Ninja rolls and cheese FTW.
I am reviewing every single chapter.
Yes, that is right.
Every single one.
I am your crazy stalker. Just because.
I think its awesimiliar the way you are saying Albert.
Favourite scene: When Aphrodite talks to herself.
One thing though. Redvines= American.
That is all!
Tata for now, Dahling.
TheOriginalMarySueAuthor's Response: Ninja rolls and cheese=the greatest thing ever.
I like reviews so I thank you greatly. Tehe. I like stalkers too. They are the best. Legit.
Sorry I'm like hurring this response because I'm going to an ice hockey game so that's why this one kind of sucks soo yeahhh.
But annyyywayyysss yes I'm american. Guilty. :) I don't like football though. It's for chumps. Yeahh. Okayy I really have to go so once again, I'm sorry that this response sucks butt! :) Report Review
Seriously. I love the story. Aphrodite sounds like me. 'cept, ya know. More epic. Prettier to. What ever.
Yus,anyway, I LOVE the scene of her making faces through the windows. Love it. LOVE IT I SAY!
Also, Donny counting roadkill is epic. And Aphrodite had a crowning moment of epic with the whole Freddy feelin' her up thing. He is such a numpty.
I also love Elle. She is mini-pricey! Lots more bits for her, purlease!
I WILL GIVE YOU CUPCAKES! VIRTUAL CUPCAKES ARE ONE OF LIFES WONDERS! YOU WILL HAVE SOME!
Wow. Caps. Lots and lots of caps. Exclamation marks to. Did you know multiple exclamation marks are the sign of a diseased mind? CHICKEN!!!
*Cough* I should leave.
Love & hugsAuthor's Response: OH MY GOD. I COMPLETELY AGREE THAT CAPS ARE THE BEST EVER!!! EXCLAMATION MARKS TOO! THEY ARE SO AWESOME!!!
Okay I'm done talking in all caps. It gets a little tiring after awhile, ya know? I tend to shout in my head when I am writing in it. It's pretty crazy. Pretty crazy, indeed.
Yes, Elle will be in the story more! I tried to make her a mini Aphrodite because I just love Aphrodite. I mean, she is pretty epic:D
And I count road kill whenever I'm on long car rides just like Donny. Hey, it's entertaining!
I WANT CUPCAKES NOW. Thanks a lot for adding another craving to my list:p I'm already craving, Cheesecake, Fajitas, Pepperoni, and Lo Mein. Yes, I have weird cravings. DON'T JUDGE ME!
Blahhh. I have to go respond to your other reviews which are awesome by the way! So I'll see you in like ten minutes. Well, not SEE you. But I'll see you? Yeahhh. Report Review
I laughed out loud so many times over reading this story. looking forward to the update.
Wallace made me want to go find a chicken drumstick to befriend.
Katie really reminds me of.well me. Flightly,clumsy,hyper,overeacting,often socially awkward. Except...how do I put this?
Shes funny. Yep,thats the one.
TheORIGINALMarySueAuthor's Response: I'm glad your a fan of my story. I wrote it and it made me life so hen i put it on here i could only hope it made veryone else laugh as well. I'm glad youre such a fan of Katie, and I think that part of her charm is that shes basically the person that everyone feels like at SOME point in time. I'll update ASAP. Thanks for reviewing.
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Amazingly written story.
I was itching to get back to my computer,and even pulled an all nighter reading it.
Realistic to a tee, even the slightly sickening sweetness of Sirius and Laura together,and the two faced syndrome of teenage boys. It deserves its prise
This review is of the entire story so far,and I hope you have a nice speedy update soon,with a bit of length to it. No pressure!
Thank you for this gem,
TheOriginalMarySueAuthor's Response: Hi there! Thanks for the review! I do love getting reviews from new people ... actually, I love all reviews, but you know what I mean. :D
I'm very pleased that you think my story is realistic, I tried very hard to get that right because like a lot of people I was sick of stories where everything moved too fast. And I'm also glad that you appreciate the teenaged-boy-ness of the hero - he is only 18 after all and a lot of people seem to forget that. But of course there is some maturing that still needs to happen.
As for updates, well I do them about every 5-7 days so next one is due this weekend. Not sure when, but soon. As to length, well they're all about 4000-5000 words give or take so expect it to be that long.
cheers, Mel Report Review
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