Woo, you did update! :D
Another great chapter! Can't wait to know what Victoria wants to say to her...
Looking forward to the next chapter! 10/10 as always! xx

Author's Response: lol, yeah, i didnt realize that it was so long! but alas, here it is, and victoria never has anything too apetizing to say *evil smirk*

glad that you liked it and i hope to post again before, or soon after, the queue closer :)

-WP

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Another great chapter... so they finally admit their feelings for eachother! xx

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Gosh, every single one of your chapters from the couple of stories I've read of yours are just amazing! They are written really well, and are all interesting and entertaining!!
Keep it up, you'll make an amazing writer one day!
Anyway, I'm gonna go stalk other stories of yours :P Hope you update this one soon xx
ps you need to get some story banners :p

Author's Response: thank you!! im so glad that you like my fics. it makes me feel so happy and i just cant wait until one day i can see my name at the bottom of a published book :)

but yes, yes go stalking!! haha, i finished the next chapter for this just the other day and will put it up, probably tomorrow :)

oh yes, banners would be nice. i really must get some

-WP

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Your story is abs fab, very entertaining and really well written!
Very enjoyable read! Thank you for the brilliant story xx

Author's Response: abs fabs? I can get on board with that! Thanks so much for the wonderful review! I'm excited to see what you think of the next chapter!!

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Hi... good start to the story.

I don't think you need to worry about dialogue, I could follow pretty easily, and it was written well.

One thing that I felt like I needed to point out ... when you get butterflies in your stomach, well that IS feeling nervous, they are one and the same... anyway I guess people interpret sayings in different ways.

Also, as this is your introductory chapter I'm just gonna assume that in your following chapters is where you're gonna go into more detail about why Hermione isn't satisfied with Ron or why she can't talk to him about stuff...if not then I guess maybe you should think about doing that?

Other then that, good start! xx

Author's Response: I do plan on writing a follow up. I just wanted to get some feedback so I could improve on it before posting more to the story.

Thank you for leaving a review.

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Hi,

Interesting story line. You could improve on spelling and grammer, but you're already aware of that so I'm sure you're trying.

Sometimes its a bit difficult to understand who is talking and saying which line, so maybe you could end it with "said Hermione, shouted Ron, cried Ginny" etc...? Obviously you don't have to for every sentence, but I'd think the first line from someone should be made more clear.

Anyway, other then that it's interesting, will keep a lookout for an update.

Author's Response: thanks xx :D xx
will update soon thank you xx

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Absolutely adore this story, really well written and very interesting! Looking forward to the next chapter! xx

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Another lovely chapter! Really enjoying your stories. Looking forward to your next chapter in any one of your stories! lol
xx

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Ive abs loved this story, really really good!! Your a really good writer, enjoy reading your stories!

Author's Response: thanks!! so glad that you enjoyed my story and i'm happy that you like my writing style :) hope to see you on my other fics!

-WP

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Very interesting!! I like to guess stories, so Im gonna take a stab and say that Emma is actually Remus' child with his long lost love Susan... but the blood confirmation is throwing me off! Lol. Will be looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Haha thanks :) You'll have to wait and see. The next chapter should be up soon, it just needs to get through validation.
Thanks for reading, it means a lot :)

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Yay! Ive enjoyed this alot, am sad its finished though, but it was a great story!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I was unsure :)

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good story, looking forward to the nxt chapted. i think the change in POVs is good!

Author's Response: thanks, glad you like it! hope you keep reading.

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your story is brilliant, very entertaining! keeping me going through revising for exams, so pls update soon :P xx

Author's Response: thanks!!! i'll post again as soon as i can :)!

-WP

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