Okay so I've read the whole entire thing and 1st off, I just want to say that it is so amazing! I love it OH SO MUCH. but you need to update pronto! Oh, and isn't it about time that the Elite pop up or something? Just a thought(;Author's Response: Oh why thank you! You've made me blush. ;)
The next chapter was just sent for validation so keep posted! Ha! The Elite are being very elusive aren't they? I'm not saying anything, I suppose you're just going to have to keep reading to find out. *evil cackle*
Thanks for the review!
Very good! Quick question though, who is Sam? Is he Scorpius' little brother or something? Just wondering! Superb other than that though!
10/10Author's Response: He is indeed :) I used him as he's Lily's main squeeze in my current WIP novel Lily, Lily, Quite Contrary :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D Report Review
LOVE this so far! Beutifully written!
Just one thing...you say that Charisma and James are 6 years, yet at one point you say, "the fifteen year old glared daggers at her uncaring older brother" referring to Lily. So, I'm wondering about the age difference between Lily and James, and where Albus fits in.
Also, how do you pronounce Charisma?Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad that you're enjoying this, and it's so lovely of you to say that :D
Right, I hadn't actually realised that I had done that :/, that's me and my bad editing. :P Thank you for pointing that out, I will fix that when I next have a chance.
James is in sixth year, Albus in fifth and Lily in third :)
As for how you say her name, it's like 'ca-riz-ma', like the presence that people have :) Report Review
So you dont really know me, but I've been reading ladylike and real ladies since the beginning! your an amazing writer and I love your stories!!! Please update soon! and I know how your feeling with the whole writing and school thing. I'm a freshmen and it can get super crazy at times. Especially now, with midterms coming upp. BUt please update soon? Im addicted! Author's Response: I'll update again as soon as possible. :) Now I'm kind of writing piece by piece, so I'm definitely behind on the story. Report Review
ohkayy. so Im really sorry i hadnt reviewed at all, i just dont like reviewing. but i read this series through and i absolutely ADORED it! this is how the harry potter books should have been in my opinion. lovely job and i will most defientely be reading your other workssAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
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