FRIENDS:D I love how you used that reference, that was awesome:) Can't wait til the next chapter!:DAuthor's Response: Haha I can't help it :) I LOVE FRIENDS. One of my favorite shows :) Thank you so much! Report Review
This story is amazing, I'm not even lying a single ounce. It's that good.
Like "Duck" did in this story (I LOVE that nickname xD) I have two essays due tomorrow. I'm going to die, honestly. But, I found this story. And I can honestly say it was more than worth my time.
Candice, I have to say, is one of (maybe my number one) favourite OC character I've read. She's just different than the rest of the OC's i've read over the years, and I liked that a lot. It seems like she's a real person, and that I can connect with her.
Anyways, I keep trying to find the next chapter, but the little chapter fairy won't show me:( I hope you update soon, and I hope everything is going good at home!:)Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Like you don't even know how big the smile on my face is right now . :D (I love that nickname too!) I'm glad it was worth your time but finish you essays! ;) (I know the feeling though I had an essay and 80 pages to do for tomorrow and I didn't do them until 10 minutes ago xd) I'm so happy that you like her! I try really hard to make her as real as possible . :) the chapter fairy has school tomorrow xd but if I didn't I would stay up all night writing the next chapter but I can't :( ahah and everything is great! thank you I hope the same for you as well. :)
thank you for the great review! :D Report Review
:D I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter to see James's reaction to all of this, that's ought to give me a laugh or two:)Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter's up, hope you get a laugh or two :) Report Review
I didn't review for so many chapters...I'm sorryD: I just got...drawn in.
I'm happy that they kissed in this chapter, because some other authors I know put cliffies out during the queue closure to torture their readers. This one isn't too much of a cliffie, barely even is one, but it still leaves me wondering.
I can't wait for the next chapter to come out:)
Happy new year (well, three days late, but whatever:)Author's Response: Haha, don't worry about it! The fact that you took the time to review even once is so kind of you! I'm glad that I could draw you in :D
I don't think I would have been able to hold out any longer for the kiss. It's funny that you think it's not much of a cliffie, because a lot of people seem to think it is ;p Well, whatever it is, the main point was to keep you wondering (which it did!).
Thanks for all the wonderful reviews! Happy January 3rd! Report Review
Fluff is amazing.
That's all.Author's Response: I agree.
back to school party? o.O I'm intrigued. I loved the detention scene by the way:)Author's Response: Yup. Back to school party. BE INTRIGUED. And the detention scene was fun to write. Thanks for the review :D Report Review
That. was. AMAZING.
It's one in the morning where I live, and I'm up, laughing too loud for what time it is. I'm surprised I haven't woken anybody up:)
Next chapter? I think so;DAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm glad that I could make you laugh (at one in the morning). Don't worry, I do it all the time. Thanks for the review! Report Review
I normally hate introductions, but your's were rather fun to read!:) I liked it, I shall read the next chapter.Author's Response: Oh, good. I'm glad you liked it. Introductions are always the hardest for me. Thanks for the review! Report Review
I've never read a story like this, and I must say that I have read a lot of interesting fics over the years:P
I mainly decided to read it because of three reasons:) 1) James Potter II is my weakness. My god-given weakness, I swear. 2) I read the first chapter, and it was great quality writing. It was better quality than I usually read, so I was rather excited about that. 3) I can *partially* relate to Corrin over here, and it just felt like a connection I guess...but it's not like I was teased relentlessly like she was, that was rather brutal! And I know that she may be overreacting a bit, but I've gone through some of it and it's hard. I see where she's coming from on this one.
Summary of reason three was I'm team Corrin on this one, that's the main point of that;D And I'm on team James too, he's amazing. I know that he teased her back in the day and made her feel that way, but he's apologizing for everything now. I think that he'll make it up to her, one way or another. And I'm just excited that they've already snogged. Usually I have to wait FOREVER for that, but it's already happened, so I am HAPPY:D
I like to rant on reviews. ALL. THE. TIME.
And as a fellow fanfiction author, I always like reviews like this (the incredibly long ones)...I'm sorry if you don't. I love responding to reviews, and though the people that say 'love it' are amazing, it's hard to respond to sometimes... I hope I'm not boring you...onto the next subject? Yeah, sounds good.
