I just read all eight chapters and I'm in love! I cannot wait for more, girly! Hopefully you'll update soon. Such lovely writing!
- Lexi

Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing this story :) A new chapter should be up soon :)

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So, what caught my attention was your hilarious story description. I sat here at my computer laughing at the simple line of,'I have no sex appeal', for god knows how long! Lovely story and I can't wait for more! I just posted an Albus.OC story in the que so when it is up i'd love for you to check it out. This made me smile though i'm curious, is this an Albus or James end up? Love them both so I don't care but still just curious :)

Author's Response: Actually I'm afraid I can't reveal who she'll end up with :p Sorry
And thank you, I spent so many times changing the story description I think I'm finally satisfied with it. Less is better right? And thank you, I love that you liked it:)
And yes I checked your story out. Your plots are amazing. You're an awesome writer ^_^
I just love your plotlines :)

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There are alot of mistakes no offense. No need for bolding. Overall I believe I will continue on to the next chapter. Hopefully the next chapters are a bit more clearer.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, from what i have heard they aren't much more of a help but i'm diligently working on clearing them up. So I hope that you stick with the story, Thanks for pointing out the Mistakes.

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This is so cute!
I love the ending

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed. :)

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Im leaving reviews every chapter or so.
I really liked this one.
Though I would have liked Ron to round on scorpius

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That was so hilarious!
I know im a bit late reading this, but I heard it was amazing.
I love how she explained what would happen to her family, it was to funny (;

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I love this! very goood! :D
My first chapter to my JAMES{ll}/ OC isn't approved yet, sadly. I stopped writing last year but I am continuing again now. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! And that's cool, I'll be sure to check it out sometime. :)

ash

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Sad but wonderful (:

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)

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I love this! (:Ineedmoree!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I appreciate it!

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Its a nice beginging, but you should try to be a bit more clearer sometimes :]

Author's Response: i'm so sorry for not replying earlier. actually i got pretty busy with my work so couldnt write further. but now tht i've read ur opinion i'm sure gonna try. thanx once again for reading and reviewing. take care :)

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So i have read this whole story already but however just in case you make some changes i am going to keep checking it out! :]So here are some tips just to make it a bit 'better'
1. When you have people talking it is quiet confusing. It looks as if you forgot to include some sentences from example with the hat talking, you never said hermione didn't want to be in slytherin.
2. Thus reading this, i understand the whole plot, however you should try to elaborate your writing style. For example i am the type of person who enjoys to either right it as if i am explaining a old tail i never told or write in third person.
3. Keep up the work, and never loose hope.
And also maybe you should get a banner, if usually attracts peoples attention :)
Check out my stuff and review, love.

Author's Response: Thanks but since im working on the sequel and other stories I won't be fixing this one! but i will keep it in mind as i write the ones im writing!

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Hello. :) I am just trying to finish my first chapter of a sirius/OC story so i am reading a couple, mine is going to be based of the song Trouble by nevershoutnever (you should hear it if you haven't it is a great song) I wanted to let oyu know, that so far i like the story. I think it is interesting. :] WEll i am going to continue reading. I think it is always nice to leave a review if i have time, so here you go,.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review...I quite enjoy them...lul

I hope your story goes well, I'm sure I've heard Trouble, it does sound familiar...I'll look it up when I get the chance...

Thank you again for reviewing!! Enjoy the rest of the story!

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GREAT. :] Sorry not a big review but i am in a bit of a rush sorry! 9/10

Author's Response: haha it's ok.any review is a nice review!

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Okay, so i love it! :] I know i am late with reading but i am going to read the next chapter and so on! :] You are a great writer just try to re-read and in the begining it was a bit odd, because you were expressing your view on her but thats okay! 10/10 rate and review my stuff?> I just submited a new story! not approved yet but it wil be soon! :D

Author's Response: Thank you! It's better late than never, in my point of view! I would love to read your story! and I hope you enjoyed the rest of mine!

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Lovley, i love how blaise acted in this chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you! More to come!

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Ahmazing :) I understand i am really late reading this but my close friend recamended it to me and now i know why :) Really great cant wait to read more. I love Dramione and Blaise Zabini is one of my favorite characters, so you must know me so well :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad your friend recommended it to you! I take great pride in my work so when I hear that people like it, I get really happy and inspired to write more. I'll be updating soon so keep an eye out!

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I Love it :) I know i dont review really often i only review if i have time. I wanted to apoligize for not reviewing more often for this great story. You are truley talented and i am jelous. Non of my stories are even have good then yours. You keep the reader begging for more. you leave us with cliffhangers and questions to put together. Honestly i am in love with draco and i think him and hermione are the forbidden love ment to be :)

Author's Response: Hello lovestings! I cannot think of a truer username :). I so appreciate your support. You are much, much to kind to me. I love your passion as a Dramione shipper, and I completely agree with you (but you cannot tell them I think so :). Never be disappointed in your own work - no one is perfect as a writer and practice is everything. Never ever quit :) Thank you for being so wonderful and I hope your New Year is fantastic. xoxo

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Oh My gosh! This is so amazing! You are so talented! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm truly thrilled that you enjoyed! :) Have an amazing New Year! xoxo

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Well i will tell you honestly it was okay. There were lots of typos and miss-wording sentenses here to. Sorry if i sound rude. I dont think the concept was that brilliant but it was enjoyable to read, if you could r/r mine.

