Personally, yeah, I really quite like Tom, and am super interested to see where his relationship with Rose is going to go! =D Secondly, Scorpius, what the hell do you think you're doing?! Get your shit together would ya? I don't understand why you feel the need to cheat on her. Go to marriage counseling, or file for a divorce. Grow up, and deal with the problem, running away from it won't make it go away! Anyways, on to the next chapter! =D - Dragon_Slayer_09 Report Review
That. Was. Beautiful. This story is truly wonderful! The plot, the depth of the characters, and how it manages to stir up so many emotions in its readers (or at least, me). I really can't put into words how much I enjoyed reading this Dramione. Thank you! I can wait for the next two chapters though. I really, really, really don't want this to end. =( Ohh well. All good things come to an end, 'tis life. *Sigh* - DragonSlayer PS infinity/10 (Obviously.=) Report Review
What? NO! You cannot stop it there! Awww... I really REALLY wanted to know what was going to happen. WOW though, I cannot believe she didn't think Potter would walk in! It always happens. It's impossible to snoop and not get caught. Awww... why is James acting like that though? Why is he being so cold all of the time?? ='( Man, I wish they would just be friends... and become something more afterwards! =D Meh. Anyways, please update soon! Pretty please? - DragonSlayer PS And might I add that this is really funny? It is! I love how dramatic Aggy is! She kinda reminds me of me at times! XD Report Review
Yay! =D Finally! That took both of them a while! - DragonSlayerAuthor's Response: Haha, yeah :) They can be rather stubborn those two, but they have their nice moments! Thanks for reviewing! ronsgirl29 Report Review
Yes! A happy ending! =D Yes, well, you can hardly blame us for lacking faith in you! I really thought he was getting married to her! So glad that Mara gets to live her happily ever after! =D That was wonderful! Thank you so much! - DragonSlayer PS 10/10 =D Report Review
No. That wasn't how it was supposed to end. He wasn't supposed to marry her. That's not how it was supposed to happen. No. ='( I'm actually tearing up right now. ='( *sniffles* And he looked at her. He might have been saying Sophie's name, but he was thinking about Mara, he had to be thinking about Mara. But honestly, that was beautiful. I shall go onwards! - DragonSlayer Report Review
NO! DID SHE JUST ASK HER THAT?!?!?! Mara HAS to say no, she just has to. Anyways, must find out what Mara's response is! - DragonSlayer Report Review
Damn it James! Really? Ugh. Wonderful. Complications... Reading on! - DragonSlayer Report Review
My heart is literally breaking for Mara... =( But yeah, I'm proud of her for being so frank with James! =) And I really do think James has the right to know that Mara's son is also his son. It's not the greatest thing to keep from the guy. And when Ginny and Harry asked about Jack, wow, that was their grandson! And they didn't even know it! Anyways, I wonder whether or not Mara really loves James that way, in the non-platonic way... Was Jack an accident, for lack of better terms? So, on to the next chapter! - DragonSlayer Report Review
"Even if we're not in love, even if this is just friendship and comfort to him, even if he sees me like a little sister just like every other boy in this team – I don't mind. Because even though I'll probably never get him to love me as much as I love him, I'll have this memory to keep with me like every other good memory I've had in my life. Right here, right now, in this moment. I have this." This was beyond sweet. Love it! Update? =D Report Review
Why did that have to happen?!?! Why does Lily have to run away from how she feels? She never seems to be able to come to terms with her emotions. And they were actually getting somewhere! Aww... =( Oh, and update soon? =) - DragonSlayerAuthor's Response: That's very true, she's in denial about alot of things. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Jesus. Agree. Completely. Hot N' Cold was the perfect choice for how James' acting! I love that song! =D He needs to not do that though, what is wrong with him?!?!?!?! He needs to stop changing so much! Is he insane? He's going to give Lily an aneurysm! - DragonSlayer PS 10/10 =D Loved it! Now, on to the next chapter!Author's Response: I'm so happy! You're in for a treat ;) you have a while to go until you reach chp. 32! Report Review
I love Hermione's stubborn, defiant, and confident nature; it's inspiring! =) Love it! Although, I'm really not liking Harry, I know it's not his decision, but he did act as the messenger... how can they ask her to choose like that? What is wrong with them? The Hunters are better at doing the Aurors' job than the Aurors are! Geez! Anyways, update soon? Well, the only thing that's keeping me going is the fact that there's a sequel, so it's not really over! Although, I definitely do understand the sadness. I remember feeling horrible when I realized that JKR's final book was coming out back in '07! I suppose it feels different for the writer though. Anyways, you should definitely be proud too! =) ~ DragonSlayerAuthor's Response: I'm definitely going to update as soon as I can; probably by this Friday is what I anticipate :) I miss the Harry Potter books...I always had something to look forward to each year. I can't believe it's almost been 4 years since the last one! Anyway, I'm rambling. Thanks for the reviews! :) Report Review
