was it olivers dad trying to kill jane??
Thanks for the update ;D xxx 10/10Author's Response: Dun dun DUNN. I can't tell you, but I like your thinking outside of the box! Thank you for the amazing review! Report Review
Oh good times... You've updated! Just thouhgt I would tell you ;)
Now some people might take offence to this, but please don't, it's a compliment; I believe that, since the first chapter of 'A tale that differs' you have improved greatly at being a writer. Thats a compliment! I swear!
P.S Ha Dean, yeah you better back off! Ginny is taken! lol.
Bye bye xx.Author's Response: I know I have :) I've gotten more involved in it...I've planned it out in more depth...and, unlike the first few chapters, I barely let any lame comments out of me...thanks a lot for saying, anyway. Report Review
So we're getting alot deeper into the relationship now then 'ey? Harry said he loves her. Ginny blew him off XD.
It will be a great read the chapter it comes out that Harry did lie to Ginny, I can't wait! I really hope Tonks makes it though, I so love her.
Hope there will be an update soon. bye bye xxAuthor's Response: I'm updating right now...and yes, we're getting a lot deeper into the relationship. It's not exactly that Ginnt blew him off so much as that Ginny just can0t deal with those words now. I played around with canon, truthfully...in canon fanfiction, it's always Harry who has trouble saying 'I love you'...in here, it's ginny. Report Review
I want loads of clothes and fuck loads of diamonds, I heard people die while they are trying to find them... Sorry I love Lily Allen ^^
Great story by the way, I don't know if you did it intentionally but Riley I blieve is Lily Allen spot on. You can tell by her lyrics what type of person she is and through Rileys behaviour that they are quite the same... so yeah I'm really loving Riley!
10/10 Bye bye!
xxAuthor's Response: I didn't actually mean for that to happen, haha, originally Riley had short blond hair, but the more I wrote her the more her appearance changed in my mind, and when I was trying to find pictures for the graphics and I found one of Lily Allen and thought, wow, that is totally Riley.
And yes, I love Lily Allen too (and Riley, haha), thank you so much for reading and leaving a review!
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I don't believe I have ever reviewed on Coming back a Swan, because I found it around October and it hadn't been updated so now I get to review! ^_^
Really I just want to tell you how much I love this story, it's so full of drama and I don't think we've even got to the thick of it all yet... am I right? Doesn't her Dad make her start back at Hogwarts because of what happened with her little sis?
When I saw on my favorites page that it was updated I sort of just blinked at the screen for a little bit, then smiled and nearly woke my family up squealing!
I loved the ending to the chapter, very dramatic.
Hope the next up date want be for away.Author's Response: Yeah, really it hasn't even begun yet... but it'll get going in the next few chapters and my intention is to make the a fairly long story (obviously) lol. I'm really really glad you like the story! Report Review
Okay I think you have done the job on making me like Cho now, giving birth in a dark and nasty basement and then the scare of the baby being dead. Not something anyone should have to go thought so I really glad this is just a story. ^_^
So Megan and James... nice. Teddy and Vic, Rose and Scorpius, Dom and Ben and then I think Lsyander and Imogen...? It's one big matchmaking journey, ^^.
Loved the birth of James, and Ginny going all bossy, I so love her.
I can't wait to see how the adults get out, weather it be by the children braking in and saving them or some sort of miracle happens and they find a way out, maybe by house-elf??
Please don't keep us waiting to long for an update Author's Response: YES! I finally made you like Cho! (one of the aims of this chapter :P ) Hehehe I do like my matchmaking, I think it takes away some of the scary and the flashback was probably my favourate part of this chapter (i may be adding more of those in) I cant beleive you managed to guess about the house elf!!! *shhh* Thanks so much for the amazing reveiw and I hope you enjoy the next chapter xxx Report Review
I don't think I have reviewed for the past couple of chapters and I don't know why to be honest, I normally always try to for Someones gotta give. It's one of the best next generation stories out there, so sorry. ^_-
If Kiersten is going to Dom's how does Hannah get into the story, unless Bill and Kiersten go back to her's to get her stuff and Hannah sees her or something like that.
