Whoa... I'm not usually one for reading about Minerva and Albus, but maybe I should, though only if its written this well because that is what those characters deserve. This is a really amazing portrayal of her, each of the excerpts from the times in her life with him were pretty much all capable of making me feel something. And the descriptions of the smallest details to her thoughts were amazing and enviable. Siriusly though your descriptive powers are awesomesauce. I salute you for another great story. :D
-brithewriterAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you! I don't think I can properly thank you enough for these compliments, either. McGonagall is one of my favourite characters, and being told that I've been able to capture her so well, deservingly well, means a huge amount. ^_^ Report Review
Oh gosh I just love this! I totally identify with Pippa, who is a very interesting girl to say the least. Her commentary throughout is hilarious, entertaining, very fitting. Especially all of the stuff with Albus. Its so different and great to see him not looked on as brightly as he would be in others.
Anywho, yet another great chapter!
brithewriter :DAuthor's Response: Hey :) I'm glad you like the story. I'm glad you think Pippa is interesting, she's a lot of fun to write and I'm happy you think that. And I'm glad you find it different! Thanks so much for the review and I hope you have a great day! xx Report Review
Aww 11 year old conversations! Very cute! I didn't really expect the curse word, because at the time she's 11, though 16 explaining. And Rose and Scorpius were a bit snappy towards each other despite just meeting. But still a very good start to a story!
brithewriter :DAuthor's Response: Thanks for pointing that out, I'll probably go back and change it later :P They both are very stubborn and prejudiced, even as 11 year olds, that's why they're snappy. Thanks for the review :) Report Review
I'm quite certain that you've captured the feeling of being in love and infatuated really well, because I get exactly that lol. :D Siriusly, I totally get how Gwen feels about being in love with your best friend. You totally do an amazing job of portraying it. There is no way anyone could tell that this is your first fanfic, because it's great! Also, Quidditch is love! :D
-brithewriter from the forums!Author's Response: Aww, thank you. I'm glad all the feelings in this came through, because that was one of the things I was trying to accomplish. Nice to know that it's working (:
Thank you for your kind words and yes, Quidditch is love (: Report Review
So much love for this story! The dialogue is perfect and the plot line has just the right amount of Pride& Prejudice. And I love your Rose, and your Scorpius seems perfect in his attitude! Anywho, its great! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot that you're enjoying this story and its style. It seemed like such a strange idea when I started, and I'm shocked (and gratified) to see how much love readers have for it! ^_^ Report Review
Dude, that beginning is really quite intense and gripping. It makes me want to continue reading to find out more (which i'm sure I will). And the baby, aww!Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you liked it! Report Review
Blerg! I never thought I would love a Next Gen that isn't a ScoRose so much! Especially with the ScoRose ship being mentioned so casually, it makes me giggle and I love it. This was a great girly chapter, its got just enough of the girly stuff with out going over the top. And getting to meet some of the family was great too, their relationships are very believable. Also, Lysander, I like him and can't wait to see where that goes. Great second chapter!
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Dude, omygosh! That was so heavy, but like in an amazing good way. That had to be challenging, because you certainly came up with this as the reward! Especially for it being about Petunia, just wow. Good job!Author's Response: Thanks for this :) Report Review
Aww! Yay! That was a very good fluff piece. Rose and Scorpius are my favorites, and I loved how you wrote them. It was a great wedding story, with no terrible family drama for once. I like it, scratch that, love it. Good job!Author's Response: I am so glad that you liked it! I wanted to give them their moment without all the drama. Thanks for reading and reviewing! =) Report Review
First of all, just seeing the title made me want to read this! :D
Such great fluff indeed! I loved this! Their banter, their relationship, Ron's fascination with muggle things like football. This was a great one-shot. :DAuthor's Response: Fluffy fluff, how I love thee! Yay! Thanks! Report Review
I actually really like this as a beginning of a story. It could use maybe a little work, just a few grammatical errors (commas) and the background could be spread out a little better. But elsewise, I love the Cinderella idea for a Dramione. Very cute! It makes it interesting and plausible. Your characters are in character which is better than a lot of Dramione's I've seen. Good start and I look forward to seeing where this goes. :DAuthor's Response: hello darling(:
Thanks! Yes,I know. I don't think i have a beta for this...oh no D: I need to get one! Thanks,I love it to! I just couldn't resist! Thats great to hear,I want to keep this one as in character as possible.
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Hi! brithewriter from the forums!
