This is a really interesting story, I like it! You make Hermione's thoughts and emotions seem very real and believable. The plot holds a reader too (at least it holds me, hahaha). I love the way you presented Hermione and Ginny's friendship in the first chapter...I like that Ginny and Hermione are still friends even though Hermione and Ron are broken up. I hope you continue this story and I look forward to reading more of it! Report Review
I think this story has some really good potential. Interesting plot line and I like the characters. I'm interested to see more and see some of Fred and Amy's backstory! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much :) Report Review
I still love this! It was nice to see Lily and James, and to see Lily's reaction when she found out why Severus had done so much for Harry. And Lily's won thirteen times...she must have been really motivated to see Harry :)
I really enjoy this story. Thank you for writing!Author's Response: Lily's won thirteen times, and that means she's defeated thirteen people and subsequently had them killed. So yes, she is definitely motivated! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Report Review
I really like this story! Such an interesting plot line and concept. I don't know who to root for...I don't want any of these characters to cease to exist! I'm excited to keep reading :)Author's Response: It's going to be difficult to kill off a character who's already had to die once, that's for sure. I'm so glad that you liked it! I will update within a week or so. :) Report Review
I love this! It's such an interesting idea and so cute! :) I hope you keep on with this!Author's Response: I definately will. The next chapter will be a buildup of their friendship of their friendship and the hogwarts acceptance letter will come soon :) Report Review
I was so glad you reviewed me, I thought I'd come over and check out some things of yours! I really liked this little one-shot. Lily and James are my all-time favorites, and I really liked this portrayal of them. I loved how passionate James was about Lily, and how nervous he was about what she was going to say to him. He thinks she hates him...and she loves him. Love it.
Great job, congratulations!Author's Response: Aww :) Thanks! This was one of my favourite challenges to do, as it just SCREAMED James/Lily, and they are one of my favourite pairings :) Yeah, I wasn't sure whether they'd be friends or not in their seventh year, but I sorta went with the stereotype, but not so much that they're best mates. I love my little one shot :) [I hope that doesn't sound stuck-up..! S:]
Emily x x Report Review
"Does anyone here like Ron?" - This. This was awesome.
This had me in stitches laughing. Not to knock shippers at all (I ship a few occasionally unpopular and noncanon pairings), but I've never understood Dramione myself (or even where it came from). Some Dramione fics are admittedly very well written, but a lot of them are like this, except without sarcastic asides.
So hilarious. I really enjoyed this.Author's Response: Ah, I'm glad you thought so. That's normally the thought that always comes to mind when I'm looking for a good Ron/Hermione. I'm sure there are some good Dramiones, but most of them are pure junk.
I'm glad you liked this! Report Review
Ugh. This story, I love it. It's so pretty and heartbreaking and wonderful. I just found it today and read all the way through it and loved it, and I'm so glad Lily's feeling better now. Don't worry if updates take a while - quality matters!
Seriously. Beautifully written.Author's Response: Thank you so much! Honestly, I've been in such a rut with this story and you've really cheared me up about it. Thank you so much! :D
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Yay! As expected, I still like this. It's so cute! It's fun to see a different side of Fred and a little bit more of a lighthearted Hermione. Be careful you don't turn me into a Fremione shipper! Hahaha thanks for another good read :)Author's Response: Haha I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for all these great reviews, the next chapter is almost complete! Report Review
This is so sweet! Thanks so much for a great read :)Author's Response: Why, thankyou very much for a great response! :) Report Review
I really liked this! Fred/Hermione is never something I've thought about a lot, but looking at it I definitely think it could have worked in the books...if Fred hadn't had such a tragic ending D: They do seem like they would complement each other well - kudos to you for taking this little scrapped idea of JKR's and running with it!
Looking forward to more of this story! :) Report Review
Oh my goodness. I've been reading/creeping on your Unsinkable universe for ages and I positively love it. I probably ought to have left more reviews...
But this was heartbreaking and hopeful and beautiful and perfect. I love Reid/Cecilia in your stories and it always made me so sad the way they ended, but I suppose not everyone can get the happy ending at eighteen. I'm glad Reid found somebody who makes him happy at last, though; he deserves it.
And now this review is rambling and probably doesn't make any sense but whatever. I love these stories (you just make me care so freaking much about your OC's! hahaha). Thank you for your amazing work. :DAuthor's Response: Well I do love reviews ;) but I understand. I'm not the most dedicated reviewer myself these days, even of stories I really love.
It makes sense! Possibly because I'm a rambler as well, but hey it's all good. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story, and the bit of redemption for Reid. He wasted way too much time trying to re-create his relationship with Cecilia with all the wrong women, poor guy. Good thing he finally found Oriana. Thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
This story is so completely gorgeous and haunting and sad. Beautifully written. And I love the uniqueness of the plot! I hope more people read and review this story for you, it's really worth it. Thank you so much!Author's Response: Thank you so much. You just made my day! I'm really glad you enjoyed my story. Report Review
Precious. This is so sweet and I am in love with it. Makes me want to hug my daddy :)Author's Response: Thankyou for such a lovely review :) Leanne x Report Review
I really like this story idea! I feel the same way Camile does sometimes when I reread earlier books...if I see a character whose fate ends up being unfortunate, I get a little sad for them. I think this twist on an already familiar plot could go really fun places. Can't wait to read more! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your positive feedback, and I hope you stick with this!
I've rewritten this story since I was around 14, so hopefully this one will stick. Report Review
So I'm new-ish to HPFF and I stumbled across this story by accident the other day when I was looking through the alphabetical list. I started reading it and absolutely fell in love with it - honestly, I sat and read the whole thing through. When I saw that you updated, I was thrilled! This is an amazing story and I'm VERY excited to see how everything unfolds! Report Review
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