I enjoyed this one! :) Very, very well written, as are the others. 10/10Author's Response: thank you so much! Report Review
Very good! Your writing is so unique. It's pure. Easily stated. Teddy's point of view is so much fun now, because he can't see. It's nice to get the senses he does for a change. 10/10Author's Response: thank you :) Report Review
Awesome! This chapter was ace! The writing was the best so far, and it kept together nicely. :)10/10Author's Response: Awww. Thank you. I have begun working on this again and plan to start updating after the holidays. :) Report Review
Very good! :) I felt that Harry talking to Teddy about his parents seemed a bit rushed. It just felt like... I don't know. Like, I can tell that you led up to it nicely, but it just felt like Harry was dropping a big bomb on him. lol. I'm not sure how to explain my opinion about that! It was so cute how Teddy explained families to Harry, too!Author's Response: Thanks for this review too!!! They really make my day. :) Report Review
Aw, very cute. I loved this chapter as well. Teddy is too adorable! 10/10Author's Response: Thanks!!! I'm really happy that you took the time to review each chapter. :) it means a lot. Report Review
Aw, really great. :) I loved how Teddy's hair kept changing. This chapter was really sweet! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you! Reviews are always so wonderful to read! Report Review
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