Well I'm glad that you are continuing the story, as I think its a really good idea for one. This chapter was very good at details and building on the characters. Also, the flash back is helpful with insight to what Hermione's life was like before. Can't wait to find out what happened, and will happen! Good chapter.Author's Response: Hey, thanks for coming by. I'm glad you enjoyed it. There is definitely going to be some more insight into what happened with Ron so keep reading if you'd like to find out. (: Report Review
Oh! I do like this idea of a magical dating service. Very interesting and different. Can't wait to see where this goes. :DAuthor's Response: Thanks a bunch. Hope you keep reading. Report Review
Okay, I'm glad that this will be more than a one shot. It is very cute, and a realistic girly night. Good job on that! Lucy isn't a common main character, so kudos on that as well especially for making her not like Percy or hateful. I like her. :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I really like Lucy too, so I'm glad you do as well. I haven't read many next gen's that revolve around Lucy but she just popped into my head and I had to write her. Thanks again! Report Review
Okie dokie, brithewriter from the forums!
I have to admit (and I don't mean to offend) but I think you are spot on with Lavender being the type of girl to try and find a vampire boyfriend after reading Twilight. Maybe that's the fanfic version of her, lol. Anywho this was pretty good, good job!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :) Report Review
I know you only write Harry& Ginny. That being said, consistent happy or blissful togetherness can grow rather boring. But then again that is probably why this is fluff. For being that though, this is an okay one-shot. Yes, Harry and Ginny love each other and will be together forever but what else? They seem to lack life or spirit I guess, they are very stale feeling, as if they don't have real problems.
Sorry if that sounds bad or mean, just trying to give you something to think about. :)Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review, I'm happy you stopped by!
First of all. You haven't read all of my one-shots.
Second two of them actually have fights, form different point of views. One is from Harry, the other is from Ginny. Also I Confess I love You Harry is dead.
This is exactly why I write one-shots, because in a novella or novel, you have to make a problem of some sort, I have a hard time doing that.
Also I'm fighting against the fan-fiction world here. A lot of people always writes Harry and Ginny the same way, for the most make them pretty unhappy while Hermione and Ron are snogging each other's faces of, it gets really annoying after awhile, and I guess that's another reason why I write them happy.
Also it's a one-shot, I call my page all the things that could be. I have three different ideas for the same scene (after Harry kisses Ginny for the first time) So many things could have happened, that I like capturing all the good, because everyone captures all the hate and hurt.
It doesn't sound mean, I underatand what you're saying, but I have thought about it, and I guess it's just not in me.
The one where the argue is Hopefully Forever (Harry's POV) and These things Happen (Ginny's Pov).
I'm glad you liked this story though.
Lizzie Report Review
OMGods! This was the best epilogue to the best fanfic ever. Siriusly! I love it so much, you did an amazing job with it. And I really will miss it. But dude, AWESOME! I don't know what else to say that isn't completely redundant. Hopefully this isnt you done with writing, because you are great. You should write original fiction and get published, because you would be a bestseller if this is anything to go by. Lastly, Thank you for writing these stories. They couldn't be anymore perfect. 1 Billion/1 Billion Report Review
In which I love anything about OC Slytherins. And its a Marauders involved story too. I really like this beginning and Morainne. Good job.Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Report Review
Whoa, that is probably the longest introduction/prologue I've ever read! Not a bad thing though because you get well enough invested in the story to keep reading. And I really do like the little family moment at the beginning. This is a very interesting story and I wish you luck.Author's Response: Why, thank you very much. I admit the Prologue is quite long. In fact, it's far longer than the first draft was, but as I developped my story, I needed to establish a little more of my timeline and my OC for it to hold...
Thanks for the review and I hope you'll like the rest. Welcome aboard. Report Review
Oh Yay! I was hoping there would be an epilouge! Happiness! :D Report Review
This is really great! I absolutely love your descriptive style! It really makes this series great, you know aside from already having an intense story so close to the beginning. I like this.
-brithewriterAuthor's Response: Thank you!!! :) Report Review
Gotta say, for a very first fic this was really good. :D It felt really real to me, (you know if normal families talked about quidditch tryouts ;)) But it really did, all of the family interactions were very fitting for the characters and situation. And as a Hermione hater in general, I really liked your portrayal of her as a mother. I think it was pretty spot on. Meaning that despite my dislike of her, I liked her in this. Also, your Rose was great. :D Good job!Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! I'll be honest, I really liked writing this piece, but I can't read it anymore. I don't know why, but I haven't read it in awhile.
It means a lot that you liked my portrayal of Hermione and Rose. I was really worried about getting Hermione right, as I always am with the Hogwarts era characters.
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Okay, I love this! Anything based around Draco just makes it that much better especially if its funny. I love his POV too. :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! I really like Draco, too, and it was fun writing his irritated POV in this part of his life. I'm glad the story made you laugh :)
Thanks again for your kind review!
Amanda Report Review
I love this story so very much. The Pride& Predjudice style of it is just amazing. Also, Rose and Scorpius, YAY!Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm really glad to hear that you've enjoyed the story so far, and I hope that you like the rest, too. :D Report Review
If this story ends how I hope it is going to end, I am going to cry with happiness.
Thank you for another great chapter. Report Review
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