I know this will sound bad because of the abuse in this chapter, but I liked it. It shows that not everyones family is great like the Potter's or Weasley's, just looked at Harry uncle. Which brings me to my next point, James should really get affected by what's happening to Kiersten when it comes out because his Dad was also abused as a child. Can't wait till all the stuff comesout with her Dad though, just for the drama.
Hopeing there will be a update soon, and I hope you had a good Birthday. O.oAuthor's Response: thanks for reviewing again! Sorry, what i meant by hannah coming back into the story was coming back in later, like way way later not in the recent future. I do have the next chappy already done so it should be out soon!! thanks so so much for reviewing! Report Review
This might sound evil to say, but, Lily reminds me of my older sister. In every way but the red hair. I got that.
I'm starting to get into this story, and the quick updates help as well, most of the storys I read only get updated twice a month if not less. So 'Pixie Dust gives me something to read.
Keep up the excilent work. ^_^
Bye bye.Author's Response: haha that's funny lol... Lily isn't as bad as she sounds she's just really screwed up. lol Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
You my friend are the best freaking author I have ever had the pleasure of coming across! If you wasn't all ready on my favourite authors page, then you would be now. (You're the only one on there) I don't know which story I love most, DJV or this one! This one is totally different to anyother but DJV has been in my life for ages that I could not think of a day with out it!
I love this chapter along with the rest of the story. You have a wonderful imagination, that if you bottled it up, you would have a powerful weapon on your hands!
Can not wait to see the rest of this story, and the development of James's and Aurora's relationship.
I love Charlotte and Hufflepuffs!
BYE! x Report Review
The. Was. Excellent!
All the action that was in there was amazing, than Scorpius and Ben, pfft, I sooo knew that he was the guy Dom met at the party. Bless her cotton socks, Molly Weasley you ickle monster.
One part that actually made me laugh was when Scorpius asked if he looked like a twat, which is my favourite norty word. You still have not convinced me that Cho still is not a little- Yeah, but I hope Oliver's Baby is okay along with Imogen. Ohh Oliver Wood! He is soo yummy!
All righty then, Bye bye for now x.Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind reveiw. Twat is one of my favourate words too *giggle* The next chapter is going to be fun to write and I hope you can eventally accept Cho. I hope you enjoy the next chapter xxx
PS: too too true he is so Yummy! Report Review
You're back! whoop! Lol. So were starting Hogwarts now then yeah, thats cool, there is never a quiet year at that school. If you don't want to use photobucket anymore, go on google and write, free online photoshop, I use it, it's pritty amazing.
Hope it wont be long for the next chapter!
Bye for now.
PS: Was Ginny a little jealous then?Author's Response: thanks for the tip, I'll use it if photo bucket doesn't work for me sometimes. I'll try to upload soon. And...Ginny's not exactly jealous, it's more like she's curious (with a tint of jealousy, of course) Report Review
That was like some James Bond movie, and I LOVED it! The part with Roxy getting blasted through the window was amazing. Who was the boy with Dom? If you had mentioned him then I fergot soz. Good job Megan is there to keep James from getting beat to a pulp. :D Draco really has grown up hasn't he, that's so nice, I love him. James's has a stag patronus!
Can we have some more of the others in the basement please?!
Bye for now x.Author's Response: Haha thank you very much! I'm glad you're enjoying this so far and there is more of the adults to come xxx Report Review
YAY! I mist you. That was totally brilliant, so so funny and I love the new friendship with Blue and Burly, or as I thought as them Bluerly, they sound like the lads I'm friends with. (David and Luke aren't as fit as Bluerly sound) Tuff luck Burly, you creeper! Loving the pic at the end, amazing art work on the dead face ;D.
