so lily had a miscarriage? that really sucks. is this story going to get any better because right now its kinda depressing?

Author's Response: well, sorry to say but this is still not the end,
but the ending is happy i promise you that, and it will go a bitt upwords from here

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this chapter is a little shorter than the others, but i still love your story!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! (:

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I love your story! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

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really geat chapter! can't wait to read the next!

Author's Response: Thank you :) The next will be out soon! ~writergirl8

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another amazing chapter! i cant wait to read the next!

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I really do like your story. But, when you validate a chapter, at least proofread it. I saw a lot of spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes. And at least capitalize things that need to be capitalize. You also spelled Hermione's name wrong.
I'm really not trying to be mean at all. I'm just trying to help you improve your story.
When are you posting your next chapter? I can't wait to read it!

Author's Response: thank you :P
well yeah i know this was on a time when i didn't have the time to read through the chapters. but well i'm editing them now :P
did i missplel Hermione's name ?! shit ! i didn't know :P but thank you :) i'm thinking of posting one today :)

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I love this chapter! Update soon please!

Author's Response: thanks a million
miss Chloe

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Amazing story! I absolutely loved it! Could you write like a sequel to it? I just don't want this story to end!

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I really liked your story, and I don't usually like one-shots! This was cute and well-written! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it, especially in light of the not-liking-one-shots thing! Thanks for the review; I don't get many, so I appreciate it. :)

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Cute story! A little short though. But I liked it a lot!

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That was a great story! It fit so perfectly with the song! I just loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing next gen, because anything can happen :) ~writergirl8

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It's a good storyline and a great start to a terrific story. But, I think you should try and proofread a story before you send it in to get validated because I see quite a few errors like no commas whatsoever throughtout this chapter which is a huge mistake. Also, capitalize things that need to be capitalized. I'm not trying to tell you how to write your story, but at least take my advice to help improve this story.
Please post the next chapter soon! I can't wait to read it!

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Another amazing chapter! I almost cried during this one. But I still thought it was great. Can't wait to read the next!

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That's the end? I was hoping for way much more than that.

Author's Response: oh. sorry :( i just couldn't figure out what to do with it so i decided to end it. if you have any ideas feel free to suggest them :)

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Another great chapter! Can't wait to read the next!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

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When are you going to post the next chapter? I can't wait to read it!

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Great chapter! Will Rose ever get custody of Aidan again, or is Scorpius just going to have custody of him? I can't wait to read the next chapter!

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I'm totallly confused. You keep switching points on view. If you could just stick to one person's point of view would be great, and less confusing.

When are you updating the next chapter? I can't wait to read it.

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Great chapter! Can't wait to read the next!

Author's Response: thanks a million(:
-Chloe

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Great chapter! Can't wait to read the rest!

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I really like your story. Could write more chapters, or a sequel? But, the story's fine ending right here.
-Samantha

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I like the storyline, but, I think you should proofread a chapter before you get it validated because I found a couple of mistakes.And, I also think that you should make a space in between each paragraph, because it looks like one big, jumbled mess and it's kind of hard to read. Please post more chapters!

-Samantha

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Great story! Are you going to make a sequel to this?

Author's Response: Maybe about the lives of Rose's friends if peop;e think it's a good idea. Thankyou!

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I love how you added the lyrics in with this story. Your story was really good too!

Author's Response: aww, thanks for being the first to review!

And, thanks. I definitely wanted the lyrics in there, they just fit REALLY well with what i was trying to say.

-Lily. L :)

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I've heard te song before, but I don't think it goes well with story that much. But, your story was really good.

Author's Response: thank you!

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