Reading Reviews From Member: Marauder_at_heart1996
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Review #1, by Marauder_at_heart1996Fantastic Staff and Where to Find Them: Welcome Aboard

16th August 2010:
Lovely, intriguing first chapter. Look forward to reading the rest! :)

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Review #2, by Marauder_at_heart1996Bloodlust: Hot Mess

18th February 2010:
I have really loved this story so far, and this chapter was great! Nice to see Clementine having a bit of fun!
Please update soon, I can't wait to find out who the mysterious person in her bedroom was!
I liked the memory of when she was first bitten, a few more of those would be good, to help us gain a better understanding of Clementine 'before and after'.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the great review and suggestion! I'll definitely keep that in mind. New chapter will be up soon, I've almost finished writing it :)

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Review #3, by Marauder_at_heart1996Bloodlust: Baby Steps

11th February 2010:
Loved this chapter, especially the interaction between Sirius and Clementine.
"It's sexy, isn't it?"
"Absolutely. It's robust and sensual." !!!
Haha. Keep up the good work! This story is amazing so far!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's always great to receive wonderful reviews :)

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Review #4, by Marauder_at_heart1996Lady Malfoy: Misdirections

6th February 2010:
Wow, your story so far is fantastic!
I love your constant plot twists - I am at the edge of my seat, desperate to know what happens next! This is a really good plot, and the way you portray your characters in an interesting yet realistic way makes this such a powerful story. You're an excellent writer, especially when it comes to describing Draco and Hermione's emotions. Please keep writing, I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Review #5, by Marauder_at_heart1996Unthinkable Thoughts : Things That Weren't

8th January 2010:
Wow. That was so powerful!
I loved this story, you are an amazing writer and the emotion and heartache you conveyed in this chapter - for both Draco and Hermione - was truly overwhelming.
I really enjoyed the way you stayed true to the characters as much as possible to make the plot believable, but you still showed different sides to them, especially Draco. I found myself sympathising with them along the way, even when Draco was being a huge prat, and the way you switched between their POVs made the story flow along incredibly well.
It's so refreshing to read a different and more realistic Dramione love story and while I was upset that there was no happy ending, I don't think the story would have been quite the same otherwise.
I look forward to the epilogue!

Ruby x

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