Please don't take too long on the next update?
bye for now xx. Report Review
Wow, erm I haven't reviewed in some time, sorry!
I'm loving this chapter though! It was so sweet! Even though they were already married, I cant help but feel that Draco giving Astoria the ring ment they were, I don't know, like going to start the marriage again, but this time it would be for real, do you get what I mean?! Like Astoria really is his wife and not that other fellas. whats-his-face, Matt. He is such a ~*^$!
The kiss at the end was just the right thing to end this lovely chapter on!
Please update soon!
Bye bye!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it - I was afraid it would be too sickly-sweet and not in tune with the rest of the story. Apparently not ^^ Thanks again. Report Review
Oh Finally they kiss! Whoop!
I belive this was one of your longer chapters, no? It was fabulous anyway! I liked the bit where Harry shut Hermione up after the almost kiss. Why do they insist on Harry still being bent on Susan Bones?
Please keep this awesome stuff coming!
Bye bye xx.Author's Response: They keep on existing 'cause no one expects that it's Ginny he's 'being bent on'...so, the next possibility is his ex, who he still likes as a friend and who he only left things with because of the war. Report Review
Another James/OC, nice! I liked this bit - 'I then proceeded to checking if she was conscious. Nope. Well, I'll just leave her hear I guess...' Hilarious!
I'm loving it! I also love 'someones gotta give'!
Please keep this stuff coming!
Bye bye xx!Author's Response: Thanks! This is my first time trying to write two stories so we'll see how this goes...thank you sooo much for reviewing! Report Review
I wish Bree would go and jump off some high tower! I seriously don't like her, and William best stop being a prat and tell her to back off too!
Apart from my annoyance at Bree, I really loved this chapter, James ranting and Violet and William asleep on the couch, very sweet!
Please don't take long on a up date!
Bye bye xx.Author's Response: ahah, neither do I, Bree isnt the best of people now is she? ;) ahh William, well i guess he's just the typical type of teenage boy.
awhh than you LadyCullen94;) i'm glad you liked it. i wasnt so sure about introducing James as a slightly crazyyy character in this chapter, and i thought it was about time i added in some more loveey, dovy stuff between Violet and William.
I'll update as soon as i can. I'm a wee bit lost with where to take the story, but i'm already halfway through the next chapter
I need a box of Kleenex! I don't know where to start you have seriously messed up my head right now! I hate to cry, the hole hitched breath, wet cheeks and runny nose thing, I really hate it! Not the story though, that was so real and I feel for Sirius. There was still some of your humour in the story so that made it easier to cope with.
I wont be able to leave my room until my eyes aren't red form
I'm so sorry about your dream, I KNOW how you feel, I had one just like that but about my big sister and my two little nephews, I woke up crying and than just like staired at the ceiling for ages! My big sis (Rachel) is the most important person in my life right now, more so than my parents, and than my little nephews (Harvey & Finley)! I had the worst day ever after that!
Sorry for the long review, and the life story, lol. I love Chase and Deja vu! Also I added you as one of my favorite authors, you are now 1 out of 2 I have ever added!
Bye bye xx!
100/10Author's Response: wow, thank you so much! while i'm sorry for having ruined your day, i'm also personally really touched that my words were able to invoke those feelings in you :)
okay, i totally sounded like a nerd there.
i guess what i'm trying to say is THANKS! and sorry. but mostly thank you soosososo much! Report Review
Dom is so frickin awesome! And funny! I could just imagen what that last bit with Female would look like and I loled so much I thing I almost died from lack of oxygen. I also liked the part at the begining with the Ryan and then the Tomatoe throwing. Lol.
Please update soon!
Bye bye xx.Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I love Dom too...she was so fun to write in this chapter. I should be updating really soon. I'm almost done the next chapter Report Review
Glorious! Awesome! And magnificent! I will literally get on my knees and beg of you to make another one-shot about Regan and James being parents! Will you please?! I read this story ages ago and didn't leave a review. Sorry! But I came across it again and remembered it so I thought I woud re-read it! Last time I had a question and it came up again this time, I even went through you reviews hopping someone had asked, but no one did. Regans real name is Regina Rosier right? Is she the daughter of the Death Eater Rosier?
