nice, i loved it, keep up the brilliant work, its really good. Report Review
it is really good! i love it! well done, keep the brilliant work up!
cant wait for the next one! xD
lots of love melanie Report Review
bahahahhahahaaa, nice. love it.
keep up the brilliant work!Author's Response: Thank you :D
Next chapter is up :) Report Review
ohh please continue writing this story! it is so brilliant and i miss it alot!!Author's Response: Thank you! I really hope to finish this story sometime soon - maybe during my next break? If I'm not snowed under with schoolwork, that is. Glad to know you liked the story, though! Report Review
OMGGG!!! QUICK! PUT THE NEXT ONE UP!Author's Response: It's up :) Report Review
wow i love it so far, shes quite moody but its really good. keep writing it please i would love to read more...
I love lupin, he and bellatrix r my fav characters.
check out my fan fictions if u like, they arint as good as this tho, i make banners, if u would like me to make u a banner for this fan fiction just email me at mellaluna95 at hotmail dot com.
thanks for writing this, its really good. lots of love melanie.Author's Response: I kinda used my own name. Mostly because I couldn't think of a name. Report Review
love it, the ending was brilliant!Author's Response: Aww, thank you! Report Review
soo sad, i loved it thoughAuthor's Response: thank you!! Report Review
i loved it, keep up the brilliant work! thanks heaps for a wonderful read.
lots of love melanieAuthor's Response: Thanky youu :D :D :D
lots of love, AC Report Review
haha loveee it! its brilliant. thanks heapsAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
i love it so far, its really funny, thanks heaps. Report Review
i love it so much, its brilliant! thanks heapsAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
omgg *tear* its almost over! this fan fiction is one of the best i've ever read, i've been printing it out to take to school to read - i've been getting some funny looks on the train and at school but its totally worth it! thank you so much for wrighting this, its amazing, i like wrighting fan fics aswell but i get bored of it after a day or two, so i only wright short ones, you're amazingly dedicated.
i love what you have done with peter, like i said before, most fan fic's i've read has made him a horribal person, but this one if what i thorght would happen, you know?
thank you again!
lots of love melanieAuthor's Response: Yeah, it's almost over. Wow, you've been printing it out? That's going to be a lot of paper. My mom asked me to print it out for her and I was like 'You want me to print almost 700 pages?' At least you're writing, that's what counts!
I couldn't picture being evil so early on, but now he definitely is. Thanks for reading! Report Review
i love it, pleasee keep wrighting it, its so hard to find such a brilliant weasley twins fan fic!Author's Response: thank you so much! i'm so glad you enjoyed it :D Report Review
this fan fiction is so brilliant, thank you so much, i love it heaps, i've been staying up wayy too long reading it.Author's Response: Ha, I've done that before reading fanfiction. Thanks for reading! Report Review
this story is so brilliant so far, i love it so much, thank you. you are such a commited author, its amazing. i also love how u didnt make peter seem like a horribal person that people do in alot of other fan fictions i've read, because he wouldnt have really been horribal if james sirius ad remus had been friends with him. if u kno what i mean :P:P this fan fiction is wonderful, its hard to find a story as good as this and i am amaze u havent won a award for this yet. thank you again.Author's Response: It bugs me when Peter is portrayed as a horrible person from the start because, like you said, he couldn't have always been if James, Sirius and Remus were friends with him. You'll see how he falls to the Death Eaters as the story goes on. Thanks for reading! Report Review
nawww, this chapter was brilliant. keep up the good workAuthor's Response: :) thank you so much :D Report Review
i love it so much! its way to hard to find a good fanfic about remus, thx heaps, keep up the good work and pleeeaassse keep wrighting it!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
lloovveedd itt! xD omggg when will she tell them?!?!!?!?!?!
thx heaps for the fan fiction, its brilliant, keep up the awsome work! do u know how much longer ur doing this fan fiction? like how meny more chapters? ... i dont want it to end! its always sad when a brilliat fan fiction / book endsAuthor's Response: Ahha, You'll have to wait and see :P
Thank you so much! The current chapter estimate is about 44 which means that I'll be here for a long time yet! Thank you so much for the review :D Report Review
omgomgomg lovee itt! just started reading it and i cant wait for the next chapter! suspencful! its brilliant, one of the best fan fictions i've read Report Review
brilliant! i love the humor and how its about the weasley twins :D:D
cant wait for the next chapter!!! . really! cant wait!
keep up the awsome work, thanks heaps for wrighting this i love it!Author's Response: Wow, thank you! Hopefully I'll get around to posting the next chapter soon - thanks heaps for the review! Report Review
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