly less depressed and angsty aggy! double woot for aidan being awake!

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