This is a great one-shot, really heart wrenching. I loved it.

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I liked it. It was a little fast pased, but that isn't always bad in a fan fic.

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I liked this chapter a lot. I hope you keep writing more of it, it's really good.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. As I said in the response to your previous review, I am short of time these days but doing my best to keep up with the updating.

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I liked the chapter, but I think it was a little over done, if you don't mind me saying so.
Let me explain. The other chapters, although fitting with the ideas of the Black Sabbath songs, didn't literally fit it. I liked them better. This one was just a little too over the edge, with Sev thinking of becoming iron several times. It just seemed a little forced. But maybe that's the nature of the song, as it's quite hard to write to im my opinion. Sorry to be a downer.
I am enjoying the story fully though, please keep it up.

Author's Response: It has been a while since I have reread this particular chapter. My recollection is that I didn, indeed, tweak it a bit to make the narrative match the song lyrics. I appreciate your criticism on that point; in retrospect, I am inclined to agree.

I am so busy that finding time to update is difficult, but I'm doing my best.

Thank you so much for reviewing.

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It's quite an amusing little anecdote. Quite like Severus as well

Author's Response: I'm glad you found it amusing! :) Thank you so much for your review!

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I would very very much like a sequel!

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It's a good chapter, but it seems a little fast. First, I'm not sure if anyone would assume they're pregnant from missing their period just a bit-maybe a week or so, and they'd check before saying they were. Also, didn't she take a potion for that? I'm also a little warry of making a decision like dropping out in only a few hours. The writing and story is good, but maybe the timeline should be stretched to a few days or a week, not one day.

Author's Response: she did take a potion the first time, and also i think your right its was too fast, but she is also a bit of a jumpy person, look at how she reacted to Patricia in a previous chapter.

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I do like this chapter it really opens up for the rest of the story. My one SLIGHT problem is that Draco signs his letter "DM" in an attempt to hide his identity if found by someone else, no doubt...but he says right in the letter that he's a malfoy. That's my only quarrel, good story otherwise. I can't wait to finish it.

Author's Response: Oh gosh you're good! I hadn't noticed that, poo. Thanks for pointing it out, I'm so silly sometimes. I don't know if I shall change it or not, maybe maybe not. I'm glad you liked it other than that. Cheers for the review xoxo

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This is one of my favorite chapters too.
I dont think anything is that out of character, except maybe the sailor comment in the alcove. The commas are definatelty better. I'm a huge grammar freak and I hardly cringed at anything.

-Kirstin

Author's Response: Oh thank goodness someone else can see the commas fading. Yeah the sailor comment was an original idea I wasn't sure about from the very beginning, but I thought I'd take a risk and put it in, if it didn't pay off I've leant a valuable lesson :) Cheers for reviewing xoxo

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This is a really great story.It's informative and realistic but it's interesting too. I like where it's going.

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It was definately worth it. Ron is such a prat and Draco's becoming almost gentlemanly. I liked it a lot and can't wait to read more.

-Kirsti

Author's Response: Hey!

Yes, Ron is a prat and it's absolutely necessary for the plot I planned. Thanks for reviewing:)

Greets
Miriel

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I really like this story. I'm wondering why Hogwarts is giving alcohol to underaged students, but I can overlook it since the rest of the story is great.
I think it would be cool to end the whole story with something else about Hermione and Draco after the miscarrage though. Just a thought.

-Kirstin

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I love this chapter. The suspense is overwhelming and I can't wait to keep reading.

-Kirstin

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I really loved thias story. It's so original and has such a great idea to it.

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I really like this chapter. The storys coming along and I can't wait to read more.

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This is the beginning of a great story. I like how it goes back and forth from Hermione to Draco. The contrast between their dreams is nice and letting the reader know Draco thinks of Hermione works really well. I can't wait for the rest.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! You sure put a smile on my face!

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I'm wondering how Hermione did fall off the tower.
Was it really that slippery or is she just that bad of a flyer? Maybe there was some sort of shield? Was it the ghost?

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very original, I love the idea of this. I suppose I must keep reading. Great work.

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I like this chapter a lot. It's kind fo soft and fuzzy, but the question about Narcissa really leaves suspence for the next chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter!

-Kirsti

Author's Response: Hey!

I know it was a littel soft, but hey.It's alove story after all:)

In the next chapter there is another surprise coming, I promise!

Greets
Miriel

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I like where it's going so far. It's an interesting idea. I'm excited for the rest of it!

-Kirsti

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