Reading Reviews From Member: Longbottom
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Review #1, by LongbottomGraínne: Surviving Despite All Desire to the Contrary

27th July 2005:
What on earth!!! you made her dissapear!, please please please write some more!!!

Author's Response: Please check out Surviving to Live for the end of the tale. I promise you won't be disappointed.

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Review #2, by LongbottomThe Bewitchment of James Potter: The Bewitchment of James Potter

25th November 2004:
i liked it very much please do conitinue!

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Review #3, by LongbottomSummer With James.: spreading the news

6th November 2004:
i have to say it hought it was a master piece.. i congatulate myself but feel i need more detail and longer chapters.. at leats 1000 words i should think.. yeh

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Review #4, by LongbottomThe Spiders Web: The Common Room

5th November 2004:
cool.. i lked that chapter... but i thought dumbl;edore was not himself... maybe u need to work on ur characters abit more...but stil very good!

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Review #5, by LongbottomThe Spiders Web: Platfrom 9 3/4

5th November 2004:
yeh cool.. im ready to read the yey

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