you write what jk didn't.

Author's Response: I think this is a compliment? If so, thank you so much!

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seriously you do such a good job for Percy- I want to punch him, he makes my blood turn. hahah I know it is good writing when I actually get a physical reaction from a character.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I'm glad you think I've done Percy justice and are enjoying the story still. That makes me so happy to hear. Hope you enjoy the rest of it!

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bloody percy- drives me inssannneee

Author's Response: Hahahah! I love writing Percy, though. It's odd, because I never really felt a pull toward him until I started writing him in this fanfic. Thanks for reading!

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hahah this is perfect

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o i am crying. seriously. you re really good at this hahah- i started tearing up at seamus finnegan, got worse at the mr smittens flashback with the photo, the dinner and now this...

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i am only halfway through, but the bit with Seamus- great! Really emphasised the decision. Had to quickly write this- got to get back to it!

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love it- i want moments like this- with out that friggin drama but the nice moments with someone you love

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ah shit is going to get so real right after this chapter, silly rose

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This was fantastic, I was absolutely compelled the whole time, damnit! I have an essay due tomorrow hahaha, ah weelll I couldn't think of a better way to spend my time. It really was fantastic.
One of the best I have read on this site-- and golly I have read alot of them :)

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that was the best chapter-
James is such a good friend,
and the last line is the bombdizzle.
Wowza

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Hey,
Okay, you need to do some editing- creating paragraphs rather than HUGE chunks of dense text, having a more consistent flow of tense and story line etc. Also some parts- like Imogen's potential rape were really bizarre- what did it achieve exactly? if you decide it's necessary you might want to introduce was it Nott and Avery(?) as bad, dangerous, threatening blokes from the very beginning...
Just some advice to make it better, good though.

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ooh, i'll be your girlfriend charlie...

Author's Response: Haha! Wouldn't we all love to be? :P Thank you for the review!

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LOVE IT! Eliza is wonderful. And her relationships with people were lovely, she is very real, her floating is endearing. i really liked it.

Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews! I'm beyond happy that you loved this story and Eliza. Thanks you
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this is going to be good, i am already excited to see what can happen to this little girl. I am still waiting for my letter, ahahhaha

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oh,
the holding hand, and grabbing her wrist. cute. i love ow/oc stories and this is such a nice one

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Glad you like it :)

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I think it is brilliant, but I reckon the next chapter should be Sirius' point of view recapping his intake on what has happened. The first time they say each other, the "we can't be friends" confrontation, the duel, the friends chat. Just to catch up on his head space. Just a thought? Brilliant though,
x

Author's Response: that's true, we're back on not knowing what Sirius is thinking... but the way I've got it planned out in my head it's going to be Dee for a little while I think... but I'll bear that in mind! thanks for reviewing

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this story is the best in the whole entire world.
also susie makes me think of christina from greys anatomy- if you know who that is?
it is wicked you are the bomb shizzle fo nizzle
xx

Author's Response: Christina? Seriously? :D I LOVE Grey's Anatomy, but seriously? CHRISTINA!? Wow, that's awesome, I LOVE Christina, she's just hilarious xD I'm just curious as to HOW Susie is like Christina?

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hahahah
"have you died yet?"
'no" as she trys to suffocate herself.
i love this exchange between them,hilarious.
Nice I love it already!

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heavy days. wowee, you wrote the epilogue realy well.
congratulations
jb

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this is my favourite chapter of all time

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okay and this chapter, all of its pretty bloody brill

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Stick to Dee for sequel, but definately have Sirius in there somewhere. Or have it in Dee;s POV but have her have really accurate observations on what she thinks he is feeling. It is more mysterious and beautiful when Sirius finally will explain what he was feeling in detail as he explain's it to her or something? Does that make sense?
Continue fowards minions it is brilliant!
x

Author's Response: eah that sounds about right... apart from it;s dee! she doesnt have an accurate idea of how he's feeling ever! but yeah i get what you mean about him explaining it to her. awesome. thank you!



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keep writing please.
quickk.
it is so good and man oh man your left it hanging!!
its excellent!PLEASE!
xx

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keep writing crazy kid this is wicked. Fantastic imagination, i wish i could could do something as good as this!!!woweee... wicked shizzle mo fizzle nizzle

jb

Author's Response: Thank you!

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hahahahah the past two cahpters have been absolutely hilarious!!hahha
crazy times..

Author's Response: Thank you!

~LB

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