Beautiful! I love your writing style! Very good. The emotions in this piece is incredible! ~ Sam M

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks!

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I loved it! You writing style actually reminds me of Rowlings a bit. Very sweet. 9/10. Keep writing! I'll be back to check for an update! ~ Sam M

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Right! Your response cleared up some questions I had. Update soon!! ~ Sam

Author's Response: i'm glad it did. i'm afraid that i don't know how soon i'll be updating. with some luck i'll finish chapter 14 tonight and post it. otherwise it might take some time cuz i'm moving to london and i'm not sure when i'll be able to get an internet connection. thanx for reviewing! xxx

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Amazing! I loved it so much! I like how you drawed the reader into the mind of a madman. Nice! *adds to favs* ~ Sam M

Author's Response: Cheers! This is my favourite, SO much fun to write, I can't stress that enough. thanks so much for reviewing!

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I loved it!! You're good at emotions and details! Wow, this is really good, and I'm not for biting my tongue; I take writing seriously. *adds to favs* Brilliant! ~ Sam M

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It makes me feel good to know you enjoyed it. ^_^

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Huh? the last line confuses me a bit. She doesn't like Moony in that way, does she? Anyways, I hope Prongs is learning something. Update soon, my friend.

Author's Response: in the beginning of the story,danika wasn't oblivious to sirius' charming,flirty behaviour with her. but as time wore on,she became much closer to remus,even if it is only as a friend. as for whether they'll become even closer: we'll wait and see. xxx

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o_O The plot is developing! I feel goosebumps...onto the next chapter.

Author's Response: that's the longest chapter i wrote,but i like what's happening in it. helps us see another side of danika. xxx

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*sings* Remus and Danika, Remus and Danika! Ahem, Ok, I blame it on lack of coffee...I love it so far.

Author's Response: they would make a cute couple, wouldn't they? xxx

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Oh! I love Remus...-sigh- mouhaha! Very interesting...!

Author's Response: i adore remus' character. there's so much there. he can be serious and studious,but at the same time he's a Marauder and can act naughty as well (though the latter i still have to explore some more in my fic). xxx

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Loved the ending of this chapter. Very good :)

Author's Response: yeah,it's cute,isn't it? xxx

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I love it! That's all I have to say...:)

Author's Response: aww, merci my friend. xxx

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Nice! Your writing style flows nicely and I really enjoyed reading this. Keep writing! Oh, and you are more than welcome to have a look at my stories. I mean, if you want to :) Cheers! ~ Sam

Author's Response: so glad you enjoyed this one-shot and i'll try to check out your fics, i have along list to look at, lol. thanks for reading and reviewing! much love! ;) ~nomikkin

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Very good! I like it! Very original, I must say. I like how you portraied the characters. Nicely done!~ Sam M

Author's Response: glad you liked this. thanks for your wonderful compliments and for reading and reviewing. much love! ;) ~nomikkin

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Nice. I like it. You style is unique and I think it's great. ~ Sam M

Author's Response: thnx! wow! u don't no how much that word.."unique" means to me! i luv that u luv it. i've never had someone call me unique with my writing before, thnx so much!~AmericanRonnyBabe

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And I just noticed thhat I've reviewed this before....I can't believe that I had forgotten about it... I love all your stories, so I must've thought that it was another one of yours. Oh, well. Loverly. ~ Sam M

Author's Response: Thanks again Sam! :)

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Oh my god. This was brilliant! Totally amazing. And I'm not one for biting my tongue, I take writing seriously. I loved this, especially the ending. Simlpy brilliant! ~ Sam M

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

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I was going to say that maybe you should space a bit more between paragraphs. Not much, but on some places it could need it! Anyways, love the story. Feel free to check out my stories, if you're bored sometime! Cheers! ~ Sam M

Author's Response: i'm really glad that you enjoy the story,and i'll take your advice and put some spaces between the paragraphs. take care.

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Nice and long chapter. Please update soon! ~ Sam M

Author's Response: chapter 13 is in limbo currently,so hopefully it'll be on soon. xxx

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I like Danika. I think you write her very well. She is certaintly not a Mary-Sue like so many other OCs on this site. Anyways, good chapter. ~ Sam M

Author's Response: i was wondering: what's up with this mary-sue thing people have mentioned? anyway,thank you. xxx

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Interesting. I very enjoyable. On to the next chapter. ~ Sam M

Author's Response: i'm glad you like. xxx

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I love it! I like how you introduced all the characters. Nicely done. The dialogues between the characters flows. Really good. ~ Sam M

Author's Response: thank you! xxx

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I liked it. The plot progresses nively and your writing flows. Overall I really like it. ~ Sam M

Author's Response: hmm,one of the things i was worried about was that it wouldn't flow well. thank you for reassuring me. xxx

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Loverly! What else is there to say? Brilliant! ~ Sam

Author's Response: Thank you, Sam! I hoped this chapter would go over well since it's a bit short. Apparently, it seems it did. :]

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Very nice. Maybe just a tad melodramatic, but I enjoyed it! Great job. ~ Sam M

Author's Response: I know I went a little overboard, but I'm glad that you still liked it..

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My, my, this is incredibly short. I like it, though. nice and original. My Tom Riddle story is progressing nicely as well. Update soon! ~ Sam M

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, short, isnt it?It's sooooooooo infuriating. Ah well.

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