I'm going to read Camelot now, bye bye xx.
100/10Author's Response: yes she is his grandaughter, but i liked to think that maybe the next generation might have matured a little. And i'm writing a Rose and Scorpius oneshot which features Regan and James as parents.
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I think Family Counselling should be brought into the Wizarding world... Anyone agree??
I've come across one or two stories like this one but the arthurs seem to lose their will power or something along the line, so people end up with an unfinished story to read, I hope it's going to be different for you 'cause I can't wait to sea how the Maradures react to Adelia, especially Sirius because they can realate on the hole dysfunctional family thing and Adelia sounds like someone how partys hard, doesn't obey any sort of rule and can stick up for herself, maybe she and Mr.Black or twins or something??
I'd just like to complement you on how you wright up the charecters emotions, sometimes you can come across an arthur who's charecters could be robots by the way in which they wright them out. I'm sorry for the long review maybe I should have just said 'I love it! Can't wait to read more. Please update soon! xx' Well yeah that's really it so bye for now x.Author's Response: Wow, one of the best reviews I have had throughout all of my stories. Aahah;) thank you for putting in the time in to express your feelings on the chapter to me- really REALLY appreciate it.
I do agree. I think more muggle aspects of the world should be brought into the world such as the issues I have addressed here; I hope it makes the story more interesting :)
Well this is the story I am now dedicated too at the present moment in time (Y) and regarding the meeting with the Marauders (who I love,) you will just have to wait and see. I am going to try and make the story as different as possible from the other really good stories on here, because there tends to be a certain pattern. & yes, that is Adelia down to a pin point;)
Thank you so much LadyCullen94 again :) means so much, honestly. I would be happy with that type of review too, but this review actually made my day.
I hope you keep on reading and I will do my best to update soon.
Bye for now ;) Rosexx
One of my favourite parts, 'her body was aching to have Harry hold her like last night.' How sweet and hart warming! This is the chapter you stopped at last time you had this story up so now, I'm jumping because the next chapter might be up really soon! I'll finaly get to sea what happends next!! PLEASE keep your miraculous chapters coming! Bye for now x.Author's Response: Yeah, you're right, this is where i stopped and i hope you will enjoy next chapter. Report Review
YOU BIG MEANIE! Who has a cliff hanger there!? I want to know Dom's reaction. Oh well. You shouldn't even be having a review after that! Although it was an amazing chapter and soo very interesting to find out Rose thinks green suits her better and then the little thing about Lysander and loving Dom, but hey who said it was amazing, I DIDN'T. Okay I did and it was amazing, so please find the good in yourself and show us Dom reaction! Bye for now Meanie x.Author's Response: Haha. I am rather mean for doing that :D I'll try to get the next chapter posted as soon as possible so that you can see her reaction :) Aha, thanks :P
Dee, x Report Review
Loving your story and your pic really made me laugh, especially Mr. Weasley and his plugs. lol. Question, does the golden trio leave in your story like they do in Deathly hallows at the wedding? Bye for now x.Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, the pic was amazing but the credit goes to photobucket :).
Anyway, I'm not going to tell you what happens :P, but think...what was it that the trio went looking for in deathy hallows? And I've already mentioned who's looking for those in this story and it's not the trio.
I LOVE SKINS! Your banner got me, it's an amazingly interesting story you have, you know. If you like Effy, she is in a new movie in the UK and in a song video called when the sky falls, IT'S AWESOME!! I'm frilled to sea how quick you have gotten another chapter up. Bye for now x.Author's Response: I love Skins too ^^,
I'll make sure to check that out, but thank you for reading and reviewing and enjoying the story :) Thanks for the lovely review! Report Review
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