Hey this is CessZ from the forums for your review...sorry I'm so late!!! :(
I really loved your story..Ginny's feelings are shown well as well as the Molly-Ginny connection is amazingly portrayed...I really loved how you've incorporated the story of the roofwalker in your story..I would really like to read this story from Ginny's POV!!!

Love

~CessZ

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for this! :D

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Hey its CessZ from the forums with your requested review!

Firstly I want to congratulate you...this is a way better executed one-shot!

I love the way you have portrayed Narcissa. I especially love the part where she is kind to the house-elf overwhelmed with her own happiness of being a mother.

You have understood Narcissa's character well and from what we know about her you have perfectly characterized her.

Just get a beta and iron out a few grammatical errors and vola! you have a perfect chapter! :)

~CessZ

Author's Response: Hey Cess!

Thanks a lot for your awesome review! This one surely made my day =)

I've already got a beta and the fic is in the editing process!

Thanks a lot once again! I'm glad you think that I did justice to Narcissa's character =D

Cheers!
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Hey it's CessZ from the forums with your review!

I really like the concept of the story and it is very sweet with the happy ending and all but I feel there are some execution mistakes.

Firstly why does Rose call everyone with their full names? I feel full names are just used to portray when the characters are angry with someone.

Secondly in terms of believability I feel a guy ditching a girl on their wedding day for her close cousin and the girl not having any major problem with it is a little unbelievable. And he family agreeing to it is really unbelievable. Rather if you could write something about their reactions and Scorpius apologizing to Lily and convincing her otherwise would be a bit more believable.

But in the end I love happy endings and really enjoyed your story.

Thanks for requesting.

~CessZ

Author's Response: Hey Cess!

Thanks a lot for your valuable review! I'll write out a sequel with a series of one-shots from all the major characters' POV and make sure I put in the apology in there! thanks a lot for your advice!

Thank you once again!

cheers!
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WOW!!
That was amazing. The feelings, the drama and even the emotions are well dealt with. The threat hanging over their heads and how she deals with it is amazing.

There are a few grammatical errors. Just minor ones, so if you just correct them the story is well to go! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I wandered a bit from canon on the time line, but it just made the story work so much better. It was a rough piece to write, but I'm kind of proud of how it turned out. :)

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W...O...W!!
Its SO emotionally touching!! I loved it!! :)
Keep up the good work!!!

~CessZ

Author's Response: Thanks so much! That means a lot :)

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So much thought for 8 prefects??? I had never thought it was so much pain!!! :P
Well written and the idea of the book showing the future titles of the prefects...AMAZING!!
cheers!

~CessZ

Author's Response: Thanks and yeah, so much thought... !
I'm glad you enjoyed it (even with all the spelling difficulties I had writting it...) !
I almost took out the "book thing" before posting it; I feared it would be to cheezy or something but I'm very happy I kept it in since it seems people enjoy it!
Thanks for the review!

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Narcissa and Rudolphus??
something really new!! :D
And the emotions and the use of the quote went in a flow and nothing seemed out of place! and the emotions were really well dealt with. Bravo!

~CessZ

Author's Response: Thanks CessZ! (: I'm really happy that you enjoyed it.

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WOW!!
that was SO romantic and yet so sad...the dance, the romance, the emotions are very well dealt with!
Amazing!!

~CessZ

Author's Response: It was sad, wasn't it? I swear, I'm actually a very happy person. I don't know why I write some very sad, emotional things, haha.

That's sweet of you say that you thought the dance, romance and emotions were dealt well with - it didn't feel that way while writing it, so it's always so humbling to know that a reader liked them!

Thanks so much,
Joop :)

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I dont know why I get the feeling I have read this earlier...it your novel a Sirius/OC??
I really love the way you have described her feelings and the character of Queen Carla gives off an aura of a very strong woman!!
Would love to read more!!

~CessZ

Author's Response: My novel isn't a Sirius/OC, but I have another one-shout up right now that is. It's the same OC as this one; Saleena, and it's called "Perfect"... Have you read that one, maybe?

This little excerpt here takes place right after Chapter 5 in my Novel; "All is NOT Fair in Love & War". If you're still interested in knowing more, you could always look that one over too, if you have some time... Saleena is in it off and on, but Draco is the Main Character in that one.

Thanks so much for the review, I'm glad you liked it!! :)
~Deana~

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This story is SO cute!!
The whole description of wedding and the incorporation of the quote was absolutely perfect...good job...keep up the good work!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it and I'm super glad you reviewed!

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Hey!
Awesome story.
In the next-gens that i have read Lucy and Molly were both uptight like Percy. NEVER fun-loving! glad to read them as normal girls!
Just a few spelling and grammar errors here and there but aside from it, its a perfect 10/10! :D

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you, I felt like they should both rebel a little from their father. Yeah, I'm not very good with grammar and spelling :P 10/10! Aw thank you soo much!!! You made my day!!
-Graceyn

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Damn I want Scorpus/Daisy to be O-V-E-R!!!
I jus can't wait to see some Sorose action!!!
pleas post soon!!! :D

P.S. i see chocolate worked!! :P

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Sirius!!!please wake him up in the next chapter!!! I really miss him...
Amazing chapter...The emotions were well dealt with, and the one on one with James was awesome!!! :)

Please don't take ages to post the next chapter!!

~CessZ

Author's Response: Hehe ;) He might wake up soon.
Thank you, I'm so glad you thought that!

I'll try not to :)

thanks for the review lovely!

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Oh my poor Sirius!!! :(
The feel of Azkaban is SO real I felt my hapiness go away!! :(
Sirius' angst, his self loathing makes ym heart go out to him...his thoughts on Peter's betrayal all being his fault are unreasonable but real...
You are an awesome writer!!