Also, I am so sorry I only reviewed for two chapters. I always wish the day that someone reviews for every chapter, but I honestly couldn't stop and do it. The next chapter was calling me! I swear it was agony to watch my slow internet go incredibly slow. It ALWAYS happens when I'm reading a good story. It just senses 'good story' and doesn't work>.<
Rant= almost over;D
Good luck with your story writing and everything else happening:)
Oh yeah, and Happy New Year:)Author's Response: I'm so happy you decided to read this story! I love knowing what causes people to read my stories because half the time I can't figure out why. James Potter ii is totally my weakness too! And I can't believe you thought my first chapter was well-written, I still cringe when I read it over.
I think everyone at some point can relate to Corinne, since just about everyone has been bullied. Some might get bullied more than others, but the feelings and the terrible thoughts stay with you, no matter how much space is between it.
So I think that's probably why it's hard for Corinne to accept that James is trying to apologize. It just seems kind of degrading to act as though an apology can make up for everything. But I'm glad you are on team James, because half the time I'm worried people hate him. And yes I decided to make them snog early in the story, because it makes things easier that way.
I don't mind that you rant on reviews! I rant on my responses to reviews all the time :) I love long reviews because I find them very helpful and reading them makes me happy.
And don't apologize for only reviewing twice! I am just happy you like the story so much that you kept on reading it :) That's the best satisfaction a writer can get!
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Best. Chapter. EVER.
That's all I wanted to say. Now on to the next chapter!Author's Response: Ahh thank you :)
That chapter was actually one of the most fun for me to write, since I'd had it planned in my head since I first started the story.
Thanks for reviewing!
-Rebecca Report Review
I usually don't read fanfictions on this sight during the queue closure, because I know that if I find an amazing one (like this one), the chapter will not be out for a while. Which makes me sad. I feel like a child forced to go shopping with his mother, when she said he had to wait for his ice cream until she's done shopping. And we all know that's going to take forever, cause the cashier does all these things to slow down the process...
ANYWAYS. I love this fic! With a passion! It's probably one of (or maybe THE best) James/OC fanfic I've read. I love Tiffany, she's hilarious. I could myself laughing in front of my family a few times, and they looked at me like I was insane. But, most of all, I love James. I've always had a liking towards him, but I love how you write him. It's like you read my mind on that one:) I wish they wrote fanfiction about fanfiction sometimes. Honestly, I would read fanfiction about this story in a heartbeat.
Well, sorry about my little rant about little kids...and ice cream...and Tiffany...and James (Who are the couple that I am dying to see kiss, honestly.) So, I hope you have good things in store for us readers:)
Oh, and happy new year:) Report Review
I read this word for word in about an hour...and I loved it!:) Though I am a Harry and Ginny shipper, I didn't mind the Harry/Rayne relationship as you started this story before Harry and Ginny were ever together:) Also, I found it a bit cute:)
Also,I realize that there is going to be no epilogue...it's been quite a while since you've updated, and I respect that:) You seem busy, and I hope that everything's been good for you in your life. This was a fantastic story, and I wish you luck:) Report Review
I just had to read this over again. It just seemed fit, it's the holiday season, why not read some Artemis/James mistletoe right?:)
Can't wait for an update:) Report Review
I'm here with the long overdue review, I'm sorry it took this long for me to read it, I've been booked :(
But I'm here now, and that's what counts:D
And I quite liked it:) I like how you go through each couple, I thought that was a good idea, and not focusing on one main couple. Gets a better audience that way:D
I'll be back for more:)
HarryandGinnyForEverAuthor's Response: :D I'm glad you'll be back for more! And don't worry about being so long, I'm pretty booked too, and I really shouldn't be on here now, but I had to check up on it :) I'm glad you liked me going through couples, I was slightly worried it'd be too much, and I'd need to narrow it down to a few. I really like writing different characters though, so I'm happy you like it!
Thanks for the review! Report Review
Hi:) I'm here like you asked, if someone asks for a read, I just can't help but say yes:P
Now, I'm still a learning writer also, so what I've learned is from other learning writers as well...so it's all a circle really.