Author's Response: I'll r/r yours now, you were not being rude just honest.

I wrote it along time ago and put it up to see what kind of responce it would get.

thanks - Sarah

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Great chapter. I think i know what is going to happen. Just a guess of course. I think that your plot is also a good one. I can't wait for Draco to enter the story. I also just wanted to say love you story blood red, i believe it is called? Anywhoes i thnk it was great and could you please review my stories??

Author's Response: im sorry, i abandoned this story...but thanks for the review! and im glad you like my other story, and yes it is called blood red.and yes i'll review your stories.

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Beautiful Chapter!! I really would love for hermione to forgive draco it would be so wonderful. I love the role Ginny played in this chappter. Especialy the part at the end, 'invite me to the wedding', hehe you are just so special. You are super creative! You are very talented when it comes to writing! Great acciement i am so happy for you. :) I have reviewed your stories so i helped!! :DDD Anywhoss were are you from in Britan,i have been there and love it there :) and cue Jude Law, love it

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you thought it was beautiful I wasn't exactly going for that more like humour with a bit of monolouge- alright a lot of monolouge from Draco but oh well.
Ginny I love to work with 'cos she's just such an interesting character. I nearly always end up making her quite headstrong, funny and understanding with a bit of revengence thrown in for a bit of fun and good measure.
Yeah I thought that'd get a few laughs and it seemed to have worked.
Thank you so much for telling me that I'm talented at writing I always worry when I put a chapter out because I don't think people will like it for some reason or another.
Yeah you have helped me by reviewing and I am so grateful so thank you so, so much for that.
Surrey, England and Jude Law I know he's a lot older than I am but oh he's fit. Surrey's where they filmed The Holiday which is why I may just like it so much. Right rambling again so, thanks again for the reviews they really do mean a lot to me so thank you,
icecrystal
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AHH-MAZING! I have been waiting for this chapter since ages ago it feels! :) I swear i have been stalking you page looking if you updated. When i saw you did i almost jumped out of my seet! This was a great chapter. :) You really are an amazing writer. :) I really dont want this to end. :'( Do you think you can write a second story for it? I would read it and i know alot of others would to. I think everyone was great and i wonder what Pansy did? Maybe she is sueing them!! Or maybe she has an arranged marriage with draco!? I would scream about the last one,hehe. Well wonderful write more. :) LS

Author's Response: Thank youu! hahaha, aw, that is the sweetest thing ever!
I'm so happy to hear that you like it so much.

I've been thinking about a sequal, but I don't think it's going to happen, I mean.. It will probably feel finished. But I'm not saying no, but I doubt that it will happen. I would have to come up with a killer plot! xD

Hm, what did Pansy do? Or what is she planning to doo?

Thank you!
- Cathy

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Wonderful. I only found on typo so i think you did really good. I don't think there was any spelling errors, however i get spell for my life. :] Smashing chapter and i love how the boys acted/ Harry was so cocky thinking he got straight of the bat, NOT. Oh wonderful and quite funny. I was drinking hot chocolate while reading and i bet you would have laughed at me. When i read about there mouth dropping i thought it was so funny cause i pictured the boys like that. I started laughing and almost spilled my WHOLE cup on me!

Any ways well written, and great. I dont know why you said you were not good at these kinda openers?? I thought it was quite splended. :] I bet if my friend Megan was here she would loved it. She is a die hard Harry Potter fan but she like i love the idea of Dramione.Isn't that such a cute couple name?? Well i am going to leave and sorry for such a long review but i loved it.

Author's Response: wow thanks so muchh! that really is so sweet!
im soo soo glad you like it!
sorry for the short response :/
but this review means a lot to me, thank you so much

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Great! You wrote this very propper and no spelling misteaks! :) In the begining it was a bit tense for my taste but when it got more into it i started to enjoy it. I Was just wondering why hermione GRAGERS parents last name was not GRANGER. Sorry for sounding like someone a bit to demanding but well i kinda am,hehe. However i love

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I have been waiting for this chapter since forever! :) You are an amazing writer and i enjoyed this alot. The clubbing scene was not bad at all, it was rather good. I loved how Hermione Decribed Draco not knowing who he was. Smashing chapter, you write so fluently and truthfull. Sorry for my odd form of talking, just got back from england and i still have there.sence of speaking stuck with meh. Well any whoss very wonderful. if you have a chance i have two new stories one has its first chapter pending and the other has there first chapter pending and then i have one storie that has one chapter up and i hope that one of my chapters will be published today.

Author's Response: I'm so sorry it took so long it was meant to be ready for you guys on the 19/11/2009 but it wasn't because I had to put a subtance of use on my warnings because they were drinking so much.
Thank you for telling me I'm an amazing writer-I think you just made my day!- I try and keep everything fluent and I am a very truthful person which is why I'll say when I haven't had any experience ie of clubbing because then it gives me some leyway in being able to edit it at a later date if people say or give me advice as to how to improve it.
I decided it would be a wonderful little twist if Hermione was describing a guy who in her befuddled state was like Draco and then the readers discovering it was. But that was always the intention.
Are you saying us English confuse the Americans? You'll have to find me on the forums and tell me what you thought of our small island! And of course I'll have a look at your stories I always see whether any of my reviewers have stories because it interests me to see what they normally write.
So thanks for the wonderful review and once I've answered the rest of them I'll have a look at your stories.
icecrystal
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