I like the story so far. It's definately not a plot that has been done before. Teddy's very interesting, yes,but you never completely finished the thought on why Victorie hates water.Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you think it's original and like Teddy. (: Victorie's fear of water will be revealed soon, until then just keep putting the hints togethert. I'll update soon- I'm just stuck on a bit at the end of the fifth chapter. Thanks again for your review!! Report Review
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