Oh my God. That chapter was simply breathtaking! I LOVE it! =D The scene with Hermione and Draco at the beginning, where Hermione couldn't sleep and went to Draco's room, was very sweet. Oh, and the scene between her and Draco in the bathroom, well, I don't even have words to give that scene. Seriously. Wow. I couldn't stop saying "oh my God!" You know what I've realized? I am falling for Draco's character, which is not a good thing, cause well, he's, unfortunately, a character in a story! I love his sincerity, passion, and just everything about him, hope I can find like him in the real world! =) Anyways, I love that ultimatum at the end, if Hermione had just instantly chosen Draco, I would've definitely gotten annoyed with her, 'cause, well, she can't just throw away her values like that... but I hope that, in the end, she does choose Draco, although what will her career be then? Perhaps, she could join the Hunters, and be the first female? Although, I don't think she'd want that... Anyways, I really want to get to the next chapter, so onwards! =) ~ DragonSlayer PS infinity/10! (like always, eh, your story is amazing, so I feel justified in saying so)Author's Response: I had sooo much fun writing the bathtub scene; I hope that your inability to find words to describe it means that you liked it ;) I'm falling for Draco's character a bit, too, which is sad because...he exists only in my mind and in this story! Thank you so much for your review! Report Review
God, I never really realized how much I missed reading this story! Finally! An update! =D The aurors are honestly driving me crazy!! The Hunters catch the bad guys, sure the curses they use are unnecessary, but the aurors use those curses too... the Hunters have caught more criminals than the aurors have... and yet the aurors still arrest the Hunters... that just isn't right! I know I shouldn't ask this, seeing as you just updated, but please update soon! =P - DragonSlayer Report Review
OMG this is such an amazing story... I NEED you to update, please please please please??? Report Review
Okay, I have to say, Marlene is HILARIOUS, oh and that Lily's thoughts make perfect sense to me... is that a bad thing? Oh well, I really see where she's coming from, it's better for James to hate her, than for her to hate herself, that's true (at least in my mind)... and the idea's actually really good if one disregards the fact that Lily will be racking up some intensely bad Karma... oh well, if Lucy's really as annoying as Marlene says she is, Lily will be James a favour... =) - DragonSlayer PS 10/10! =) Report Review
Wow! It's over! =S I'm glad there's a sequel! That was a very cute ending though, with James finally telling Charisma how he made the butterflies appear! - DragonSlayer PS 10/10 =)Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad that you enjoyed this, and the ending :P :D I hope that you will check out the sequel ... if you want to, that is :P Thank you again! Report Review
TEAM SCORPIUS! =D Rose is being horrible right now! How can she DO something like that?! She doesn't deserve someone like Scorpius, the poor boy is pining after her, and she doesn't have a care in the world! Why Team Freddy? He wasn't the nicest guy to Dixie... - DragonSlayer PS 100/10 =)Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you've enjoyed this. :) Yeah, Rose is being pretty harsh. She and Scorpius will have an ending, I promise, you'll have to read to find out what though :) I hope that you enjoy the rest! Report Review
Evie needs to take the hint and leave James alone! Anyways, I hope they get together soon! - DragonSlayerAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review. :D I hope that you enjoy the resit. You'll have to read on to find out, i'm afraid. Report Review
Ooh, I like it! On to the next chapter! =)Author's Response: thank you very much for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! I hope the rest lives up to your expectations. :S Report Review
OMG LOVE it! =D Laney really got her back, it was perfect, and the part where Al comes in to defend her, well, that was beautiful! Please update soon! - DragonSlayer PS 10/10Author's Response: Thanks! The review is much appreciated! ash Report Review
WOW! Aidan's awake! I want to say finally about Potter and Agatha, but I'm pretty sure they're not going to actually get together... Potter was drunk and Agatha still thinks she hates him... anyways, update soon please! - DragonSlayer PS 100/10 ;) Report Review
That was so sweet!!! Honestly, that's all I can say... I LOVED this chapter... I used to hate stories that had arranged marriages with the two ending up falling in love, but this one's different... I like it! =) - DragonSlayer PS Infinity/10 =D Ohh and update soon please! Report Review
FINALLY!!! =D They finally got over themselves and had a good snog... =) Awww... poor Al and Bryn, they never really got to have their's though... please update soon!! - DragonSlayer PS 100/10!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
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