~CessZ

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Even though I do not like Snape I LOVE stories where he's in angst and that show his love for Lily in them!!!
I had always imagined what Severus would be like in the funeral...but I had NEVER expected him to take a beack seat...I had always imagined him up front, blaming James for the loss of his love, having an emotional day...so this was something very different...something I LOVED READING!!!

~CessZ

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WOW!
Remus is a complex person, and I find him the most difficult to characterize amongst the Marauders!!But your characterization was perfect...The pain is shown well...the uncertainity of future and the self respect are 2 things I've ALWAYS associated with Remus...and both have perfectly blended in with the story...
AMAZING!!

~CessZ

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Snape's love for Lily has always been a touchy subject for me...I feel most fics are not able to do justice to his love, his obsession...But you have amazingly understood the love and penned it (or typed it) down...the love for Lily, hate for Snape and Snape being a communal joke...everything falls into place perfectly!!
Bravo!!

~CessZ

Author's Response: Ok. Well. First of all, thank you so much for reading my little thing. Secondly, you mean you actually read the whole thing?

It was actually a little experiment of mine and I'm glad you appreciated it enough to leave a comment. Thanks so much for your kind words. I feel that most people don't give Snape the kind of sympathy that he deserves for what he lived through.

So thanks again! You made my day!

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That sure was funny!!
From cleaning a garage to proposing her?? :O
Ron sure is weird...but well I had never expected him to be elaborate...something awkward was always that I had expected from him!!! :P
And "the duck thinks quack"? how do they know? :P
Anyways great reading the story!!

~CessZ

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Collin is pretty much one of my favourite (other) cannon characters...The emotions of Mrs. Creevy, her thoughts and questions regarding her decision to let them go to Hogwarts and most of all her hesitance to hate magic all together is well dealt with...I would have loved it more if there was any information as to how Dennis died (I'm a pretty detail-oriented person! :P)
But seriously it was amazing...you've understood a mother's heart well!!

~CessZ

Author's Response: I'm happy to hear you liked it! I didn't want to get too much into detail about how Dennis died, just because I wanted to focus more on Mrs. Creevey's reaction. Thank you very much for reviewing, CessZ!

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Hey!
That was a pretty cool one-shot...though I found it a bit confusing...the timeline was a bit difficult to follow..But your in-depth analysis of love has made me re-think about my defination of love...and the use of amor...amazing!!!
Your description of her feelings...as a teenager, a little older and then an adult is really good and makes me (the reader) understand how the feelings and emotions change over a period of time...Well done!!!

~CessZ

Author's Response: Hey! I'm sorry you found it confusing... a lot of it is spent with her looking back on the many times she said "love." But I'm glad you liked it anyway!

Thanks for reviewing!

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WOW!!
I had never imagined a Slytherin to have such deep feelings...especially for a Hufflepuff!!!
The feelings, the theme and the atmosphere are well dealt with...Her hesitation is shown very well...I would love to read more...maybe events leading to this day and then a fall out???

Hoping to read more!!

~CessZ

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!

A sequel is in the works, but it deals with a lot more of the after than the before. If that makes sense. haha But it's not going to be all fluff :/ so I don't know how people will respond haha

Glad you liked it :)

PP

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Wow...that was something new...I had never thought much of Hermione having a normal pre-teen life before Hogwarts..and the magic...innovative!!! :)
LOVED IT!!!
~CessZ

Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it!! :)

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I'm laughing SO much that my parents think I've gone Loony!!
Bananas as wands??
Unicorns instead of brooms??
"I wanna be a peel?"
Confederation for Sunshine and Rainbows??
Where did you come up with such things from??? :O
lol I still can't stop laughing!!! *wipes tears from eyes*
This is THE BEST humour fic I've read...EVER!

~CessZ

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad that you found it funny! It was definitely a lot of fun to write and was so silly and ridiculous and it's awesome that readers enjoy this so much.

I actually came up with most of this through the antics during April Fool's on the forums this year. The events in this story closely resemble what happened on the forums and I suppose this is my tribute to the craziness.

Thank you for your review! I'm not too sure how well I can do humour without sarcasm, so it's nice to know that I'm not too horrible at it.

Joop :]

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That was the MOST touching story I've ever read!!
It was a perfect blend of joy & grief...The emotions were well dealt with & the characterisation of Cho was PERFECT!!!
I'm curious though, who is her fiance??

~CessZ

Author's Response: Aw, your compliments are making me blush! But I'm glad you liked it - the emotions and Cho's character gave me the most grief throughout this, so it's nice to know that it paid off!

JKR has mentioned that Cho married a muggle. I took that bit of information and created my own version of him. I chose to keep him nameless because I think that any extra detail would have been unnecessary. This story was about Cho and I think that introducing her fiance in his entirety would have taken the focus off her - hopefully it wasn't too confusing for you!

Thank you so much for your review,
Joop :]

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Aww!!! I love the romance!!!
Though in the start the flow was confusing and there are a few spelling and grammer errors here and there, I really enjoyed your story...Also you've made me curious about your other story and I'm gonna read it...sometime in the near future!!!
Loved it!!!

~CessZ

Author's Response: AWESOME!!! I'll look forwards to hearing your thoughts on "All is NOT Fair in Love & War" then too... Somewhere in the near future that is, lol! :p

I know about the grammar mistakes already. I've had this Beta'd since it was posted, I just haven't had the time to go back through and make all the corrections yet. (Fail, lol!) I will get to it tho... One of these days, haha! Thanks so much for reading!! I'm glad it piqued your interest in my novel!! THANKS!! =)

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