I can tell that you are a massive Harry Potter fan, as most of us are, and there's nothing wrong with that (i'm one too, just saying :P) But when it comes to fanfiction, people really like to read about the characters and their adventures. Now there are original characters that you can make into the story, and it's quite fun to do that. I've disguised myself and my friends into multiple scenarios, but it's inside the world of Harry Potter and it’s characters, not actual people.
When I chose what fan fiction to read, I chose to read the ones that pull me in. I check the number of reviews sometimes, just for fun, but it doesn't affect it. With this story, I'm sad to say, it really only appeals to you and your friend that are in the story, because the summary doesn't quite pull me in, as a reader.
It was quite a fun read though, your writing is a lot better than some of the others I've seen on the site, but the story doesn't quite appeal to the masses.
I don't know how old you are and how committed you are to writing yet, but stories need work. Especially all of mine:P I'm fourteen, and I started my story when I was 12 years old. When I hit maybe early 13's, I really got interested in the writing and the dialogue of British folks and all of that. It helps dramatically. Trust me.
NOW. Please please please do not get discouraged by this. I hopefully worded this as best I could without trying to be hurtful, which none of it is really, everyone gets these types of reviews (I’ve gotten multiple) If I discouraged or hurt you in anyway, please forgive me, I’m only trying to help. Now, I’m the type of person who helps out, so if you ever need me, just post a review on one of my stories and I’ll give you my email or something. Just don’t ever lose faith in a story; your imagination takes you to wondrous places that you never thought possible.
*I apologize for the random symbols, I just don't have the time to go back and fix them.Author's Response: thank you so much that was PERFECT constructive criticism and i will take it on board. i will probs write another story bout h/g just like your story. they are so cute! thanks again!!
ps i am 15 Report Review
Gosh, I love this story:) And I forgive you by the way, I get writer's block ALL THE TIME-.- I even have it right now...for two of my three stories, which is never good:P So I LOVED IT:) Can't wait for the next chapter.
(And I laugh hysterically at the part about an overly tanned oompa loompa, I don't know if you know Snooki from Jersey Shore...I think you do since she is exactly that;) haha) Report Review
Great chapter :D I love it, can't wait for the next one! *first review for this chappie :D Yay:)
I've seen the final movie :'( Cried every time I've seen it since then. I looked like a panda once I got out of the theatre after the midnight premiere xP haha
10/10 :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! The final movie was so incredible and it was just the perfect ending to a perfect series. JK Rowling is amazing! Report Review
To be honest, this was the one I was most looking forward to reading. The title and summary just grabbed me, and I got more than I thought I would when I read it, which is a great thing:) I really really like it, and I hope that you write more oneshots that I can read ;)Author's Response: I was so happy with the summary on this one so I was really pleased you pointed that out! Thanks for being super!
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Gosh! This is really well done Lizzie, I really enjoyed it :D It's hard to write like this, no dialogue and stuff and you did really, really well :D
Bug:)Author's Response: Thank you, you are super! I'm so happy you liked it!
Lizzie Report Review
I really liked this one:) I was a bit shocked when Harry didn't say it back, but that's practically the whole entire point of the story and it was a really good story nonetheless :D
BugAuthor's Response: It's not that he didn't love Ginny, it's more of I'm just shocked thing. I really think Andromeda had a point with "Harry might want to be more lax" so I hope I didn't make Harry sound evil.
Lizzie Report Review
I love you...I thought I should just let you know :) You are my favourite writer here on HPFF, and you got me into a bunch of couples that I didn't really read before :D
Oh yeah, James and Artemis, are my new favourite Fanfic couple, no joke. I keep rereading the one scene where he kisses her. I love it!
Please update quickly, I left you a review ;) haha Report Review
Now I don't hate her really, I'm just happy that she's actually kissing him back! If she didn't, she would have NO feelings whatsoever, but at least that shows something...
I don't know, it's late at night and my mind wanders...
GREAT STORY! NEXT CHAPTER! Report Review
I am truly DYING to write you a review :D I love this story, and I am going to read it all tonight! I am determined, and I only have about two hours...let's do this! Report Review
I like this one as much as the other one :D haha(: You've gotten me into Lily/James now... gosh, I love you :P aha Report Review
I love love love love love love this story(: Report Review
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